I feel horrible. I haven't updated this in like, forever! The only reason I actually remembered was because I was deleting my old mail and realized all the people who reviewed, added to alert, added to favorite, and so on, my stories. Thank you guys! I'm glad people enjoyed them! If this comes out bad blame the music I'm listening to. Alternative, rap, pop and Latin don't mix well one after another.
The first chapter of the story I changed a lot since I found lots of errors. So reading it over would be great. You wont be dissapointed with future chapters. I definately can say I've improved my writing a ton and learned lots of new words since my little "vacation". Which I should probably explain.
So here's my explanation: I got in loads of trouble and couldn't use the Internet. It wasn't something little either. It was school related. Something to do with not being there.... at all. He he he, yeah. I'm never doing that again. Well, as long as I live in Pennsylvania at least. New York is not one of the best places to grow up. Many bad influences.... Including myself. An apology should be in order. "I'm sorry I'm such a bad ass, I promise not to get caught next time." Well, enough stalling. Here's the next chapter.
And before people hate me, Naruto does not end up with Mitsuki. I'm not sure who ends up with who yet. And I don't normally put OC's, but she's there for an important reason. You'll find out sooner or later. This is just a fic I came up with to portray how crazy a high school can be when there's ninjas involved. Of course, it has a more complex plot than that, but you'll have to read more to really understand it.
Disclaimer: I don't even own the computer I'm writing on (my sister does) do you think I'm going to own Naruto? I don't think so.
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As Naruto entered the girl didn't look up, not once, from her book. She seemed too absorbed in it. Looking at her he couldn't shake the feeling that they had met before. That really didn't make him feel any better, so Naruto just tried not to disturb her. Or he would of if it wasn't because the side of the dorm she was on was the one that didn't look occupied. But before Naruto got to say anything, the girl had closed her book, got up, and was heading out the door. Her black her was hiding her eyes, so Naruto couldn't see her expression.
I'm starting to think that every girl here is a weirdo. She could've at least said something, not just walked away.
"At least now people wont judge you if you turn gay. You could just justify it by saying every girl in this school is nuts." Kyuubi sure knew the worst times to show up. I'm not going to turn gay just because two girls at this school are wierd. And what makes you think the guys aren't equally wierd either? No response. Hello? Still no response. Why do you have to disappear while I'm in the middle of saying something?!
"This is hopeless." He went to where he assumed was his side of the room, and flopped down on the bed. Minutes later, the knob of the door was rattling. It was the girl that was there before.
"Sorry for just leaving like that. I don't usually do that sort of thing. So how about I introduce myself. I'm Mitsuki." She extended her hand for Naruto to shake. He sat up and did so. Compared to his tanned hand, hers was really pale. "And of course, like everyone else in this school, I know who you are. Uzuamki Naruto."
"Kitten, there's something different about this girl." Now you decide to return! He decided to just ignore Kyuubi.
"News sure travels fast around here."
"Sure does." It was getting hard to start a conversation with her. She seemed really anti-social. "Oh, um, you're roommate isn't here, but you'll meet him eventually." She started walking out the door. "If you need anything I'll be next door. I know this school like the back of my hand."
Minutes later, Naruto could be seen pacing up and down his dorm. He was extremely bored now. He had no one to keep him company. Even a talk with Kyuubi would be nice, but he just refuses to talk. He couldn't even go inside his conscience to see what's going on. He just wanted something to do. So, he headed out the door to go exploring.
The school was enormous. It seemed big enough for there to be two schools in one. With the school being so big he quickly got lost. About five times. The worst part was, there was no student in sight. He half expected there to at least be some people there. School doesn't start until next week!
After his seventh dead end, he decided to ask Kyuubi for help. Kyuubi did have a strong nose, twenty-twenty vision and great memory.
Kyuubi! Please help me! I'm lost.... and hungry! Like all his attempts, he didn't get a response. He tried bargaining. I'll even call you Kyuubi-sama if you help me! Or anything you want! I'll even eat your favorite foods! Just pleas help me! Naruto eventually gave up. Expecting Kyuubi to help him when he needed it was like trying to stop the Earth from orbiting the Sun. Completely pointless.
He then remembered that since Kyuubi and Naruto share the same body, they also share the great sense of smell. If he couldn't get help from Kyuubi, sniffing around to find people was the next best choice. It wasn't long before he smelled a familiar scent, yet it was so different at the same time. He felt he knew who it belonged to, yet he didn't. His indecisiveness caused him to bump into said person.
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This chapter was suppose to be a lot longer and I mean A LOT longer, but I have to stop it here to ask for your suggestions.
All the characters in the Naruto series will be present or mentioned somehow in this fic. I already have it all planned out, I just need suggestions for ages. All the genin are 14, except Naruto since his Birthday is in October, a month after school starts. And anyone else who's Birthday is in September or later. Now, should Itachi be greater than 18 or 16 or less. This is important because the characters still play the roles they do normally, just modified. It's just that I think it would be weird for an 18 year old to be after a 13 year old (like how he does in the anime/manga). It just sounds kind of wrong if it were in the real world, you know what I mean? All the other Akatsuki members will be in college (I'll figure out an appropriate age for them), I just need an age for Itachi that wouldn't sound wrong in case police get involved.
Me: Is it just me or are the author's note longer than the actual chapters?
Naruto: No, you're right on with that.
Me: Ugh! I promise the next chapter will be longer!
