Thanks to everyone who has read and reviewed so far! And special thanks all you anon reviewers! Since I can't thank ya with email or a private message I'm thanking ya here: Thanks so so much Lizzy, HokoKira, Meh, and Gigi for reading and reviewing! Lizzy and HokoKira: I'm glad ya liked the poems! And Meh: I'm sorry ya didn't really like them. Like I said, these were from when I was 14. Yeah, I know I don't have a future in song writing, I mainly write them to praise and honor my God, who ROCKS by the way. Well, I appreciate it that ya took your time to read them. And finally Gigi: I am not prejudiced against nonbelievers! I guess it's hard to describe. Well, I'm sorry if it sounded horribly, horribly rude and stuck up. I guess people think we Christians act like we're always right and nonbelievers are always wrong. It's just hard for ya to understand, here's an example: let's say ya know the truth about some event like a fight that happened at your school. Everyone is saying that this guy started it but you know that it was really this girl who started it. So what would ya do? Would ya go along and be like "yeah, that guy sure started it" or will ya stand up for what ya believe and for what is right and be like, "no it was that girl, not the guy" See if ya did what is right they would be like "shut up, don't ya see, everyone knows he started it. Your just being a stuck up sore loser!" Kind of a bad example (I really couldn't think of anything!) and the fight in school has nothing to do with the real world! So we Christians are kinda like: well, we actually know the truth and we know what the best high is cause we've actually experienced it and we know there's a better way for ya to live your life. And we try not to seem stuck up.
Well, now that I'm finally done with that, here's the next poem. This poem is similar to the helping hand poem. This one was actually written when I was 15. I actually wrote down the date for this one: May 11, 2005. Hey, this was like written 2 days and one year ago!
It's you God
When everyone falls apart
I'm not giving in
I refuse
cause I'm not that week
when everyone goes
I'll stand strong
I don't need them
I only need you
cause it's you
God
you God
all I need is you
please don't let me die in the fog
that pushed others down
please let me live to the surface
and not drown
I gotta need your helping hand
oh all I need is you
I know, VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY SHORT! PLEASE R&R!