Hello everyone! Moon is back!
Sorry I couldn't update sooner. School has been harsh on me *sigh*
Anyway, here's the next chapter for Dangerous Storms!
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"No, it's jump, land, claw, not jump, land, jump!"
The slender brown she-cat let out a loud sigh as her apprentice just sat on the ground, licking his paw.
"But that's hard," complained Thunderpaw.
"That's why you're supposed to practice," replied Rustletail. It was obvious that she was trying as hard as she could to not snarl at the young tom.
Thunderpaw rolled his eyes. His mentor was so annoying. Didn't she understand that he didn't have to practice? He just couldn't do it right now because he was tired. Any other day, he would have sent her wailing back to camp because he had beaten her in every battle training session.
"Marshwater was a better mentor," he mewed cruelly. "I don't see why I have to have a loner teach me instead of a proper warrior."
Rustletail's green eyes widened, hurt etched across her face.
"Thunderpaw!"
The young apprentice turned to see the powerful figure of his father, Lionstar, padding towards him with an angry expression.
"Lionstar," meowed Rustletail, dipping her head in greeting.
Lionstar nodded then turned to Thunderpaw. "Thunderpaw, you should be more respectful towards your mentor. She is an excellent warrior and is more than capable of teaching you many valuable skills if you just listen."
Thunderpaw narrowed his eyes. Why was Lionstar getting so mad? "What's your problem? I never asked you to spy on my training sessions anyway."
Anger blazed in Lionstar's eyes and Thunderpaw slightly regretted what he had said.
"Thunderpaw, you will not disrespect anyone with more experience and knowledge than you. Maybe you'll learn to appreciate the skills that Rustletail has to offer if I give you a punishment," hissed Lionstar.
Thunderpaw just wanted to roll his eyes and snap back "Oohh a punishment, how scary," sarcastically but knew he would just make it worse for him so he stayed silent.
Lionstar looked down at his son and seemed to make up his mind. "Thunderpaw, you are not allowed to enter the camp until you catch a bird, a rabbit, a fish, and a squirrel."
Thunderpaw leapt onto his paws in rage. "What?" he snarled. "That's not fair!"
"Then maybe you should have thought before you spoke so disrespectfully to Rustletail," snapped Lionstar before turning away and beckoning Rustletail to follow him.
Thunderpaw tried to follow him but his father gave a growl of warning.
He watched angrily as Lionstar and his mentor disappeared into StormClan territory. This wasn't fair. Was this even allowed in the warrior code?
Thunderpaw lashed his tail angrily. If Lionstar wasn't allowing him to enter camp, he might as well do the assignments.
The golden tom stalked his way angrily through the bushes, causing a particularly fat squirrel to bolt up a tree in terror.
"Oh fox dung!" he snarled, glaring up at the brown creature.
He opened his jaws to taste the air and scented the delicious scent of a rabbit. Thunderpaw followed the scent until he found a terrified rabbit caught in a bramble bush.
He let out a yowl of glee and quickly ran towards the rabbit.
Suddenly, he saw a black blur out of the corner of his eye. Thunderpaw whirled around but it was too late.
His attacker slashed his flank with thorn sharp claws while kicking Thunderpaw's face viciously.
Thunderpaw yowled loudly and tried to throw the creature off but it held on tight.
Blood was getting into Thunderpaw's eyes and he couldn't breathe because of his attacker's thick glossy fur.
A wave of darkness appeared at the end of his vision.
"Thunderpaw!"
Thunderpaw heard Lionstar's voice but it was far. Too far.
"Lionstar…" he whispered before giving into the peaceful blackness.
Whoa o.o
Did Darkstrike attack the high and mighty I-can-defeat-an-entire-Clan-with-just-one-paw Thunderpaw?
Sorry this chapter was short.
I'll probably have another chapter up either today or tomorrow :D
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