Chapter 6: Betrothed?
Reminder: 'The stranger took the cloak of and Alanna gasped and hold her hands for her mouth. Jon Looked stunned. The stranger opened his mouth and said, "My name is …"'
"Alan of Trebond." He looked at Alanna. Who still held her hands for her mouth and looked at him like he suddenly had got two heads. He then turned to Jon, who still looked at him. "What? I'm a noble and then she look at me like I got two heads." He gestured to Alanna. "Why doesn't she give me a greeting? I have a little information." By then Alanna had laid her hand on her sword again, and taken her other hand down, but clenched it so her knuckles were white. And her mouth was only a small line. "Take it easy lady. You doesn't look too good like that, and if you want to be married should you…"
He didn't get any longer because Alanna interrupted him, "I'm betrothed. And why do you want a better greeting? You wouldn't get a better greeting if you got introduced in front of the whole court." She turned to Jon. "What do you think Jon?"
"Talk with respect to your king woman!"
"And you should talk with more respect to her!"
"Yes thank you Jon, but I can talk for myself." She turned to Alan "And you! I would be pleased if you please will shut up, just for a moment!"
Jon kept quiet while she talked. "Alanna, take it easy just for a moment, and can I talk with you for a moment please?" He didn't wait for an answer and dragged her with him to a corner… "Betrothed? And I thought you said he was dead?"
Well that was that.. Sorry I can't help it. I'll try to make the next longer. Please review.