Hi. I got a really nice review from a reader . Thnx chinbaldo I am going to update but it might not be very good…
Chapter 3:…..
Last chapter…
She pulled away but I wasn't going to loosen my grip anytime soon. I pulled her closer and grabbed her other wrist.
"What is it your not telling me!?" I yelled at her face.
"You obviously don't understand what family is!" She yelled into my face as a return.
This chapter…
Sasuke was shocked. What could he say? It was true. He never really has known what family was. He let go of Ren and she stayed there, still crying. He couldn't say anything. Sasuke just turned and walked out of the room. Not sure what he should do, and closed the door behind him.
Ren stayed there over night, food was brought for her but she refused to eat. She didn't know what she could do. She ended up laying on the floor, and letting the darkness consume her in a troubled sleep.
I told you it would be short srry bout it. And also, I know that the characters are ooc's but what do you want me to do? Its not like I can make them be like themselves and still have the story move along. I've also been told that Ren is a mary sue, if she is than ohh well shrugs Leave a review waves