Here's chapter 8. I'm going to aim to make this a bit longer than my first story. Right now I have a fairly clear vision on how I want this to go but I could use some suggestions.

Bzzzz...bzzzzz...bzzzzz...[I'm sorry] bzzz...[please pick up] bzz- "go away" Hinata mumbled at the inanimate object. The girl sat on her bed curled up staining as the phone's screen lighting up with miss calls and messages. ...bzzzzz...bzzzz...bzzzzz. Her fist grasped a clump of her knitted sweater, acting as her stress ball. Bzzz- She lunged for the vibrating device, snatched it up and was about to throw it when the teen got a glimpse of the pixilated letters. [Hey X]. Her once scrunched face loosened as a feint smile found itself on her lips. It was Sasuke.

[Hi :3] She always liked adding those little faces. When texting she accidentally sent one but Sauke found them cute and loved the way she got all embarrassed over something so trivial. [u ok?] Hinata thought for a moment but quickly sent [Yea I'm good U?] She didn't want to worry Sasuke over problems that are her's to deal with and hers alone. Sure she felt comforted when he'd console her but it just wasn't worth the time. Besides, she just wanted to enjoy their little messages. [Im good but that's not really important.] [R U busy this weekend?] The girl honestly replied [no why do you ask?] [ah good. I'm taking you to dinner. How does the red diamond sound?] The girl almost dropped her phone at the sight of those letters. The red diamond wasn't your average place. It was well known as being the most expensive restaurant in all of Konoha with food to die for; that's if your wallets aren't drained first.

[I can't afford that! I thought you have to book three weeks in advance to get a table.] [I know some people there and don't worry about the cost I'm paying.] [and please don't be humble I insist.] [ok :) sure thing. When R we going?] [I've got a lot of homework to do on Sunday so how does Saturday sound?] [That works out] [Great oh and wear something formal. I'll pick you up at 7. see you then.] Gleefully the Hyuga signed off with her usual [ok love u.] and Sasuke with his[love u more]

The next day

Thud thud! "I don't buy scout cookies!" Yelled a muffled voice, "I've said before and I'll say it ag- oh. Hinata. What can I do for you?" Konan stood by the opened door. "Konan. Um...do you have any dresses I can borrow?" The older teenager smiled, "heh. Yea, come on in."

"So what's the occasion?" Pried the bluenette. "Well you see I have a d...a uh..date-" "Date?! Ok, ok where?" "The Red Diamond-" "Holy shit! Isn't that place mega expensive and ridiculously hard to get into?" Before Hinata could even open her mouth, Konan added, "Right that's it. I am going you make you look so good that not one person will be able to take their eyes off you! Oh- and I have just the dress that will do that! When is it?" "Um..7" "what! That's only a few hours away. We haven't a moment to loose!"

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"This way Mi'lady." Whispered a raspy voice. An elderly man well dressed in a tailcoat held open the door to the limousine. Holding the edges of her dress, Hinata stepped in and took a seat along the long stretch of leather seating, next to the handsome Sasuke. He wore a black suit that consisted of all black buttoned shirt, trousers, blazer and a white bow tie. "You look beautiful." He said, legs crossed and hands lazily slung over them. Hinata wore a long black dress that sparkled in the car's cool lighting, it had one strap that slipped over her shoulder. The fabric was loose and comfortable, It reached the floor and had a slit to the side that revealed her slender legs. Her make up was natural with a peachy lipstick, smokey eyeshadow and mascara. Complementing the outfit was her hair tied in a bun with little spirals hanging off the sides.

During the ride, Hinat caught up with her boyfriend, his arms around her. Gentle late night music played in the background while the town flashed past the tinted windows.

Inside the restaurant sat hundreds of gorgeous billionaires, diamonds and rubies slung around their wives necks and fingers. Marble pillars supported the gold plated masterpiece that was the ceiling. The beige walls were accompanied by long white curtains held by gold braids. All tables had white cloth neatly cast over their circular frames. All had a large candle in the centre and rose like napkins on the white and gold china vine printed plates. A young woman in a short grey dress navigated the couple through the marvellous display of couples enjoying their $200 dinners. Hinata wouldn't be surprised if some celebrity showed up to announce the oscars. The lighting was dim but relaxing. There was no need for large lights as the many candles gently lit the large space.

"Here you go." The lady spoke softly, handing them both a leather bound menu. She filled their glasses with Champaign then left to attend other guests. Hinata briefly scanned it but, to her it might as well have been in French. Even if this was the case she still she pretended to read. "See anything you like?" Sasuke asked barely lifting his gaze from the page. Little did she know, he was hiding a smile behind the little booklet. "Um..w-what are you having?" His smile grew, "Gourmet Caviar." "...oh yes. That..its my favourite. I gues I'll have that too then." "Oh really? I never knew you liked fish eggs?" "F-fish eggs!?" He chuckled and had to put the menu down in order to compose himself. "Hehe. You can ask if you don't understand the menu. Why don't you try the Chateaubriand. It's just a fancy word for beef. It's pretty good." Hinata smiled in response still a little embarrassed but she was glad to laugh it off.

They endured in causal small talk. Hinata awed at the wonderful persona the room emitted, all the while amusing Sasuke. She looked like a kid in a toy store. "This place is amazing ." She commented. "Hey...I've got something for you. Hang on a sec." The Uchiha pulled out a small black box. "W..what is it?" She asked puzzled at the small contraption. He lifted the lid revealing a white charmed bracelet. Sasuke took it out, undid the clasp and placed the quaint jewellery on Hinata's wrist. The piece was comprised of little amethyst flowers and diamonds encased in a little shel of silver. "It was my great grandmother's. I want you to have it." The girl admired it for a moment before replying. "It's beautiful...but...I couldn't possibly-" "it's fine. I want you to keep it. Besides they match your eyes." The remark made the girl blush a little. All of a sudden she felt her chest warm up and her heart rate increase.

Shortly after, their dinner arrived on a little trolley. Silver bowls covered them. Two waiters gracefully placed one on each side of the table then lifted the lids off, allowing a smoke of intense flavours to escape. Hinata began to saw through the tender meat, struggling a bit while her other half slid his knife elegantly as if he'd done this countless times. Noticing her plate shift with the rhythm of her wrist, he offered, "here let me do it." And perfectly cut her beef into symmetrical little squares. "Thanks. I guess you eat at places like this all the time then." "I guess so. But to be honest I'd say homemade stuff is always better." Hinata smiled at the remark. "My mum used to make the best stew...lucky for you she passed her secret recipe to me." "Now you've said that I'm gonna have to try it." They ate their food in a very comfortable silence, "wow...this is...delicious." She smiled.

After they'd finished their meal, the couple took the limo back to Hinata's block of flats. Sasuke held the teen in a loose embrace then kissed her forehead."Thanks for tonight. It meant a lot to me." Hinata smiled, looking up to Sasuke's lazy eyes, "Who says it has to end right now?" His hands began to slide down from her waist and he slowly kissed her passionately. Knowing where this was going, Hinata looked away from him then lightly pushed his chest, breaking his hold. "Goodnight Sauke." She whispered, still avoiding eye contact. Her voice hinted disappointed. She could have sworn she saw him scow for a second. "Y-yea, right. I'll see you on Monday then."

Sasuke's overly priced car drove off while Hinata didn't move from her spot. Instead the girl stared to the starry sky. Smoke filled the thin air as she exhaled and thought of the first time they'd met under the very same moon.

I would really be great full if you could give me some ideas on future chapters also what do you guys think of the story so far? Feedback is always appreciated and it helps me to improve the fanfic. Ok that's all folks see ya in the next chapter.