I just got my first flame and I was so happy that I wanted to make an announcement.
This flame was written by MizzChocolate
You call this piece of a story? this story line and you!
Go choke on a cow dick!
Isn't she creative? Well, what I want to know from her is why she thinks my story is a piece of ?
And I must ask, have you guys tasted a cow dick before? It must taste horrible if she wants me to go choke on one.
Please if any one thinks that my story is crap please tell me, but do give me a reason.
I'm not trying to embarrass MizzChocolate here but I do want to tell everyone about my first flame, I was waiting for it for a while.
I do know that my story is pretty slow and is pretty boring and stuff. So it's pretty much crap. I'd like to know if anyone doesn't like the story and why and how I can improve it. I mean telling me to choke on a cow dick is not going to improve the story is it?
I do thank MizzChocolate for giving me such a creative flame and my first one too!
Please do tell me why next time you guys flame!
Thanks!
JUU
Ps. I wasn't trying to embarrass MizzChocolate although it might seem that way and I'm sorry if I did. I do love her flame though. Isn't it colourful?