-1a/n ok, I know this story isn't the best, but it's hard to do Carlisle's, cuz it's described very well in the books, and I wanted tried my best with his, all I asked is that you try some of my other stories, and that you read this chapter, it's Edward…oh, and it may be mixed up in changes, so I'm doing by when they joined the family…so Alice and Jazzy
are going last…
Cullen Changes: Edward
I was in the hospital. My mother, father, and I were all sick with the Spanish Influenza. We were at the point of death. We were all going to die soon, no matter what the doctors did.
I heard someone talking to themselves outside…or I thought they were talking. I have been hearing thoughts, some how, and I can't control it.
"Oh my, Elizabeth died. I hope Edward will be ok…" she was thinking, or saying. I knew which one of us she was talking about. Edward senior, my father, had died three hours ago, Carlisle Cullen, and quite handsome unmarried doctor who was trying to get father to not die.
It was anguishing. My father died only three hours, and my mother died just now. In the same day. I did not think I could live, no, I know I cannot live; I know I will die soon.
Doctor Cullen came to my room soon. I heard him say something, but his mouth was not moving. So he was thinking it…How did she know what I was? Does she really want Edward to be changed? I was confused by these thoughts. I would die, nothing could keep me alive, nothing, and no changes could do it! Why would I be thinking of changing my clothes when I was dieing anyway?? Then, he really talked.
"Edward, your mother is dead, I am going to take you to my house, is that ok?" I could tell that no matter what, he was going to take me to his house, so I may as well just say yes.
"Yes, it would not matter, though. I know I am going to die."
"Yes, you will die, we know this, but this may just help you live longer," he told me.
He took me to a small, one bedroom, house. I was wondering what he was doing. He took me to the center of the living room.
The strangest thing happened then. He sat down next to me, and leaned forward. "Stay very, very still, Edward." he said, I could not move anyway. This was very frightening for me, why was he doing this?
I knew seconds later, when his lips touched my neck, and he bit me. Carlisle Cullen, a doctor, just bit me.
I thought I was going to die right there, but, no. I started to get very sharp pains in my neck. It felt like I was on fire.
The feeling spread. I yelled at Carlisle to stop the pain, to set out the fire that was burning through my skin and soul. I yelled. I wished to die. I did not want this; I would rather die then go through multiple days of burning pain just to die as soon as the pain left my body.
After what seemed like decades, the pain seceded. I could not hear a thing for a second, but then, then I heard all the noise of what was happening from the next block, and all the voices of people talking about things to themselves from the next three houses or so.
I heard Carlisle, too. He was right next to me, mouth closed, but I heard him, I believe he was thinking. Will he join me?
"Join you in what?" I asked him.
His eyes widened, can…is…could…does he…can he hear what I'm thinking? He was trying to find the right words.
"I…I think I can…I think I can read your mind. I think I can read all minds…" I told Carlisle.
I have never heard of a vampire that can read minds…I caught the last part. He said vampire. But…vampires don't exist! They can't! vampires are mythical creatures!
"Vampire? Vampire?! VAMPIRE?!!" I yelled at him, furious that he was trying to tell me I was a mythical creature… "Vampires don't exist, doctor, they can't exist." I added, once I had calmed down enough.
"I am deeply sorry. Vampires are real. And…I had to save you…your mother asked me. I would have felt so…so bad not to have saved you." he told me.
Then I felt it. I had the desire to drink blood. He was not lying…I…I was a monster. Why?
a/n is this better than Carlisle's? I hope so…tell me!! And ask your friends to read it too!!