Chapter Three
Hidan let out a low groan as Kakuzu slowly teased him, running the hand that grasped him from his tip, down the length of him, and then back again. He could feel his pleasure building… "More…" He panted, his head falling back as Kakuzu chuckled against his neck. A few more threads came off of his captor's body and wound around each other, in a sharp point. The end ran lightly against his skin, making him shiver in response. "Mmmm…" He licked his lips in expectation and then gave a cry as it pierced his shoulder going deep into his flesh. Blood trickled down out of the wound, over his skin, and onto the threads that held him bound.
The threads pulled out and Kakuzu bit Hidan's neck, giving a small growl as he quickened his strokes. "Ah…Kakuzu…" Hidan moaned his name between ragged breaths, causing him to smirk as he ran his tongue over the other man's skin. "Hidan… you're so hard… so close… I can feel it…" He whispered against the soft flesh beneath his mouth and nipped at it lightly. Almost… Hidan's breathing continued to pick up it's pace and he was making small sounds of pleasure, urging Kakuzu on. The sharpened threads scrapped against his skin, cutting into him and leaving scratches. The pain only added to the enjoyment, to the bliss of what they were doing… There.
Hidan tensed as he came, trembling from the force of it, and gave another cry. Sweat covered his skin and he was limp from exhaustion. The threads receded and Kakuzu caught him to hold him upright. He let his head rest against Kakuzu's neck as his breathing returned to normal. He lifted his head after a moment to settle his pale eyes on his partner's white and black ones. "What… about you?" Damn... the guy gets me off and suddenly I care. He frowned and looked away, his cheeks flushing. "What about me?" Kakuzu's chest rumbled from his voice, from the deep pitch of the resonance. He sounded amused. "You made me cum and got nothing in return." Hidan stated flatly. Kakuzu's eyes narrowed and he tightened his arms around the man he held. "I will have you again and I will take my pleasure from you then." He growled softly and then released Hidan, turning away to get his clothes. "We need to go. Wash yourself off.
Hidan scowled and huffed, wading back into the pond to clean the blood off of himself. He glanced up to Kakuzu every now and again, ignoring the sting of the water on his open wounds. I will have you again… It sounded like a promise. He frowned and looked away, turning his gaze back to his own body. Arrogant ass... He smirked and got out. Next time he'd make the bastard work for it if he wanted it so badly. He chuckled quietly to himself and pulled on his still wet clothes. They hadn't fully dried, but they had gotten to the point where they could be wearable. He looked back at Kakuzu who was dressed and waiting. This would be interesting…
End Chapter Three
I've finally gotten it typed up and ready to be posted up. I apologize for the fact that there was an error I overlooked in Chapter Two, but it has been all taken care of now. It was pointed out to me by a friend and I fixed it. I really appreciate everyone's comments. It's good to know that my work is being admired.
Once I write the next chapter I'll get it typed as well… I just need to stop being lazy and actually do it. I usually don't write much on the weekend... so I can't really promise anything new until Monday. XD
As for issues with the title, I'm well aware that it isn't…the best of things. But quite frankly I suck at titles all together. I elaborated a bit on my profile, so I won't rant about it here. But I'm open to any and all suggestions. If you wish to submit a title that you think fitting, then send it to me and I'll check it out. Any help is appreciated and I enjoy reading all of your comments and responses to my stories.
Well, until next time!!
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