Well, it seems that MizzChocolate is a very, very demented little bitch. I can call her that since she calls herself that and everyone else does too. Please do go and read her profile, it seems that she loves to flame people for no reason or, her reason is that she wants to rid to world of crappy stories that she has never even bothered to read before she flames.
Actually, I wouldn't even call her reviews flames, well if you read them it seems that they are of course quite creative but it seems that she has never really read the stories and if she has, I'm sorry since, well she only comments on the first chapter anyway. And we all know that in the first chapter of each stories is pretty much crap, well at least of most stories, some are of course really good.
But I wouldn't bother talking to this MizzChocolate since she doesn't read them at all. I don't know why she bothers really; ACTUALLY I don't know why I'M bothering to write all this just because of her.
If I seemed a little rude sorry, I'm pissed; some one ate my ice-cream…
OH! And, I got a question, I know I have been a reader for…many years, but what is a beta?
I know I don't really check my stories although I wrote that I would, it's just that I'm too lazy and also I have to put it up quickly so I don't have time since I'm pretty much not allowed on the internet so I have to sneak on…
Thank you for the people who reviewed! Surprisingly there were a lot of reviews of chapter 10 which wasn't a chapter at all, it was just an announcement for my first, and very demented comment, which was too sad for a flame. But I must admit, very creative.
I might take more time now since the exams I was talking about is coming up in a week, so yeah, do continue reading anyways.
Thanks!
JUU
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Chapter 10 – Natural
BY JUUBI
Naruto's house…
Panting and sweating, he woke up. Not even bothering to check what time it was, he stumbled out of bed, ignoring that pain that shot up his chest.
Reaching the bathroom, he ripped of his shirt, checking for any injuries. Surprisingly, he found none; put the pain was still unbearable. Grabbing a towel of the stand, he washed it in cold water before whipping the sweat off his face.
It was pretty early in the morning the sun had only stared to raise, laying back down on his bed, he put a hand on his chest, breathing slowly and steadily.
It had been another memory again, but this time, he didn't remember after he woke up. But judging from the pain in his chest and the rate his heart was beating, it had either been something to do with his family or some enemies.
7:15
Grabbing a piece of paper off the table, he wrote a note and put it on the table next to his bed, before he got off his bed again and got dressed.
It was time for a walk, just to cool off.
Park…
It was quite early in the morning, Sasuke knew that, but it was too hard to stay in that house. Arguing with his father was hard work, that man just would not give up and never ever bother to look at the situation from another point of view except his own.
Sasuke sighed; unfortunately, he had forgotten his breakfast when he slammed the door. He didn't even know why that man was up at that time, he had only gotten up to get a drink but it turned out that the man wanted a explanation for being out so late the other night.
It was getting little cold, but being an Uchiha, he dealt with it. It wasn't his fault anyway, that man was always driving the family mad, it was a miracle that their mother was still there to comfort them when need, even thought their family was famous for it's wealth and power, also seemingly perfect from every angle, it was so broken up in side you couldn't even, well, do anything about it.
Sasuke couldn't help shiver a little, it was getting quite chilly, and again, he had been stupid enough not to grab his coat.
Suddenly, something was placed on his shoulders, warming him up instantly; problems forgotten of the moment, Sasuke looked up.
"You'll catch a cold, why are you sitting on a park bench without a coat in this weather?" Naruto looked, slightly amused at the situation.
Although the boy had interrupted his quiet time, Sasuke couldn't help be a little thankful, if it had been any colder, he would have to go home and face the man again.
Naruto sat down next to Sasuke, ignoring the look he got from him, "So, why is the great Uchiha out here, in the cold, staring into space?"
"Hn, it's none of your business."
"Oh? You were sitting here shivering until I came by and gave you my jacket, of course it's my business, if you don't want to tell me, that's okay but, I would like to know if possible." Naruto now even more amused at the situation.
Suddenly, he felt something he hadn't felt for a long time, an urge to, well get up and jump around, the hyperness. Naruto froze, he though he had stopped to feeling of jumping around and punching people, but he also knew it was almost impossible to get rid of this feeling and also painfully hard to.
So he did what he could do in that situation, "Hey Sasuke, since we're both cold, how about we warm up."
Sasuke just turned towards him and gave him a weird look at pretty much said 'you try something I don't like and you'll be-'
Before he could express his creativeness through his thoughts, his look was cut off, if that was possible, by Naruto jumping up from his seat and sliding into a silly stance.
"Let's spar!"
Sasuke raised his eyebrow, "I've been trained to fight ever since I was born, and you haven't had a single lesson from Gai, are you freaking crazy? Has the cold frozen you brain, do you have a fever?"
"Come on! Are you scared?" Naruto taunted.
Sasuke's eyebrow twitched, much like Itachi's, it started to wriggle off his face, "You're on, but if you end up chomping on the grass it's not my fault."
Sasuke almost ripped the jacket off his shoulders, while Naruto watched his, amused. They both slid into a stance, Naruto in a basic one, not showing what level of fighting he was, while Sasuke slid into an Uchiha stance, guarding himself.
Naruto smirked, this was going to be fun, he hadn't been able to stretch his muscles in a while and he has gotten a bit rusty.
A leaf fell from the tree that was beside them, it signaled the start. The Uchiha disappeared, but Naruto smirked again, 'Uchiha's are so predictable'.
Naruto raised one hand grabbing the air above him, and seemed to swing something around. Sasuke landed clumsily, not suspecting the sudden defense.
"Got anything else you want to so me?" Naruto asked, still smirking.
Sasuke glared and straightened himself, sliding back into a stance, focusing on Naruto once more.
He charged at him, disappearing just to appear behind, trying to kick Naruto in the back sending a few punches as well. He got blocked; Naruto had grabbed his arm and flung him away, again.
Trying again a few times, Sasuke realized he couldn't get past Naruto's defenses. "What's this? The great Uchiha Sasuke has given up already?" Naruto taunted again.
Sasuke glared again, "Go to hell."
Naruto just grinned, "Love to, but hell didn't want me, so they sent me back with express delivery."
Sasuke continued to glare, "Smart ass."
"Yes, my ass was well educated, don't you think?"
Sasuke wanted to bang his head in frustration. When he had first met Naruto, he looked too lazy to even bother to get out of his chair; the boy in front of him right now was completely different except of the laid-back attitude, this boy was taunting him, daring him to make another move, trying to making him fight.
It seemed like this boy had so many personalities, his mood swings were more frequent that a pregnant women yeah he still seemed to be able to keep cool though all of it.
Sasuke growled as he tried again, only this time, to be flung right back on to the bench seat. A second later, Naruto was back next to him, smiling lightly.
"Aren't we all warmed up now Sasuke?" Naruto said cheekily at him, knowing fully well how annoyed he was at the fact that he had lost a simple fight with a guy who had not even had one lesson with Gai.
"Where did you learn how to do that?" He asked the still grinning boy.
"Learn what?"
"How to fight like that"
Naruto's grin faded into a soft smile, "I never did, and people I have met say that I'm pretty much a natural at fighting."
Sasuke was confused, "Even if you are natural, you still have to learn techniques and how to use your power to fight better."
Naruto grinned again, "Well I guess I'm a complete natural, everything just comes," He looked at Sasuke slyly, ready to tease, "Of course, unlike the Uchiha's who have to work on they greatness, I was born with mine and obviously I still have it fully."
Sasuke growled and lunged at Naruto, but missed as the boy jumped up with a happy skip, "You can't catch me like that Sasu-chan!"
They ran across the park, jumping on the play equipment, laughing as they went. Sasuke smiled, he had almost never felt anything like it, one minute the boy in front of him was a lazy, smart computer expert and the next minute he was a silly giggly little girl, I mean boy. The body Sasuke thought was only able to move out of his computer seat for some food was now jumping up and down on the play equipment, ready to go down the slid.
Sasuke jumped from the platform he was on, surprising the blond boy, they were knocked down the slide from the force.
"Argh! Get your foot out of my mouth!"
"Well you get your fingers out of my eyes first!"
They landed in a heap down at the bottom. Naruto got up first laughing as he went.
"Come Sasu-chan, that was fun, admit it." Naruto grinned, holding out his hand for Sasuke to take.
"This is your entire fault."
"Why! You're the one with the watch! It's your fault for not checking!"
Kiba and Hinata sat quietly in the middle, heads turning side to side to watch both of their teammates fight and throw their lunch at each other.
It seemed that they had so much fun that the actually forgot to check the time and ended up half an hour last since they only remembered when they heard the school bell in the distance.
It wouldn't of been a problem but the first teacher for the day was a substitute teacher and a really grumpy one as well so they ended up with detentions, not that Naruto would usually care but he already had a whole long list of detentions he had to get to, although an extra wouldn't be a problem, it seems that he had promised Iruka that he wouldn't get into anymore trouble than he already is in.
Sasuke? He just had never had a detention in his live and right now was killing Naruto for getting him into it.
Kiba and Hinata were quite worried, both parties were usually quiet and their sudden loudness scared everyone, Naruto was usually too lazy to argue and Sasuke was just an angry, angsty, kid that mostly likes to keep to himself.
The group had given up trying to stop them fighting, Shino never bothered, Kiba tried, Hinata tried, Chouji ate, Haku wasn't there, Sakura and Ino were arguing over something as well but on another table, Neji never bothered but did stared at them for a long time, Kankuro was sitting with Temari and Gaara who never sat with them, Konohamaru was in junior school, Shikamaru slept though the whole thing, and TenTen was forgotten by all (not being mean or anything but I couldn't think of anymore).
Shikamaru woke up, "Hey guys, I have an announcement, all they bosses have left for something important and the only people left are Yoko-Kyuubi-sama, Shukaku-Ichibi-sama, Hoko-Gobi-sama, Nekomata-Nibi-sama, Makumori-Shichibi-sama and Hachimata-Hachibi-sama." And then he fell asleep again.
"You know, the easier way would have been just to say the ones that were gone since more of them stayed anyway." Neji interrupted the silence.
"Meh" everyone went back to what they were doing.
Neji shrugged, "Well at least some of them went, it's easier to remember who is who now.
I'm still working on the longer thing but it's too hard, I'm still doing short chapters.
People I have reached two of my goals, the first one was to get over 50 reviews, and the second one was to write more than 70 pages of crap, right now, I have 73 pages, font: Century Gothic, Font Size: 9.
I feel so good now, even though most of it is Gibberish, surprisingly Gibberish is a word, I still have 70 pages!
It's pretty good!
If anyone has any, any, any ideas give them to me.
Gimmie Gimmie, Gimmie, Gimmie Gimmie
See you's later people!
JUU
Fact: Did you know that JUU sounds like the Chinese word for pig? Also, that BI sounds like the Chinese word for nose?
I mentioned that my user name was JUUBI and my mum cracked up since she said Pig Nose and I got sad since I though JUUBI was a cute name.
But who cares! Pigs are cute! Has anyone read Fullmoon? Well Gut-chan is so cute! He's so adorable!
But what ever
If anyone knows a cool name please tell me since I want to change my name now…
Thanks!
JUU