Sailor Psychotic here! This is the second part of the prologue, I hope you like it! I need at least 3 reviews before I post the 1st chapter, just to know if anyone is interested in my story.
My Dear Okaasan, My Dear Imoutochan
(My Dear Mother, My Dear Little Sister)
Prologue: Part 2
That's not me!
Tori stared in horror at her reflection through the bloody water. Her hair was brown. Tied up in a bun. Held with chopsticks. "No," She said to herself, "This can't be happening… I- I'm imagining things… I've lost it. I can't be here, I can't!" The poor girl, paralyzed by fear and shock, backed away, out of the pool. Sadly, she didn't watch where she was going, and fell into the pond behind her.
"Oh, that very bad. Poor girl." The Tour guide stated. "That Nannichuan; the Spring of Drowned Boy. Very tragic story of boy who drown there 1,750 year ago. Now those who fall in there take body of boy. Too bad."
"Where the hell were you?" Stated Tori, now noticing her VERY tight clothes and her lack of a chest. "She's dead! She tried to protect us and now she's dead! It's all my fault." She said quietly, and made a renewed effort to take the body out of the pond.
1 Week LaterIt was a small, quiet burial. It is what she would have wanted, Tori thought to herself. She was disappointed that she couldn't contact her father, but that couldn't be helped. She slowly walked up to a small shrine and prayed to her mother, thanking her for her guidance and protection. At least now I know how to change, she thought to herself. Hot kept her as a girl, cold made her a boy, and lukewarm made her look like Nodoka. She avoided lukewarm water at all cost. All it did was give her pains, deep in her heart.
The only good thing was her new look. Now, her hair was back to it's original bright red color, and her boy form held the blue hair she was accustomed to. Since she missed her brother so much, she tied her hair into a ponytail, like his. Though, when she last saw him, his hair was to short to be braided, so that thought never occured to her.
Turning away from the small shrine, she picked up her rucksack and started off. It was her duty as the one who killed Nodoka to be the one to tell her father and brother. Though her friends told her that it wasn't her fault, she didn't believe them. How could she? Her mother died taking a hit she was too weak to dodge. That wouldn't happen again. Tori would train harder from now on.
I must find Ranma and accept the dishonor I have caused. It is the only way.
Well, what do you think? Just 3 reviews are all I need!
Sailor Psychotic
