Eheheh... i don't think this story is going so well...

oh yeah, i forgot to say like... a whole bunch of things in the first chapter. First of all, I disclaim EVERytHING here that's Kingdom Hearts, except for my OC characters and some twist that i put in.

um... i don't mind being flamed or commented... it really just doesn't matter to me. I respect other people's opinions and is find with it. Who knows, maybe all of them will help me with my writing or soemthing... but, that's all... for now, until i can think of anything.

Chapter 5: A New World! Is This… for real?

Meanwhile in another place called Traverse Town...

"Look, a star's goin' out!" Goofy observed pointing to the sky. Goofy and Donald Duck saw a star up in the sky.

"Come on. Let's hurry." Donald ordered. Goofy, Donald Duck, and Pluto moves on.

"Where's that key..." Donald mumbled to herself.

"Hey, ya know, maybe we ought to go find Leon." Goofy stated. Goofy saw Pluto going in the other direction.

"Uh, Donald. Ya know, I betcha that..." Goofy started.

"Aw, what do you know, you big palooka?" Donald angrily answered.

"What do I know? Hmm... Come on, Pluto." Meanwhile, Pluto spots Sora in an alley, unconscious and licks his face, which woke him up.

"Huh? Ugh…What a dream..." Sora said sleepily. Pluto then tries to jump on Sora. "This isn't a dream!" Sora shouted standing up. He looked around trying to find Tory but couldn't find her.

"Oh man… where's Tory? Did she land somewhere else?" Sora thought to himself.

"Where am I? Oh, boy." He then talks to Pluto. "Do you know where we are?" Pluto then runs back around the corner.

"Hey..." Sora said after him. He then walks out of the alley and in the town of Traverse Town...

"This is totally weird... I'm, in another world!" Sora exclaimed surprised. Sora explores the town and then went to the Accessory Shop.

"Hey there, how can I... Aw, it's only a kid." A guy with blonde hair and a cigar said turning around.

"I'm not a kid! And the name's Sora!"

"Okay, okay, simmer down. So why the long face, Sora? You lost or somethin'? "

"No! Well, maybe. Where are we?" Sora asked

"Huh?" We're in Traverse Town. A place where refugees like yourself and I who lost our worlds come to and stay safe.

"Traverse Town... So, gramps, is this really another world?"

"Don't call me gramps! The name's Cid! Anyway... Not sure what you're talkin' about, but this sure ain't your island."

"Hmm... Guess I'd better start looking for Riku and Kairi. Oh! And Tory too!"

"Well, good luck with whatever it is you're doing. If you ever run into trouble, you come to me. I'll look out for you." After Sora fully prepares himself by buying some equipment, Sora heads to the Second District. In there, he saw a man who falls down on the ground and dies. His heart came out and it formed into a Heartless. Then, the Shadows appeared.

"It's those creatures from the island!" Sora stated surprised. Sora fights the Heartless along the way while searching for the three districts. After that, Sora goes back to the Accessory Shop and talks to Cid.

"Still haven't found 'em? Keep your chin up. Take another look around town." Sora goes outside. And then...

"They'll come at you out of nowhere." A voice suddenly says to Sora.

"Who are you?" Sora asked kind of scared.

"And they'll keep on coming at you, as long as you continue to wield the Keyblade. But why? Why would it choose a kid like you?" He continued. The man then comes out from the shadows. He has brown hair that layers to about his neck with dark brown eyes. He wears black leather pants along with a black leather jacket with a white shirt under and black gloves. He also carries a sword with him, but his sword has a blade and a gun connected to eachother called a gunblade.

"Hey, what's that supposed to mean?" Sora asked now kind of mad.

"Never mind. Now, let me see that Keyblade."

"What? There's no way you're getting this!"

"All right, then have it your way." Sora fights Leon. After the fight, Leon kneels to the ground and is still holding his Gunblade.

"Now...you're...gonna...you're gonna..." Sora said exhausted. He then collapsed and become unconscious.

"Aw, you're slipping, Leon." A girl said from behind him.

"I went easy on him. Looks like things are worse than we thought. A lot worse." The man said. Meanwhile, Donald Duck and Goofy are still searching for Leon.

"Gawrsh, there's nobody here. Sure is spooky!" goofy said.

"Aw, phooey. I'm not scared." Donald replied. A young woman taps her finger at Donald Duck's shoulder. Donald Duck freaked out and grabbed on to Goofy. They turn around and they see a girl wearing a pink dress that has brown hair and green eyes and a pink bow to hold her hair.

"Excuse me. Did the king send you?" She asked them.

So... yeah, i don't know what to put here either, but i'm gonna put another chapter up and tell me if you peoples would like me to continue or not... thanks,

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