Hey guys! this isn't the next chapter, but sort of liek a better version of the first one!
PLz tell me what you think! will probably post the REAL next chapter tommorow!
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special thanks to 3918 for reviewing and encouraging me to make my 1st chapter better!
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Hi, I'm Nya, and I'm not a normal demigod. I live in Uxenburg, MA with my mom Celeste Ice in a small house with a huge backyard full of my training gear. My mom taught from the start. She taught me that all the gods, monsters, and that all Greek mythology was real. But most of all, about my dad Apollo, i wished i could've met him, someday, my mom said. Knowing all these things at a young age, they came for me every two days, but I knew how to rough, well, that's just the world I live in. Why don't we start on the day that my life really started to mess up, i was twelve, let's see, it was a Thursday. I was at the park walking my dog, Chase.I had crouched down to tie my shoe and when I straitened up, I saw three little old ladies walking with the same stride, and they were exactly the same height. I sucked in fast, the furies.
(DUN DUN DUN cliffhanger! muahaha! PandAfan1123)
I stepped forward, and my instincts took over. Out of my pocket I took out my locket and pressed the middle button and watched it expand into my bow and celestial bronze arrows. Chase expanded untill she was a pegasus. I shot an arrow towards the middle one, she screeched and dodged the arrow. While Chase kept ugly number one busy,The other two turned into huge bat-like creatures and started whirling around their fiery whips. I advanced on them taking out my bronze dagger,I threw it at number two and it grabbed the dagger and threw it back at me with a force that I would've thought not possible , It narrowly missed my head as i dodged it and grabbed my bow. I shot an arrow at ugly number two from behind the bush, POOF! Ugly number three whipped me and for a second, I felt like my whole body was on fire.I yelled in pain, and using my knife, freed myself. I launched my knife at her... bad choice, as soon as it hit her rope, it melted. Oops. I heard a screech and looked over, Chase had killed ugly number one. "Chase take care if the mortals!" i yelled. Chase blocked the few mortals who were at the park while closed in on ugly number three, i shot her with an arrow, she dodged, i shot her again, she dodged. Finally i called Chase, she swooped down and picked me up. While up in the air, I shot the last kindly one with one of my arrows and exhaustedly we flew home.
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