A big thanks to my reviewers you are my motivation guys.

School Librarian

Edward surely is an expert at self-loathing. He is lucky we love him anyway ;)

tinkapjill40

Thank you for your wonderful review I think Jacob doesn't know about Edward's powers and Edward doesn't know … yet… about the lie. It's all connected to the dream really even if it's really metaphorical.

jacobblacklover24

I'll be waiting for my review hihi ;)

SymphonyRain

I'm glad you are open to both possibilities. I hope you will choose the same as me.

So, here it is.

Eclipse part two

When I woke up the day after it seemed my whole world had crumbled around me again. I decided that I would drive up to their old house. Edward needed at least a place to park his car. Then I could start investigating from there. I didn't care about missing class, when Charlie would get back I would just have to pretend I was sick. I gathered my things and drove to the beautiful house nestled in the forest. I was disappointed when I realised there was no car around. I decided to get a closer look anyway. I tried the front door and oddly enough, it wasn't lock. I got inside shaking slightly. It was like stood still beyond these doors. Every piece of furniture was covered with white sheets. I walked among them like a ghost. When I saw the piano I lost what was left of my composure. It had been recently used. The white sheet was carefully folded on the bench. I was having problem breathing. I knew the piano was the only proof of his presence I would find in here so I regretfully decided to leave the house. I got out and saw a miracle.

The sight of him made my heart stop. I couldn't believe it, it was really him. Pale angelic features; his jaw tensed into an expression of great seriousness. He was leaning against my truck like he had been waiting for me. Wind was playing with his bronze messy hair. How I used to love playing with those hair. His beautiful face wore all the sadness in the world.

I ran towards him without thinking, without breathing, there was nothing else in the world but him, he was alive. He was here. My heart was racing, my blood boiled madly in my veins. I launched myself at him, he caught me in mid-air and I clutched my arms around his hard body. I locked my eyes deep into his, bewitched to see them sparkle at me. His Topaz eyes were telling me so much; I wanted to lose myself in their depths. I could see hurt, worry and love behind the rich golden colour. My entire body was shaking furiously. Electricity ran from his fingers as he lightly brushed my skin from my elbow to the back of my neck. His touch was exactly as I remembered it, cold but softer than silk. It sent shivers all over my warm body. Tenderness irradiated from him, he pulled me closer against his chest, shifted his body so that my back rested against the car and he bent down. His hungry lips found mine in a way I never thought possible, it was a soft, slow, heartbreaking kiss.

My mind began to fly, to the meadow where we'd shared our first kiss. How he'd first said I love you. My love for him awakened and got bigger than the sun. His arms were still holding me up. For a second, everything felt right again. I would never have thought it was possible to feel such a longing for his touch; such a craving for his love. I felt like melting into him. Becoming only one; never seeing him turn away from me again. It was so intense I can't describe it. I wanted to give him everything that I am. The kiss stopped and he rested his forehead against mine, our noses touching lightly. I was intoxicated by his scent and he seemed to feel the same. Only my scent was sweeter for him than any other scent. My blood sang to him. But at this moment where time didn't exist; I knew my blood wasn't what he was missing the most.

"Breathe Bella." He whispered low in my ear. His velvet voice was perfect. I was forced back down to earth. I realised I'd been holding by breath the entire time. I forced air into my lungs. Edward placed me safely on the ground and his face hardened again. It had just been a fleeting moment of happiness before reality came back to hit me in the face. We had belonged to each other once more for a fleeting moment, 'le temps d'une éclipse.'

Ok I'm not completely happy about this. I wanted it to be really INTENSE. I was listening "Dancing" from Elisa while I was writing it and I wish the words could have expressed half the emotion of the song. Also I used a French expression. I really couldn't translate it without ruining it for me so you'll forgive me. Anyway I updated so let me know what you think. ;) I love you guys. Oh and should I do the Edward's POV of this ?