Before I begin, there's something very important I need to discuss relating to feedback on the previous chapter. I understand I did change the story quite a bit by adding Sasuke into the picture. I actually had something else planned but I guess that's what happens when you write. That's absolutely fine and I appreciate the constructive criticism however unfortunately, this isn't always the case. I have received a rather unpleasant comment in relation to this alter in narrative. It's fine to disagree with the story but it is unfair to abuse the writers, we are people too. I would appreciate it if you would think about what you write before clicking the enter button. Thank you. :) Enough serious talk for now, onto the story!
(Thank you guest user for sticking up for me and revealing just that just because your behind a computer doesn't mean you can just say whatever you want and remain invincible. You literally made my day!)
Chapter six:
"Fuck!" Hidan cursed smashing his fist against the wall. The other arm hung loosely like a rag doll that lost its stuffing. He also had a trickle of blood on his chin going down from his bruised lip."Your drunk! Come on let's get you home. You're sober enough to drive right Kakuzu?" The zombie gave a thumbs up then fell to the ground. "Damit." Konan muttered, "give me your keys." Kakuzu threw them but they only landed a few centre metres from where he led. The angel snatched them from the ground and picked up the drunk mess. "Come on Hidan. Time to go." She sighed, bucking Kakuzu in the car seat. "What the fuck 'as that bastard got that I don't! Fuck you fucking Sasuke! Fuck!" He slumped on the car, fist clenched. "Hidan..." Konan started.
She leaned a bit closer to him, but he snatched her wrist then shoved her against the side of the parked car and went to kiss her. She slapped him hard. "Idiot...you know I'm with Pain..." He released her then sat in the back and sobbed, "sorry..." "You can't do this again...you're lucky I didn't just leave you in there."
Earlier:
An audience gathered around the Uchiha and Hyuga. "What's going on over there?" Asked Tobi, hanging off the chandelier like monkey bars. More people were drawn like magnets to the ever growing crowd. The Akatsuki decide to go and investigating the sudden interest in the centre of the room. "Woaw...damn." Deidara smirked, arms crossed. "What?" Hidan asked pushing past the many people. His cocky smile suddenly dropped when he saw the scene unfold right before his very eyes. "Their lips..." Something inside him snapped. His heart rate sky rocketed and a sudden corse of adrenalin rushed through his entire body. He took a step out of the circle then charged full speed towards Sasuke.
He went to take a swing at the rich boy, but he swiftly dodged it, grabbed his arm and twisted it. "Dammit!" He yelled, shot back up and managed to hit him with the other fist, giving the Uchiha a black eye. After, he kicked Hidan hard in the stomach causing all the alcohol, he had greedily gulped, spill onto the floor. He struggled to get up, but still tried. "You asking for a death wish?" Sasuke asked then kicked him in the jaw, making him loose a tooth and collapse once again in his own sick. Hidan helplessly watched as the girl he had adored, walked off in the arms of the guy he despised.
"Hian...Hida, Hidan...Hidan wake up." Called a rough voice. It took a few seconds for the words to sink in. "Ah- fuck!" The Jashinest yelled trying to calm down his splitting head ache. He turned his heavy head to the side where he saw his right fist bound in bandages and submerged in ice. "I ava ge bac." He mumbled. "Can you say that in English." Spoke Kakuzu, nearing beside the bed. "I said...I have to get her back." "Not in that state. You really are a dumb ass. Do you even remember what you did after that stunt yesterday?" "What?" "You tried to kiss Konan." "...oh...shit. I'm a terrible person." He smirked, "I've really fucked up haven't I?"
What do you think? I know it's very short but I don't want to have every chapter being the same length. If there's something you disagree with then please leave a comment and add a suggestion. But please make sure it's something that will help the story and not just a rant. If you're one of those against the change then I suggest you just wait and see how things turn out. Thank you all for your input and support.