A hopefully less-confusing version on promises.
On a side note sorry it took me so long to post something new. I just graduated from high school, so my time has been all school focused of late. Please review
Promises
When they were young, one of them yelled a promise for the world to hear.
When I become Hokage, I'll change the Hyuga, by a loser who became a winner, to a winner who was made to see the light.
And now that they are older, they have both found peace and happiness. They have both made lives worth living.
Now the young Hokage holds his son of nearly five-years-old knowing his son's white eyes marks him as different. Now the Byukugan genius holds his son of nearly four-years-old hoping to save his son from ever being marked.
It is time you fulfilled your promise, it is time for the Hyuga to change
see ya next time.