Hello everybody! (that just sounded corny but WHO CARES) Well, here is the next poem. This one is actually not a song, just an ordinary, but confusing, poem. It's about living your life for Satan, thinking it's okay at first but realizing how dangerous it is, and then realizing that God is the only one who can really calm ya down. I personally don't think it's as good as the previous poems cause of all the and and then words in it, but I said the poems were from when I was 14 so bare with me.
Shaken
You're shaking all over and you just can't stop
You're looking for an answer but what?
then you feel a strong hand grab you roughly
you stop shaking only for a moment
then the hand pushes you back
you're going out of control
you're shaking harder than before
and you can hear a voice laughing at you
then the voice leaves
and a gentle hand touches you shoulder
you stop shaking and are calm and happy
then you walk away and you just start shaking all over again
and then the ruff hand grabs you
and pushes you even harder
and the same voice starts laughing at you
and then starts screaming at you
and you run back
and gentle arms rap around you
and you're safe and secure again
So did ya think it's as badly written as I think it is? PLEASE REVIEW AND TELL ME WHAT YA THINK!