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A/N: Hello everyone!! i really appreaciate all the lovely review that you guy's wrote!! I LOVE YOU ALL!! i promise to fix chapter 1 as soon as possible but i am having trouble keeping up with my life right now... SCHOOL IS A LOT HARDER THAN IT SOUNDED! and really it hasnt even started but its just the reading that i need to catch up on... hope you like this chapter...

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Percy's POV

"Oh Annabeth, how could you be so naïve." He said as he drew his sword to her neck.

"Luke, back away. Now." I declared. He didn't back down, not that I thought he would, but he didn't even acknowledge that I just talked, neither did Annabeth.

"So where's your new boyfriend, Percy?" He asked. I was going to say right here but Annabeth interrupted me.

"He is not coming Luke… I--, I came alone." He laughed a merciless laugh and glared down at her. That's when I started to run, but every time I took a step forward the image of the two of them seemed move forward to. I felt like I was moving one step forward and two steps back. They couldn't hear me. They couldn't even see me. I couldn't even reach them. I just wanted to save Annabeth from Luke. But I never seemed to get close enough. My competitiveness got the better of me as I ran harder than ever to try to get close.

"I said to bring Percy with you. Now that I have seen you disobey me, you leave me no choice but to kill you." Luke drew his sword back and dug it into her stomach. I screamed.

"NOOOOOO! ANNABETH!"

With her last breath she whispered. "Percy, forgive me. I lo--." Then she fell down, her blood pored all over the floor collecting in one big puddle. I looked to Luke and he just smiled and walked away, back turned to Annabeth.

All I could hear was her last words. They echoed over and over again like a broken record player that was never going to stop. When I wasn't paying attention I fell to the floor. I raised my head to look at Annabeth's lifeless body just a far as it was before. How could I've not made it in time to save her?

"I am so sorry Annabeth." I said out loud. Suddenly I heard footsteps approaching me from behind. I turned my head fast enough to see Luke's silhouette kick my head as the darkness overwhelmed me.

Daring to open my eyes I noticed that I was on the floor of my father's cabin with my face dripping in tears. It was just a dre—nightmare. Yes nightmare. Nothing has frightened me most at the thought of losing the people that I love and care about greatly. Annabeth. I know it was just my imagination but it seemed so real I better go check on here.

I got up and dressed and stepped outside. It was really cold so I wrapped myself in my arms and headed for Athena's cabin. Not until I got to her door I realized how early it was… The sun wasn't even up yet. So I turned making an A line straight to the beach.

The beach was so calm, so relaxing as I looked to the still water. My mind seemed to work correctly. Almost as if everything made sense, almost. The only thing that would make it better would be if Annabeth were here. You know, to bounce ideas off of and stuff. She was usually a good listener.

"I don't know what I would do if I actually did lose her." I said to no one in particular. I looked to the horizon watching the sunrise.

When the sun was cut in half by the sea I decided it was a good time to see if Annabeth was awake, so I got up leaving the comfortable place of the beach. I walked into her cabin not bothering to wake her brothers and sisters and have to answer unnecessary questions. When I got to her bunk there was no one there and the sheets were torn from the bed and lay in a bundle on the floor. Oh my god's where was she?

Before I started to breakdown I stepped outside and started walking to my cabin. I was dumfounded. Where was she? What wa—." I stopped my train of thought when I got to the front door. I heard my bed squeak and noticed that my door was ajar.

Slowly I opened it hoping that it wouldn't creak like it normally does. But obviously it did and my cover was blown but as soon as I saw who was on the bed hugging my pillow, it didn't really matter. Everything else left my mind. She was okay.

"Annabeth?!" I said in relief and surprise, "What are you d--." I was cut off mid sentence by her body crashing into me and giving me a tight hug. Then she started crying. Feeling the need to comfort her I wrapped my arms around her bringing here close. I found that this not only comforted her but also reassured me that she was really here, alive.

"Percy, thank gods you're alive." Annabeth sobbed into my chest. Alive? Why wouldn't I be?

Clearly Annabeth was in no mood to talk so I just said "Shhhhh. Annabeth everything is going to be okay. Yes I am alive. So are you thank gods. I am here and always will be, just let it out. Everything is going to be fine. Come on, let's sit down."

I led her to my bed and I sat next to here, but her grip on me never loosened and I didn't want it to either. I wish there was some way I could make her feel better. Without warning she answered my silent question and climbed up into my lap and hugged me tighter. So I gave her what she wanted. I put my arm around her body and with my other hand rubbed small patterns on her back.

She felt so perfect there and I wished for this moment to never end. In the distance I heard the bell ringing for breakfast but I didn't care. We were together. I couldn't help but tear a little myself.

All too soon she was finished crying so she lifted her head to look at me. Her eyes were red from water and they looked stormy almost on the verge of confusion. One thing I knew for sure was that she felt safe. That was clearly spelled out.

"Percy I am so sorry. The nightmare I had was so… real and you wer--… and Luke kil--." She said in a rush.

"Shhhh. Annabeth" I said to cut her off, "you don't need to explain just relax and tell me when you are ready."

She looked away from me to see the light coming through the window "What time is it?" she asked.

"Um… around 9:00 a.m." I answered after glancing at my watch. For three hours we were together. For three hours we cried.

"Oh Percy I am so sorry about the situation, and what you had to see, I am just really confused."

"Annabeth, no worries." I said

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