AN: Sorry for not updating for a few days guys! I've had a lot going on! Hope you like it, I was listening to music while writing this, so sorry if it gets a little ungramatical. LOL enjoy!
Loren
Even though it was only about a day since she had seen Eddie, it felt so good to kiss him again. She didn't think she meant that much to him as his mother, but this is one of the things he is touchy about, cars. Since he had lost his mom to it, I (Loren's POV) think he would care if I was gone. Would he?
Eddie
Eddie was so happy to see Loren again. He felt her lips on to his, it felt right. There was a spark between them, a zing. He felt as if it had been a million years since he had felt that. When he heard there had been a car accident, he had thought the one girl that was like his mom, that he connected with, was gone. It was like the car was a beast, who was going to take both his mom and Loren. It couldn't happen again. Soon Loren would be moving in and then Eddie could have his eyes on her 24-7. Never to worry again.
Loren pulled back, breathless, when a nurse walked in.
"Oh, I'm so sorry to interrupt. But we have news on 's condition." the Nurse said.
Eddie asked, "Is she going to be okay, what's up?"
"She has fractured her back, broken her right leg and her left arm. Her head got banged up pretty bad as well, so she will have a pounding headache for a while. As far as we can tell, there is no permanent brain damage."
"Okay, thank you so much." Eddie said.
"Well, before I leave.." the nurse picked up a notepad, " Could you please sign an autograph for my daughter?"
" Yeah, of course." Eddie reluctantly let go of Loren's hand and walked over to the Nurse, he signed the autograph, thanked her once more, and then the nurse walked out, leaving them alone again.
Loren sat up, trying to kiss Eddie, but winced in pain.
"Ow!" Loren screached.
"Now, you don't want to hurt yourself."
Loren all the sudden got really dizzy. She fell back on her pillow. All the sudden, she got really tired, her eyes were closing.
"Loren?" was the last thing she heard.
"E-Ed-" she fell asleep.

Eddie
Eddie ran to get the nurse.

"Nurse? Doctor?!"

Three different doctor's raced in.

"What's wrong?" one of them asked.

"She just fell asleep all the sudden!" Eddie cried.

One of the doctor's walked forward, looked at Loren, inspected her- normal procedure. He came back with news.

"I'm so sorry Mr. Duran, but it seems has slipped into a coma."

Eddie sat down, he was getting dizzy now too.

"No, not Loren too-" he fainted he was so flustered.

End Chapter 11

AN : SO sorry for not updating! Had a lot of drama IRL this week! Hope you like it! I will also try my best to get Chapter 11 of The Price of Fame up, no promises. I've had a lot going on, but I will still try to get at least a chapter up a day from either. Sorry it's short also, I just had to get it up! :)