Hello Fellow Olitzers!

I feel like I have to respond to one review I got. Please excuse me for getting in the way of the story; feel free to skip the below and go on reading under the heading Chapter 11 below 😊

FYI…. I post all reviews, negative and positive. As stated in my bio. All comments are welcome ….as long as they are constructive.

So, to the guest who has decided that the story isn't realistic and is annoyed by me writing it in a way that doesn't please her…. My response to you.

One. Is there anything on Scandal you would consider realistic? Is a vice president murdering her husband and getting away with it is more realistic to you then an abusive ex-boyfriend dropping by to threaten his ex-girlfriend and her fighting back...?!

Scandal is out there ...and we come back and watch the show, because that is what most of us like about the show!

The joy of fiction is just that…its fiction. There is a wonderful section available in most bookstores. It's called Non-fiction, perhaps your better suited there?

Though… fair warning even the non-fiction section of life is filled with "unnecessary drama".

Two. You are upset that Olivia did not react to Edison by being gripped by fear. My response to you.

She had fear, but she also decided to say her peace once and for all to someone who hurt her. No one can predict how anyone will react in any given situation. Life is not black and white. Olivia has not been systematically abused. So, while the extreme fear response might be a given with a victim of prolonged abuse, I did not feel it was warranted in this scenario.

I am an immigrant and a survivor of a civil war. I have seen things most people would not consider "realistic" happen before my very eyes. Some people reacted with fear, some people stood tall and let the cards fall where they lay. You can never predict what everyone will do. That is not realistic.

Three: Here is a wild idea. If you don't like it…don't read it! I welcome you to provide me with constructive criticisms, I will not welcome you to provide me with your selfish opinion on how I should write a story…my story to please you.

To all the others who have been constructive in their comments. I appreciate you. I work hard to fix all the errors you bring to my attention and to get better with every story I write. Serendipity is the third story I am attempting to write, so most of the errors are related to my being a novice. Others are because I was careless, I can own that!

Please feel free to continue to comment/review. Again, I appreciate all feedback. Positive or Negative, as long as it is CONSTRUCTIVE.

Peace to all!

Isa. S.


Chapter 11

Fitz couldn't hear anything but a steady beeping. There was something small and warm beside him. He opened his eyes and shut them quickly.

The florescent lighting went through his eyeballs to his skull like an ice pick. He opened his eyes again. This time slower. He looked up at the ceiling tiles and flickering fluorescents.

Hospital. You're in Hospital. Liv was attacked!

He attempted to sit up but the pain in his side and a weight on his arm prevented him from doing so. He turned to look and found Olivia asleep. She had wrapped his arm around her and that why he couldn't move it.

He looked at her and felt a wave of relief wash over him. She was okay. He looked down and saw that she had a hand placed over her stomach. He reached down and placed his hand over hers.

The light touch woke her up and she looked up

"Oh Fitz, I'm so sorry…I'm so sorry" she cried as she spoke "It's all my fault! I am so sorry. I love you so much…so much"

"Liv…Liv please" he voice was soft, gruff from not having spoken in days.

"Liv it's not your fault, it's all on Edison. Baby, please don't cry, I can't stand to see you crying" Olivia listened to his voice and cried. There were moments in the last forty-eight hours when she thought that she would never hear his voice again.

"I love you Fitz, you can't ever leave me, I wouldn't survive it. Me and the baby need you" she said

Fitz choked back tears. The baby. She mentioned the baby. That meant…. the baby was okay.

"I'm not going anywhere Liv…I love you and I am not going anywhere…"

Fitz was leaving the hospital today. She could finally take him home. Well…to his home. It was easier to take care of him there. Her mother wasn't ready to go home yet. The incident with Edison, had scared her. She wanted to stay and reassure herself that Olivia was okay. She would be staying in Liv's apartment and be driving to see the kids at Fitz's place.

She wasn't worried about Olivia ad Fitz dating anymore. Fitz had shown how much he cared for her daughter. She knew she would be leaving her in good hands once Fitz was recovered.

Olivia spent most of the week when Fitz was in the hospital by his side. She left at night but only because Fitz and her mother had insisted.

"Your pregnant Liv! I will not have you sleeping on a chair in the hospital, and if you insist on doing so, I am going to have to discharge myself and go home with you so that I can see you sleep in a decent bed" Fitz had threatened.

"Fine" she had acquiesced but she hadn't been happy about it.

Fitz was waiting when she and Maya got to the hospital at ten am. Olivia frowned.

"Are we late, I thought they were letting you out at eleven am?" Liv said striding towards him in the reception area.

"I made them start the paperwork early so I can get the fuck outta her Liv" Fitz said. He couldn't wait to see Jackson memorial in the rear-view mirror.

There was an argument when it came time to leave. Fitz wanted to walk out. The nurse thought otherwise…the nurse won.

They wheeled him out to her waiting car and placed him carefully in the back seat. He was annoyed at being fussed over, but he took it because he knew it came from a place of care and fear.

Once home, Olivia fussed again. She put him to bed like he was five and tucked him in with a kiss to the forehead. One the other hand he thought, maybe being fussed over wasn't so bad. He hated to admit it but the trip home had tired him out so he was lights out as soon as Liv closed the door.

Around 5 pm Olivia decided to wake him up to take his meds and to eat something.

He sat up and smiled as she tucked a napkin into his shirt.

"Liv, we need to talk…Edison"

"He's gone Fitz. They didn't give him bail. He's been charged with attempted murder. He's going to be going away a long time. I also got an apology from the department of corrections. They should have called me to warn me about him being released. They never did."

"An apology doesn't cut it. You could have gotten hurt! I want someone to fucking pay"

"Fitz calm down! I…I don't care about making him pay. I care about people getting warned so something like this doesn't happen to anyone else…I care that you're okay and your home with me…I care about our baby...that's all care about." Tears welled up in her eyes, and he pulled her in close.

"Okay. Me too…that's all I care about to…love you Liv"

"I love you too. Now be a good boy and eat your soup" she said

"Yes Ma'am"


Two weeks Later…

"I am home!" Olivia yelled as she let herself into Fitz house.

"I got Leoni's for dinner, I hope you're hungry" she was exhausted. She had spent the whole day reading complaints, deciding what cases they could probably plead out and what cases had enough evidence to go to trial. She was glad to be home, and it was a Friday which meant she could sleep in tomorrow. Hallelujah!

She took out the Styrofoam containers from the take-away bag and started to plate them when Fitz came in to the kitchen. He hadn't yet gone back to work and she knew he had to be going stir-crazy staying home all day; but doctors' orders were doctor's orders. He didn't get to cheat under her watch.

"Hi are you hungry?" she asked smiling at him.

He watched her with an intense look on his face and she stopped plating the food.

"Fitz what's wrong? Are you in pain…" she came around the counter and walked over to him quickly. As soon as she got to him he grabbed her and pulled her into him. She started to speak but was quickly cut off. He pulled her in and started kissing her. Thrusting his tongue in her mouth.

Wow.

"I'm hungry Livvie, but not for food" with that he grabbed her arm and started leading her to the bedroom. She protested

"Fitz, I don't think we should be doing this yet, the doctor said that…"

"I went for my final checkup today Liv, I am all set. Now if there is anything your wearing that you value, you might want to take it off before I rip it off"

Liv looked at Fitz. Oh boy.

She quickly took off her Joanna Ortiz stripped blouse. It had been a gift from Abby and she loved it. She stood in front of him in her work trousers and a bra. He run his gaze all over her and then growled.

He stripped of his shirt and stood in front of her wearing only a pair of sweats. She saw the scar left by Edison's attack and was drawing closer to take a look when he pushed her and she fell flat on the bed. He took off his sweats and was on top of her a second later, back to kissing her like a man possessed.

He reached down and opened the front clasp of her bra and pulled the cups to the side. He looked down at her breasts and moaned again.

"Oh Liv…" he stared down at her bared breasts and hissed in air. Her nipples were already hard and he bent his head down and sucked one into his mouth.

Liv cried out. The pregnancy had made her breasts very sensitive. She felt like she could come from him playing with her breasts.

She gasped her back arching, giving him better access. Yes…She grabbed the back of his head and pushed her fingers into the delicious curls at the back of his head. It felt so good…it had been so long…so long.

He moved back and her nipple popped out of his mouth and he moved onto the other. He sucked on her as she moved on the bed trying to get him to take as much of her as he could into his mouth.

"Fitz" she said moaning. He moved removed his mouth from her breast and moved back to kiss her mouth. In between rough kisses he told her how much he had missed being inside her, how much he wanted her, how hard she made him. Her body listened to it all and softened for him.

He moved to her neck and kissed his way down her sternum to her stomach. It wasn't flat anymore. His baby was growing in there. Warm and protected by Liv.

He kissed her rounded belly and moved his hands softly over her. His touch was so gentle.

"You're so beautiful Livvie…so beautiful. You and the baby are everything to me…everything"

She felt tears prickle her eyes at his words. She moved her hands over his head as he kissed every inch of her stomach.

Liv loved to hear him say all the sweet things and to hear him whisper to the baby, but it had been weeks since he had made love to her and the pregnancy had been playing havoc with her libido. She needed him now!

"Fitz please make love to me…please" Liv's plea brought him out of his trance. He quickly reached down and unbuttoned her trousers, pulling her panties off along with them.

He looked at the beautiful perfection he has just revealed. He started from the bottom, kissing his way up her legs…. up to her calves, her knees, her inner thighs…hmm.

Soon…soon he would be able to taste her again. It had been too long since he had had his fix. He pushed his hand in between her legs and pulled them wide apart. There…that's what he had been missing. He pushed his face into her and rubbed himself around her beautiful pussy

"Fitz" Liv cried out. He pulled his head back and looked up at her lying on the edge of the bed.

"Look at me Livvie, watch me" Liv did as she was told and sat up on her elbows looking at him in between her legs.

"Watch me lick your beautiful pussy Liv" he said huskily

She watched he used his thumbs to part her and then bent his head down to put his tongue to her. He started off softly licking her, opening her up to him with his tongue. She gasped and watched his head moving between her legs. His tongue fluttering gently on her clit.

She moved her hips up and down guiding him, letting him know how she wanted it. Soon he got bolder, he started sucking, licking and lapping at her folds hungrily and she cried out at the increased pressure. She kept her eyes on him.

Sensing her growing frustration, he decided to stop torturing and focused in on her clit. He wrapped his tongue around it and pulled her into his mouth, sucking on her.

A guttural scream tore from her throat and her hips picked up their speed. He stiffened his tongue and stuck it inside her, fucking her with it. He alternated between sucking her and fucking her with her tongue, driving her mad.

Liv tried to stay up and watch him please her, but she couldn't anymore. She fell back on the bed and threw her arm over her eyes and focused all her attention to the pleasure in between her legs. So good…so good.

She felt the climax approach and fear coursed through her. The pleasure was almost unbearable. She tried to pull away but Fitz wouldn't let her. He wrapped his hands around her hips and held her to his mouth.

"Fitz…Fuuck!" the pleasure burst out or her. Fitz felt the spasms on his tongue and quickly climbed up her body, he pulled his cock out and placed himself at the entrance of her very wet pussy. He pushed the thick head in just in time to catch the last contractions of her orgasm. He groaned as he felt those tight little muscles clasping at the nerve laden head of his cock. He needed more.

He pushed himself deep on an upstroke into her body and she cried out again as he filled her.

"Liv… oh god Liv" he groaned out as he felt her wet channel close around him like a vise.

She wrapped her legs around his waist and lifted up into him "Fitz please…"

He knew what she wanted. So, he gave it to her. He pulled out and pushed back in. He kept the rhythm slow and gentle not wanting to hurt her or the baby. It was agony.

"Fitz…harder please…harder" Liv begged

"No…I can't I don't want to hurt you, Liv don't…baby don't… I won't be able to hold back, please don't move" she ignored him and swiveled her hips around the thickness.

Liv wanted it, no she needed it hard. She grabbed a hold of his face with both her hands and brought his face down to hers.

"Fitz you're not going to hurt me…Fitz please…FUCK ME!"

He broke. He grabbed her hands and moved them over her head and pinned her down. Groaning deep in his throat as he pushed her legs further apart forcing her to take all of him, moving himself deeper into her body.

"You make me so hard baby, you turn me on so much" he growled out to her as he pushed in to the hilt.

He pulled out and pushed back in hard. Liv screamed.

He established a pounding rhythm, his powerful body pushing even deeper into her. He was going at her so hard the bed squeaked with the force of his thrusts. Less than a minute later Liv was shattering again in his arms, pushing her hips off the bed and into him as she came. He let her ride out her climax and then started in on her again. He wasn't done, he was in an insatiable mood. He held off his orgasm as he brought her to the edge and pushed her off over and over again and still he didn't stop. Wouldn't stop…couldn't stop.

"Fitz please, please…" she begged. He finally let himself go… the orgasm ripped through him. He gripped her to him and poured into her. He blotted out everything but the pleasure. His eyes closed his head thrown back as he pulsed inside her over and over again. His strength deserted him. He collapsed to the side of her. Careful not to put his weight on her. Mindful of the baby.

He pulled her into him and tried to catch his breath. Liv was quiet beside him so he gathered the energy to look down and ask

"Livvie did I hurt you" he asked her. What was wrong with him? he had gone at her like a maniac.

She looked up at him and smiled shaking her head.

"Liv, move in with me. Don't go back to yours. I want you and the baby here with me all the time"

Olivia smiled and nodded.

"Okay"

"What no argument?" he said surprised "you always fight me.

"Not this time mister" She leaned in and kissed him" I want to be wherever you are"

Moved he leaned in and kissed her.

"Plus, I can't cook for shit and this baby is always hungry. This way I get three square meals a day with minimum effort"

Fitz laughed.

"I live to serve"