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chaprtt 5.
I looked in my reflation of the sapphire crystalline pond. My skin was as pale snowy white as the foundation that I wore to look more pale and gothic. My eyes had turned a deep scarlet hue like blood and became hauntingly staring-into-your-soul beautiful like Edwards.
suddenly everything looked bright and vivid like hallucinating dreaming whilst getting plasterd on night quail. I thought I had lost my mind to the void of insanity. I felt more alive than I had ever when I was actually alive.
"u look so beautifluu" complemented Edward; I blushed coyly. and then we passionately kissed frenchingly, then made out and did it for the first time.
then I realized I was starving so we went to go find some humans to eat. but already it was very late at night almost morning, so we decided to go back to the Cullens house so we wouldn't explode in the sunlight.
when we got to the edge of the forest I saw someone approaching distantly.
"EDWEIRD CULLEN WHAT R U DOIN U FUCKMOTHER!111111"
it was...
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carlielse!11111111111