Maki-san:hay guys,I was planning to update tommorow but then i remembered' hay i am not gonna have acess to internet until really late' So i desighed to update today.
Edawrd:People can you please leave a review. We havnt gotten very many.
Maki-san:Oh my god, Edward! Your here(jumps onto edward) this is to cool
Allen:Anyway, she dosnt own us
Maki-san:Allen! im in heaven.
Fullmetal Exorsist chapter 4
"So how did you end up out there?" the nurse asked Edward
"To be perfectly honest, I don't know" Edward said"One minute i was in a building the next im here"
"Ok, your done." the nurse said then left the room
"Um, Edward?" Komui asked
"ya" Edward replied
"Could you come with me to give you a check up?" Komui asked
"i guess" Edward replied
In the Black order
(hallway)
'This is some strange place. Wait? Didnt the nurse just say that he was fine? Why is Komui takeing me to get a check up 'ed thought. He stared at Komui trying to figure out what he was up to.
"Hay Edward, just a question. Why do you have a metal arm and leg?"Komui asked
"Oh that, I got them when i was 11. There from a car accident. Oh Komui when can i go home? Edward asked
"Why, where do you live, is someone waiting for you? Komui asked questionly
"Well I live in london, and I don't know if anyones waiting for me there"Edward said and suddenly had a very sad look in his face
"Im sorry, i shouldnt have asked" Komui said apologetically hopeing to change the teens mood but with no prevail 'this kid sounds like he's be through a lot. his eyes look so determined but deep inside there's a burning pain. What has this kid been through?'
"On here"Komui stated. He stopped right in front of a floating platform.
"What? You want me to go on that?" Edward shouted
"Ya"Komui said like it was no big deal
after like 5 minutes of arguing
"Where almost there."Komui stated to ed"Where here."
Maki-san:Ooo. A cliff hanger. You should expect another update Saturday or Sunday
Allen: Also please review. we'll all appreciate it
Edward: Ya, do what moyashi said
Allen: Don't call me that. i have a name you know!?
Maki-san:Anyway please review. I'll dedicate the next story to those who reviewed