Alright i know that the chapters have been short and mostly non-eventful BUT hopefully that will change soon! Also im going to go back and fix some things i left out. Even if you do not like the story review because I need reviews to know im loved! so R&R!

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Chapter3

After breakfast Eragon and Roran packed up camp, but left the supplies there in case Saphira needed to fly fast. Then they set everything up so if they had to they could fly back to camp and leave in a hurry.

They climbed atop Saphira's scalely hide in silence and took off towards Helgrind. Eragon sent his mind out as far as it would go towards Helgrind. He encountered many minds in Dras-Leona, but he didn't focus on those. He instead zoned in on the minds in Helgrind. He sensed six.

"Saphira there are six minds in there. Two Raz'ac, two lethrblaka, and two humans: Katrina, and Sloan."

"Good she's still alive" said saphira

"Roran, Katrina is still alive"

"Finally I can save her!" said Roran, his face alight with joy and determination.

They slowly approached Helgrind from the hevans, to avoid being spotted from the ground. As they approached the middle peak of Helgrind two dark figures appeared from a cavern on the middle peak. As he gazed at the lethblaka for the first time Eragon's breath caught in his throat. Before him, hoveing in the clouds, was two beast. They had long straight beaks, two huge black insect eyes, leather wings like bat wings, and great muscular legs. They let out a supersonic scream and charged Saphira.

Acting quickly to avoid a real battle, Eragon quickly invaded the minds of the monsters. With one of the twelve words of death, Eragon dispached the lethrblaka. Eragon watched as the creatures plummeted to the ground.

"Saphira now that i killed the lethrblaka we need to land"

"What happened to them?!"asked Roran

"I killed them using magic."answered Eragon.

"Really it was that easy! Maybe you could teach me how sometime"

"I don't think so. Its really difficult. Its not that i dont think you can do it, but it would take a long time. You're already a good fighter i think you should just stick with that"

"Yeah maybe your right."concluded Roran

Saphira landed on the same peak that the lethrblaka came from. After Eragon and Roran dismounted from Saphira, the three of them continued into the cavern. As they desended down a flight of steps the rock of the cavern turned into walls and a floor like the inside of a castle. The smell of rotting flesh premated the entire place. Eragon quickly located the Raz'ac and was suprized to find them closing in fast.

"On guard! The Raz'ac are coming!"

As soon as the words left his mouth Eragon saw two black figures speeding towards them. As fast as he could Eragon invaded their minds and wispered one of the twelve words of death. They fell just before they reached Eragon never to rise again.

"The Raz'ac's blight has finally been removed from Alagaesia. Garrow i have avenged you"said Eragon

"There dead! Now we must find Katrina!"Bellowed Roran

Eragon located Katrina with his mind and they hurried to her cell.

As they aproached Roran ran ahead.

From the other side of the cell Roran could just barely see Katrina with the light of the dying torch. Even though the lighting was bad Roran could still see the injuries that the Raz'ac had incflicted on Katrina.

"Eragon! hurry we need to find the keys!"

"No need.said Eragon. JEIRDA!"Barked Eragon and the cell door turned to dust in Roran's hands.

Roran dashed to Katrina's aid and grasped her in his hands. She awoke in his arms and gasped then Roran pulled her into a kiss. Then Roran went about explaining how they had come to find her and the death of the Raz'ac.

As they were leaving Eragon saw something that caught his intrest. There was a heavly barred door with many locks and chains. Eragon used his magic to enter the guarded room. The room was unadorned and empty. Eragon looked around the room trying to find out why the door would've been locked so and be empty. He expressed this concern to saphira who suggested that Eragon should use his mind to search from flaws in the walls. After a breif search he found a hidden door. Going over to the hidden door, Eragon pressed aginst it. When nothing happened, Eragon pushed harder. The door slowly creaked open.

What Eragon saw inside made him gasp for air. Inside on a alter was an emerald dragon egg.

Ohhh! Cliffy!! So who should be the next rider? I've already made up my mind to who its going to be, but i would like to now what u think!!

Chappy is still kinda short but im working on it. i got a new story called the RISE OF GALBATORIX which i think will be very good!

R&R!!!