Hello everyone, Diamond Marine here. Sadly, this is not a chapter due to me having trouble on how to write the beginning of the second arc of the story. I am having trouble with choosing either the Riot Squad to start with before everything goes to hell in a hand basket or starting with Jeremy and Isaac Clarke when it does happen. So for right now, this story is on hiatus for the time being.

I'm also glad that two people gave me some OC's to use in the Riot Squad. I will have their info as well as the other three I'm going to make. Oh, and for those wondering where Bill is at during all of this? You'll find out when I write it. Anyway, I will now answer some reviews.

REVIEWS RECEIVED…

OPENNING REVIEWS FOR DEAD SPACE FANFIC…

DONE…

Jose556: I'm glad that you made a character for me to use in the Riot Squad. (Will come up with a nickname for Riot Squad later) And if I haven't said it before, yes, absolutely yes on the Dead Space 3 Revolver.

Horus115: Also thank you for leaving a character for the Riot Squad. If it's alright with you though since he is on a Riot Squad that he has a Shotgun or Pulse Rifle as his other weapon. I just don't like thinking about someone living by only using one weapon through the Necromorph Outbreaks. That's why James was sent to Zach Hammond because Zach only had his Pulse Rifle.

Dan Sylverjay: Hello there. I'm glad you're interested in my story and are telling me to write in shorter paragraphs. I actually am glad that you are. I honestly hate writing those long paragraphs because I accidentally do it, and when it does happen I can't really see a way to shorten it like readers would.

The confusion thing or lack thereof, is because Jeremy had a God explain why he was here and that he was randomly chosen, as well as him being in a Fight or Flight mode except when on trams. (Even when I didn't write what exactly was going on) Afterall if anybody is in that mode they don't really focus on what would get them confused, that would just get them killed. I will try and use more of the senses and write down what exactly is happening since I honestly couldn't with the first game. The second game I will be playing through it and write what happens in each chapter of the game and then mix it up with this story.

I will write down what happens as if it is the first time he's seeing it because, as we can all tell from the last part of the first arc, he has pretty bad luck when it comes to Necros and everything's going to be a little switched up due to the destabilization of the universe he was in (The Advisor explains that in one of the earlier chapters). And I hope to improve with writing shorter paragraphs, as well as hope you like what I write after this.

You also have me writing my longest answer to a review ever my dude. But I'm glad since you brung up some very valid points for me to know about. Plus, the reason on why I wrote the first arc the way I did, was because I played only a little bit but didn't want to continue it, so I looked up guides and stuff to use for those chapters. You can tell how that ended up, and I won't try that again.

CLOSING REVIEW SCREEN…

Well that's it for the reviews, now on to something else. Guys, I'm asking you all where I should start with the second arc. Should I start with the Riot Squad before the Necromorph outbreak and lead up to it, providing some character to the squad and making it to where they aren't just some faceless grunt. Or should I start with Isaac and Jeremy like it would in the Second game and have it in the middle of a Necromorph Outbreak. I'm fine with either one honestly.

The reason I was asking for OCs and asking where to start is because I want to involve you guys in the story somewhat and to make it more enjoyable. I am glad that you guys like the story and that just makes me want to write more of it. But right now it's on hiatus until I can find a way to continue it, I don't want this story to die honestly.

This id Diamond Marine signing off.

Have a good day everybody.