Hey hey hey peeps! How's it goin? Thanks so so so so so so so (well you get the idea) MUCH everyone for reading and reviewing! Special thanks to you anon reviewers: Schoscho, Lynne, Monica, Meh, and Carramine.
Schoscho: Yeah, I agree I messed up on wording that intro to the untitled poem. So, yeah, it's not about what us Christians say, it's about listening to what God says. What we have to say isn't important at all. We could talk on and on about our own opinions but they don't really mean a thing. What matters is what God has to say. (so sorry about wording that one wrong!)
Lynne: yeah, it is all about God. Thanks for being so supportive, it really means a lot to me!
Monica: Thanks for your support, I'm glad ya liked the poems!
Both Monica and Meh: Well, I'm glad your kinda done with that little cat fight (laugh, me laughing). It's really okay that you didn't like the poems, Meh. Yeah, your probably a very smart person who laugh likes to read more advances stuff, you yippie for you! (I'm weird, yes, I know)
Carramine: Thanks for being so supportive and taking time to read them. Sorry 'bout the spelling errors, tehe! (I didn't even know I had any)
Thanks again everyone!
And now for the moment you've all been waiting for, the poem! (or rather, the 2 poems) They're both about Heaven. By the way, these were both written this year, 2006, when I was 15. (yeah, like ya even care!) And these 2 are only poems, not songs. I've put them both together cause, yeah, they're both very short and both have to do with HEAVEN!
yippie!
The Heaven Song
Purple soft skies
sparkling stars
glistening golden roads
light everywhere
the beautiful tree
with the beautiful fruit
radiant angels
perfect people everywhere
a huge towering throne
that God sits on
crowns laid at his feet
numbers of people worshiping him
God looking down in love
at everyone who had faith
to get to Heaven
Drop of Heaven
When I'm happy
when I see God's beauty
and wondrous creation on earth
it's like a drop of Heaven
Thanks so much for readin and reiviewin!
you guys (and girls, laugh!) are so awesome. I really really appriciate your encouragement and support!
Christians: Let's RAWK this world for Christ!
Peace out and God Bless Ya!