Colt-man:
Thanks for that info. I will make adjustments to the story. And I will make the 'not wanting' thing more clear. They may want things, but the won't be jealous of other people for their possessions. And the 'Rolf not eating' thing, that's a challenge, so if you have any advice, let me know. And I got the 'earth suits' and 'sewn eyes' and the punishments of the other terraces from Dante's 'Divine Comedy.' It's an old piece of literature, so if you haven't hear of it, I'm not surprised.
Disclaimer: I do not own Ed, Edd, 'n', Eddy.
The group was done with envy, and was on their way to the next terrace. The terrace of wrath.
"Let's see, to release ourselves of wrath, we must walk around in acrid smoke until we are told to stop. But this will be tricky, there will be demons and angels telling us to stop, if a demon tells us to stop, we must ignore it. If an angel tells us to stop, we must listen. Sounds simple enough," Double D read.
"Demons? Sarah, I'm scared," Jimmy said.
"Don't worry silly, I'll hold your hand," Sarah said.
"Ooooh, it also says, 'no holding hands,'" Double D read from the smaller print of the sign. That's when Jimmy really began to shake. But they still started it. Then, a demon came in front of Ed.
"You can go on now," the demon said in his raspy voice.
"No way bucko," Ed said. He pushed him out of the way and continued to walk around in the acrid smoke. When the group was together, an angel came in front of them.
"You can go on now," the angel said in its sweet voice.
They arrived at the next terrace. The terrace of sloth. Double D read over it silently.
"Oh Lord," Double D screamed.
"What is it Double D," Kevin asked.
"To purge our souls of the sin of sloth, we must run around in many laps until we are told to stop. And we are not aloud to stop in the middle," Double D explained. He knew how bad he was at running.
"Sweet," Kevin said, as the jock.
"Well, we might as well get our tushies healthy," Jimmy said.
"See ya," Kevin said as he ran off. Everyone else started a second later.
"Ahhh, my toes," Nazz screamed.
"My legs can't take much more of this Sarah, I'm going down," Jimmy screamed.
"Jimmy, keep on running," Sarah cried.
"Farewell cruel world," Jimmy said, about to fall, but right before he did, the angel said that they could continue.
"Just on time," Jimmy commented, giving the angel a quarter.
The angel just looked at it.
"Obviously you haven't been to the terrace of greed yet, the angel said, throwing the quarter away, having Eddy dive for it.
