Chapter 5
Alright I'm getting this out before the very end of November which I didn't think I could actually do. I've decided that I'm going to start to respond to reviews now so let the responses begin!
The Moltres's Flame- thank you! And also I believe that I mentioned the order that they would retrieve to Souls in chapter 2 or 3 Fire is after Earth I believe. So May should be in next chapter maybe next couple.
LoveLoverGrl- thank you that means a lot to me
eeveeluvr-I updated before the end of November does that count as soon? I hope it does: /
Left-To-Die- thank you as well. I picture Gary like that I love him that way thank you about the plot it just came to me one day well writing my other story. And you will find out who it will be this chapter
Geminifan- why thank you my good sir or madam (I don't know :/) I will do my best to keep on updating
Onwards with the story!
Gary's POV
I don't get it; we've been travelling for a day and a half and yet neither one of these girls has hit on me. What kind of a sick joke is this? I need the Earth Soul to be a girl. I mean I'm Gary Oak, I need some sort of action I don't care if it's being hit on or making out, just something!
We were heading to Fortree city so that we could find the Earth soul and damn are my feet killing me. "Can we take a break?" I asked Misty who was leading us at the time.
"We just stop half hour ago. So stop whining!" she snapped at me. Well if she is going to be a bitch like that towards me I will not stand for it. Literally; I sat down on the middle of the dirt path we were currently walking on through the forest. I guess they didn't notice I stopped walking as they continued down the path. I continued to sit there, that was until something lifting me by the waist to at least 50 feet in the air. "What the hell!" The others looked back and busted out in laughter. "Hello! Dude being held up in the air by some god damn vine! Get me down!" Drew snickered a little bit before saying something to Dawn and Misty whom laughed at it. Then there was me still up in the air.
Before I knew it Drew was sending a gust of air to cut the vine. And that asshole planned this so that I would fall flat on my ass. As I fell had the, oh so brilliant Gary Oak mind come up with a way to save myself from ruining my hair. I quickly shot an ice beam to the ground and a curve up to wear I was, creating a wonderful slide of ice. As hit the ice sliding down to in front of Drew who just gave me a glare; I snickered a bit before walking over to the girls.
"We're close," Dawn told us.
"What do you mean we're close? Close to what?" Drew asked her he approached us.
"To the Earth soul."
"Wait, how could you possibly know that?" Misty now asked obviously as confused as the rest of us.
"Well first that vine was too different to be created and grab someone without the Earth's power. And second I can feel the power of more than just the three of you." She responded looking into the direction we needed to go to reach Fortree. "let's keep moving, we need to find that soul." Dawn began to walk ahead of us leaving us slightly confused. She went from giggled and happy to freaking serious in a matter of seconds. We ignored this sudden change and followed after her
We had finally arrived in Fortree and damn this place is so nature like. Ugh I hate it, so down to Earth, it is horrific. I don't get why people would want to live in a place like this, I mean seriously, trees houses for houses? What kind of place uses trees for this?
I shook off this stupid city's way of life as we made our way to the market area; Dawn said that it would be the best place to find some information. Once we were there I noticed how many hot girls live here I mean I'm already liking this place more. There was one girl that stood out way more than the others did. she had the most amazing curves and her hair flowed straight down her back to around her ass, which might I add was quite amazing as well. She was looking at some of the produce and I decided to go over to maybe get something out of this trip.
"Hey beautiful, need a taste of Oak?" pun intended
"No, get lost" she said without looking up at me.
"Are you sure?" I grabbed her hand as she reached for an apple by me. She looked up at me, and must a say getting a full look at her she was hot. She gave me a quick smile before taking grasp of my arm.
She leaned in to whisper in my ear, "positive" I was a bit confused up until the point where she flipped me. Landing on my back, I sat up and looked at her. She was holding a god damn smirk on her face, "Get the hint!" she yelled before leaving me there. I rubbed my back as I stood up and walked back to the others.
"I can feel the presence nearby, it's in that direction," Dawn pointed in the direction the girl that I just stuck out with went. Just great.
"Well I think Gary can feel the presence of pain since he just got owned by some chick." Drew laugh as he smacked my back, I glared in response.
"Shut the fuck up would you," I began to walk behind Dawn and Misty as they wet to go find the source of Earth's power, which would mean another new member to our team.
We walked out of the town by a bit and stumbled upon a tree that had a tree house in it. "There, that's where the Soul is." Dawn pointed towards the house in the tree. I looked around and there was no way to get up. "Gary make an ice ladder to climb." I did what I was told and made a ladder that lead to the roof of the tree house. Dawn and Misty climbed up then Drew gave me a glare before heading up himself, I climbed up to find that exact girl that flipped me standing there. Well this is not good.
"Hi, I'm Dawn this is Misty, Drew and Gary." Dawn gestured to each of us as she said our names.
"Oh I met Gary before but what do you want exactly?" The girl asked.
"We presume you are the Earth Soul, I'm the Light Soul, and Misty is Water, Drew Air, and Gary Ice. We came to find you and next we are heading to find Fire."
"in that case, good to meet you three," she looked at me. "Not so much you. I'm Leaf, the Earth Soul."
"Ya nice to meet you to, one question though. Where is your mark?" Drew asked her. She sighed, before turning around and lifting the bottom of her shirt to about her mid back, showing a leaf that went from one side of her back to the other. In all seriousness here it looked like a tramp stamp which just makes her even hotter. She put her shirt back down and turned back to face us. "Nice" Drew said with a large smile on his face.
I looked around her small sized home a noticed a lot of books on the shelves placed all around the walls. "I'm taking it that you are a nerd" I said to her earning a glare, "What you a ton of books"
"Reading makes you smarter, maybe if you read once in a while it might fill that head with something other than bad ways to flirt." My mouth dropped in shock, she just dissed my flirting skills; how dare she! Now I must get her to kiss me somehow, and oh I will find a way to do that before this journey ends.
HAHA done! Only 2 hours till the end of the moth but this is finally finished. I feel accomplished well I don't have much to say other than sorry for updating so late this month...um...ya...that's it I think.
Review please, if you have any ideas for the story right them in a review or PM me and I'll get back to you. Oh and if you want to go check out my other story Cute Revenge pretty please.
See you next time I update I'll try and make it before the last day of the month next time.
-SL (decided I would start signing my work too)