I do not own Twilight, but i wish to have my own Edward.

Thanks for the review miss.dramatikkkk, yes I am going to be trying to make it longer and as I said before there is going to be a twist to this story.

Soon after they met Edward spent the rest of the day with Bella, watching the little swan swim and play around the banks of Silver Lake. Edward smiled slightly at the sight, enjoying the carefree attitude and the happiness that Bella emitted into the air around them. Yet still, he felt a pang of sadness in his heart, watching Bella made him remember the childhood that was taken away from him.

Flash Back

"Father I can't even lift this, why must I start training now?" whined a young Edward, struggling with picking up the heavy sword.

"One day you are going to rule this land, you need to be a trained warrior, not some music playing pussy, now pick up that damn sword and stop complaining!" Edward's eyes widened surprise, but he quickly grasped his sword and began practicing the techniques he just saw.

After what felt like hours of training and memorizing techniques Edward was beginning to lose stamina. As he was thrusting his sword in an intricate new design his fingering on the sword slipped, the deafening sound of metal crashing to the stone floor reverberated throughout the room. Edward looked up slowly, his heart picked up speed as his eyes met the ones of his fathers, pure anger etched into them.

"You insolent child! How do you expect to be warrior material if you can not handle a simple sword!" his father roared.

Edward watched in fear as his father's hand came swiftly down across his soft, reddened cheek. He felt his head snap to the side as his hot tears trailed down his cheeks, mixing with the blood drawn from the slap. Edward did not have time to take in the blow as another one was landed in his stomach, causing the wind to be knocked out of him.

"Father stop!" Edward choked out as his father landed another blow into his little body, causing blood to spurt out of his parted lips.

After his father was done with him he quickly turned and hurried out of the training room, leaving a messed up Edward on the cold stone floor half unconscious. He was a mess. His training clothes torn and covered in blood, his arms and torso laced with cuts and already showing bruises. He struggled to stand, a cry of pain slipped past his blood soaked lips as he crumpled to the ground, letting unconsciousness take over.

"Honk!" cried Bella, flapping her wings frantically in Edward's glazed face. Edward hadn't even noticed he dazed off.

"Shush its okay now, I am sorry if I worried you," he whispered softly to Bella, seeing how much concern and worry was filled into the deep crevices of those chocolatey brown eyes. Satisfied with his answer, Bella bounced up and down in his lap, honking and squawking.

Edward smiled a crooked grin and picked up the little swan and put her gently down into the shallow end of the lake. Bella looked up at him in confusion and Edward smiled sadly.

"I have to go home now, but I will come back as soon as I can ok Bella?" he said to her, his emerald orbs speaking to her more then his words. Bella honked and took off for the far end of the lake. Edward watched her leave, then sighed sadly as he grabbed his abandoned sword and slowly trudged back to Alkali Castle.

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As Edward slowly walked up the stairs and into the castle. The castle is large and majestic, the grand hall long and wide and sparcely decorated. The most decoration was the long, green, embroidered carpet that stretched down the length of the desolate hall. Edward shook his head sadly and went quickly to his room, as to avoid his father.

When he got to his room he dropped his sword to the foor, a resounding clang rang through the room as it hit the cold stone. Edward fell to his bed and started to gaze off again, only to end up drifting asleep.

Dream

"How did i get back here?" Edward wondered as he found himself back at the banks Silver Lake. As he was surveying his surroundings he heard a voice, a sweet melodic voice drifting from the lake. In haste Edward turned his head into the direction of said voice only to be stunned by what he saw.

It tis a woman, a woman with a figure any man would desire. Her hips perfectly rounded and her breasts and ass just the right size. Her hair a deep rich brown, shiny and draped accross her shoulders in soft curls. But what got to him the most were her eyes, the same deep rich chocolatey brown that his little swan Bella has.

Edward hesitantly moved foward, afraid that if he scared her that she would disappear. All she did was keep singing, kept singing that sweet and soft melody that sent his unsteady heart soaring.

Then she noticed him and abrutly the music stopped. Edward came to a halt as well, emerald met chocolate once again and in the blink of an eye she was gone, disappearing from sight. Edward came out of his stunned silence and called out to her, asking for her to tell him who she is, but she would not stop and soon she was out of sight. Edward slumped to the ground in defeat, feeling as if his heart was breaking again.

Edward woke in a sweat, his pupils dilated and his lips pursed as he panted from such a vivid dream. Thoughts rushed through his head, all coming together as one.

"Who was she?"

well i do hope this will be better and longer and give more to the plot of the story, plz read and review and tell me what you think and as always i am open to suggestions and comments.

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