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When Spark finally returned to his family, his litter mates Cyspin, Glaze and Shadow had returned from hunting and whatever else they do on a daily basis. As he entered the clearing his father River brushed past him and made his way through the tunnel with out a word or so much as a glance is his direction. Spark looked after him, digging his claws into the ground before padding over to his brothers.
"Cardinal Dapple and Icicle are asleep." Glaze told his long furred brother, his blue eyes not meeting the shady grey ones of his smaller bother. Shadow walked by Spark, his dark grey pelt brushing Spark red one in a motion of comfort before he padded off to the hollowed log. Glaze rubbed his silver muzzle to Sparks before following the large tom.
Spark sat with Cyspin in silence for a while before matching his dark grey gaze to the blue grey toms black one, "Where's Kay?" he asked. Cyspin shook his head and shrugged, wordlessly stating his ignorance.
"Cardinal said she went after you." he said finally, looking at the just rising moon which was turning his pelt a shiny silver.
"I'm going to find her." He stated, and with that stood and padded swiftly out of the thorn surrounded clearing.
Even through the nearly moonless night, Sparks bright red pelt was eye to spot as he weaved through the undergrowth, following Kay's scent. As the long haired tom rounded a large rock, a weight dropped onto his back, and claws dug into his pelt.
Instinctively Spark rolled over and tried to shake his attacked, but his small size and light weight proved a disadvantage and he failed to shake the lager attacker. The larger unknown cat rolled them over and pinned him, a paw on the back of his neck.
"Your mothers taught you to the best of her abilities I suppose." came a familiar voice, and ith in a heart beat Spark caught the scent and knew who his opponent had been.
"Why are you back here? Cardinal told you she never wanted to see you again." Spark challenged, the weight on his back lifted and he sat up facing the blue grey and silver tom.
River scoffed his son's remark, " I follow Twig, and sense he returned I return. It'll be that why until I can get my claws in him long enough to kill him." he said, twitching the tip of his tail as he finished speaking.
"You haven't changed, you're still obsessed with revenge." Spark spat, glaring at tom before him. He sat in the moonlight, which was setting his pelt into a magnificent blaze.
"You really expect me to let that go?" River questioned, his dark eyes narrowing at him.
Spark dug his claws into the earth, "No. I once expected you to care about you family more then your revenge," he stood turn his back on the sleek tom, "I know better now." he said almost to himself, then stalked off resuming his search for Kay.
"You're weak." He swore he heared River say before heading his own way.
Sleek had found the tortoiseshell she cat first. Spark found this out when he returned to the thorn clearing the next morning. It was early and everyone was asleep, his nest was in the very back of the log, and he decided instead of crawling over his den mates, he'd curl up in the sunning patch. His dream was strange that night. His father's last sentence to him 'you're weak' echoed through them, then a loud snapping sound thundered drowning out his words. The of sand flowing slowly from between two rocks, into the den of many faceless sleeping cats, faded in slowly and then after a while dissolved into nothing.
Spark's dark eyes fluttered open, it was morning now. He felt completely rested and a new powerful energy flowed through him now. A new power pulsed through his veins, he twitched unable to sit still he had more energy then he could dream of having. Before he could register what he was doing, he pelted through the raise barrier. His new strength was odd, but he liked it.
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