Thank you for the reviews of chapter 1 Kila Leonheart, I got a lot of positivity feedback and I really appreciate it. The OC SUBMISSIONS are currently closed right now.
Because I feel like when I try fit in all the oc's in one chapter it's clustered and hard to remember all of them but I'm looking for some villain oc's.
PS: Personalities must be originally. Eugeo has a calm, blunt, sarcastic personality. Dwight kind of like Natsu but not that destructive. Cayenne the peaceful, sweet big brother type. Suiren petty, gets jealous easily, vain. No other personalities similar to those will be accepted.
I want everything oc to stand out in there unique way.
Rose Thorn (SYOC)
Chapter 1 Misuto City
"Whoah!" Kila exclaimed. "I haven't been on a ship, in such a long time!" she said. They were all on a ship to a city off the coast of Fiore but was still apart of it. Eugeno told them it was called Misuto City.
As they got closer to the city. The blue sky was drained to light grey colour and that the mist started forming around the city, making it harder for them to see.
"What's up with all the mist." Dwight asked. "I can't see anything." he said.
"I'm scared, Eugeno. Hold me." Suiren pretended.
"No." he said without even looking at her, Suiren pouted in frustration. "It's not mist, idiot. It's called haze." Eugeno said. "Misuto City is filled with factories, it's common for there to be haze." he explained.
"Idiot?!" Dwight said narrowing his eyebrows.
"Is it safe to breath in?" asked Kila.
"No, it's better you cover your mouth with something." Eugeno said. Kila covered her mouth and nose with her turtle neck sweater and Eli went into her sweater.
Suiren places a cloth over her noise, Dwight and Cayenne did the same.
"How long is it until we get to shore?" Kila asked.
"Couple of min-" Eugeno started but was interrupted by the boat stopping all of a sudden.
"Get off the boat! We made it." shouted the captain. "You have 10 seconds to get off!" he shouted aggressively.
One by one they all got off the boat.
"Bitterness isn't a good colour on you." Kila said to the captain before getting off while Eli hissed at the old man. "So where to next?" she asked Eugeno as they began walking deeper into the city.
Eugeno was right. The city was full of large factories with smoke coming out of each one. There was also a lot of tall building and they were all dark shades, Kila assumed it was because of the pollution.
"This town looks so dull and depressing" Cayenne said.
"How can people live here?" Dwight said. "It stinks." he said as he stench of wet dog.
"It's bearable. Back to the mission, we're looking for these two people. I don't have photographs but Master Giselle said that one has greyish hair and the other red." Eugeno said.
Kila looked around. She saw people in ragged clothing hiding in their houses and some in the alley ways. She guessed that they weren't use to seeing outsiders. Kila walked faster to catch up with them.
"This place is kind of creepy." she whispered to Cayenne. "I can feel Eli shivering. Like there's something wrong here." she said patting the ferret.
"If we just continue minding our own business. I'm sure they'll be no problem." Cayenne said with a reassuring smile.
Kila let out a heavy sigh.
"I guess I'm just being paranoid." she said. They continued walking and she noticed a boy run pass them. Kila felt her arm was lighter and her bag wasn't with her, and the boy had the same black bag she had. "My bag!" shouted Kila.
"What?" Eugeno said turning around but she already speed pass them. "Wait, girl!" he called out.
"You guys keep going, this will only take a second." Kila shouted back before disappearing behind a building.
Eugeno sighed.
"Let's go." he said and continued walking.
"We can't just let her go alone." Dwight said.
"This is a test, Dwight. If she needs to depend on others to solve her problems." Eugeno said. Suiren shrugged and followed Eugeno.
"Don't worry. She'll be fine." Cayenne said patting his shoulder before continuing. Dwight gave up and continued too.
And then...
"Stop running kid." Kila said. She has been chasing the young boy for about 5 minutes already. "Give my bag back, I have previous items in there!" she said.
"Even more of a reason why I shouldn't. I'll make enough money with this." said the boy back to Kila.
"Not your best idea, Kila. Not your best." she said regretting telling him about the precious items. "We can work something out."
"No thanks." he said looking back at her and sticks out his tongue. While his doing that he runs into these boys.
"Hey watch where your going, punk." a woman with dark red hair.
The boy looked terrified to see them, so Kila quickly went over to them. "Sorry for his clumsiness, it runs in the family." she said with a small laugh.
They looked at her. "I haven't seen a beauty like you around her lately, I though all the beautiful woman were at Kawashima's palace." said the one next the woman with dark red hair.
"I left this place, a few months ago. I cut my hair, that's probably why I don't seem familiar." said Kila with a fake smile. She was hoping that they'll but her story.
"Welcome back then..." the man said.
"Kila." she said.
"Kila." he said with a smirk before leaving with his partner. Kila waited until they were out of site to give the boy a piece of her kind.
"Why the hell did you take my bag?" Kila asked taking the bag back from him.
"Why should I tell you." he shouted, sticking out his tongue and tried run away again but Kila held him by the shirt collar.
"Early you said something about money?" she recalled. "Why do you need it?" she asked.
"Are you blind, have you seen this place. I'm poor and need money to survive." he said.
"I know there's a deeper reason behind it." Kila said.
The boy stared at her, then sighed. "Its for my older sister, Marika." the boy said. "I need the money to save her." he said.
"To save her from what? Is she ill." Kila asked.
The boy shook his head. "The guy mentioned that all the beautiful woman from this city are at Kawashima palace, my sisters there too." he explained.
"Was she kidnapped." she asked.
"You ask a lot of questions but no she wants kidnapped, well sort of. My dad took a depth from Lord Kawashima, he knows most of the factories here. The money was for my mom's medicine but she ended up dying." he explained. "My dad kept on working to pay of the depth too but he eventually died too."
"My dad paid all the depths but Lord Kawashima insisted there was more and that me and sister had to pay the depths that my father didn't, but we didn't have any money. So it was either I work at the factory or Marika works as a escort at Kawashima's palace." he explained.
Kila felt bad for the boy. "You miss her don't you." she said.
"I know what really happens at Kawashima's Palace and I know my sisters suffering their. That's why I need to get a lot of money to pay back the 75,000 J." he said tears started rolling down his cheek.
"That's enough to convince me" Kila said getting up and Eli jumps onto the ground. "I'll help you get your sister back." she said.
Eli squeaked.
"You'll actually help me? Even after I tried to steal your bag." He said looking up at her.
"That was so 10 minutes ago. Plus, if you do it again I'll pin you to a tree and let the vultures eat you alive." Kila said with a bright smile.
He nods his head in fear.
"I didn't even get your name." Kila realized.
"It's Hiroto." he said.
"I'm Kila and this is Eli and I promise will get your sister back." Kila said holding out her pinky finger and Hiroto wraps his one around hers. "Promise." she said.
So Now...
"Any luck finding them?" asked Eugeno. They went in groups of two, Cayenne and Dwight, him and Suiren.
"I thought this would be easy, no in the town has never seen them." Dwight said with a heavy sigh. "Why don't we just call it a day?" he asked Eugeno. Eugeno looked around then back at Dwight.
"It's getting dark, we won't be unable to find them. We could call it a day." Eugeno said, he felt like something was missing then remembered. "Where's Kila? Every since she went after that kid she hasn't came back." Eugeno said.
"Lets just go. She'll find her own why back, Eugeno." Suiren insisted.
"It's too dangerous." Eugeno said.
"But-" Suiren said but they heard shouting in the distance. Like someone saying I'm here. When the figure approached it was Kila with Hiroto. "Oh! Your back." Suiren said in a somewhat dry tone.
Kila nods. "and I brought a friend along with me, his names Hiroto." she introduced. Hiroto didn't greet them. "Dont be rude Hiroto." she said placing her hand on Hiroto's head and pushing it down so it looks like his bowing his head.
"Isnt that the kid who stole your bag?" asked Dwight.
"It is. I'm bringing him to Begonia so I can help him get money to save his sister from Kawashima Palace." Kila said. She explained them what happened with Hiroto and his family. "That's why I want him to come with us." she said.
"I don't mind." Cayenne said with a gentle smile.
"There's nothing wrong with helping someone in need." Dwight said.
"Eugeno, you can't actually let her bring him. Master Giselle will flip." Suiren whispered to him.
He looked at Kila and Hiroto and responded. "Fine." Eugeno said. Kila cheered at his response. Suiren didn't look to pleased. "It's not up to you to say how Master might feel." Eugeno whispered to her and climbed onto the ship.
Suiren growled under her breath and shoot Kila a strange glance, before following behind.
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