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Shadowpup and his brothers were lounging around there nursery's entrance sunning there pelts when Shadowpup had a sudden thought. "lets go exploring", Stealthpup looked up at him with his head tilted to one side "but we already explored the whole camp what else is there" Shadowpup opened his mouth to respond but before he could get a word out Hawkpup gasped you don't mean going outside the camp do you."

Shadowpup shuffled his feet

"well i was thinking we could explore outside the camp just for a little bit" That sounds great" Stealthpup growled excitedly.

Shadowpup looked at his brother then turned to Hawkpup headed tilted, "you want to go or are you to scared of the big bad woods" he teased.

Hawkpup looked uncertain "he's scared" Stealthpup smirked. "Im not scared I just think that's a hair brain idea to go exploring outside of camp when were going to be made apprentices soon."

"We have nothing to worry about we wont get caught were masters at sneaking around and hiding" Shadowpup stared into Hawkpups deep blue eyes waiting for the answer. Hawkpup please say yes i dont want go go with out you Shadowpup thought.

Stealthpup was looking at Shadowpup to Hawkpup waiting for a answers, finely Hawkpup shook his head as if he was shaking off a bad thought "all right lets do it but it has to be quick. Stealthpup ran in a little circle "all right when do we leave."

"right now while the day is still young".

The pups snuck around camp looking for the best route to get out of the camp, not long after they started looking they found one it was a pup size hole behind the elders den.

"All right you guys ready" Shadowpup said peaking his little nose in the hole, Stealthpup knobbed eager to get going, Hawkpup took a little more time to answer but finally he to knobbed his head.

One by one the black pelted brothers went in the hole and out the other side into into the woods.

"so were to" squeaked Stealthpup, Shadowpup thought for a moment "how about we go to the tall river."

"Do we even no were that is" Hawkpup replied, "yes Swiftshadow told me were to go", Shadowpup started walking north he kept sniffing the air every few steps to make sure they don't run into a patrol or a hunting party's. Stealthpup started to run ahead he was clearly enjoying the freedom they had while it lasted.

A loud roar sounded behind them, the pups stopped in there tracks Stealthpup was ahead a couple tail lengths, all at want the pups turned around to see behind them. "Great fenrisclan what is that" whimpered Hawkpup.

The pups were staring area huge massive thing it has shaggy brown fur its mouth was open showing large canine teeth the thing was drooling every were .

The monster had short legs compared to its massive body. The pups slowly backed away.

The monster reared up on its hind legs it gave another terrifying roar before it came down and started to run at the pups, the pups turned tail and ran as fast as the could, They could hear the monster crashing after them.

Great fenrisclan were going to die, thought Shadowpup.

They pups reached flat rocky land they stopped they were at the tall river, "we have to jump" yelled Stealthpup, Before any of them said anything Stealthpup backed up and ran full speed towards the tall river right at the edge he leapt he flew across the river landing safely on the other side.

Shadowpup did the same thing he to landed on the other easily.

"Hurry Hawkpup that thing is coming" yelled Shadowpup, Hawkpup backed up a little then he started running at the tall river he leapt at the edge he's not going to make it thoughtShadowpup.

Hawkpup just barley missed the ledge but luck was on there side he landed right on the edge.

"The monster is coming" yelled Stealthpup, Stealthpup started to back away from the ledge but they didn't need to worry the beast seemed to not notice the river because he just ran right of the ledge.

The pups could hear the monster thing roar as it fell into the water below.

Hawkpup laid were he landed panting heavily "im so glad that wasn't me".

Just as he said that the ground started to shake the edge of the tall river were Hawkpup lay started to crumble.

On the other side of the river Swiftshadow appeared all he could do was yell "NO!" as the ground gave away beneath Hawkpup, Hawkpup went tumbling into the river his blue eyes were wide terrified he locked his gaze to Shadowpup right before he hit the water and got swept away in the strong current.

Shadowpup's mind went blank after seeing his brothers terrified eye, all he could remember was the ground beneath him started to shake Stealthpup grabbed his scruff pulling him back words As the ground he was standing on started to crumble. "you have to get out of here" Shadowpup could here Swiftshadow yelling at the otherside but he dident care all he could think about was his brothers deep blue eyes stareing at him,and then suddenly Stealthpup grabbed his scruff and started pulling him back faraway from the Tall river, Away from the crumbling soil so they wont fall.


Ok please review Flames will be laughed at the first person who reviews will get a very rare Hawkpup plushie and anyother reviewers (including the one who one the Hawkpup plushie) will get a Stealthpup plushie and a Timberclan calender it has all of timberclan in it.