Loren

Loren could see complete darkness around her. She was sitting in a dark, cold area, she didn't know where, "her brain" she thought. She was sitting in an imaginary chair, trying to get up, to pull herself out of sleep, but her body restrained her. She saw vision bubbles floating around her: her and Eddie's first meetup, first time at his place, first kiss, first "I love you", and first and only purposal. She was having a nice time on her walk of dreams until the next bubble popped up, her dad leaving her. She was a small four year old, beginning for her father to return, crying, her mom crying twice as hard. She laughed when she said "My first and only love left me" because Max would come in the future. She then winced as she saw her face when Eddie was "missing" and in a car accident. She saw Eddie mad at her at the hotel, and the car ramming into her. She tried to yell "Eddie, please, don't leave me!" but her body wouldn't allow her, nothing came out.

Eddie

Eddie : "I'm sorry, did you say she's slipped into a c-coma?"

Nurse : "Yes, I'm very sorry Mr. Duran."

All the sudden, Loren mumbled in her sleep.

Loren : "Eddie, please, don't leave me!"

Eddie winced, knowing what she was dreaming about. He rushed over, thinking she would maybe wake up. He held her hand, and whispered.

Eddie : "I'm never going to leave you, Lo. Never."

Eddie soon fell asleep, right in that position, sitting next to her bed, holding her hand. He hoped she would wake up, and laugh at me for being so concerned.

-The Next Morning-

Eddie woke up to a bright beam of light from outside coming in. He looked next to him, thinking maybe it had all been a dream. He sighed, when he saw Loren still asleep, still damaged mentally and physically, both from him.

Max and Nora walked in.

Eddie stood up.

Eddie : "Hey Pops! Nora, you seem to be doing better!"

Eddie hugged Max and Nora.

Nora : "Yeah, I'm good. They said I could leave as soon as I wanted, I of course rushed over knowing Loren was in the hospital."

Eddie smiled, knowing how much of a mom Nora was, just like Katy.

Chloe

Chloe had been so annoyed of her rejection of Eddie. She blamed it all on Loren, she needed to get rid of valley girl, and for good. She went back to L.A. and waited, knowing she would probably come before Eddie, she would try to hurt Loren, and not Eddie. She saw the plane land, and she set herself in the middle of Loren's path to Eddie's penthouse, knowing she had been staying there, and would probably need her stuff or she would be living there. Loren went to her house instead, but Chloe waited, knowing she would probably come in the morning. She woke up in the morning, to see Loren's car coming down the road, and she looked as thought to be daydreaming. Chloe thought how lucky she was to have it so easy. She rammed right into Loren's car, leaving. Little did she know, she had dropped her phone when her window had broken, due to the force. She smiled, thinking she had won.

Eddie

Nora looked down at Loren and started crying.

Nora : "Who did this to m-my little girl?"

Eddie : "They don't know, all I've heard is that they found a cellphone, not identified yet, but not Loren's. The driver probably dropped it unexpectantly."

Max : "Ugh, they really need to find out. Or I'm going crazy, I'm not going to let this one of the hook like I was forced to do with Katy. Loren is like my daughter and we will get to the bottom of this. Nora, I promise you honey."

Nora smiled at Max calling Loren daughter. She kissed him.

Eddie : "Eww! I'm in the room guys!"

Nora pulled away, blushing.

Nora : "Feels kind of weird I was being rude to you and Loren kissing, when I was kissing your dad. Ha ha."

Eddie laughed. He looked down at Loren and his gloomy look came back.

Eddie : "I wish she would just wake up. She slipped into a coma this morning, and I think it was my fault. I stressed her too much, leaving her in New York, going missing.."

Nora : "That wasn't your fault, not like you wanted to be missing."

Eddie : "I know, Nor. I love her so much."

Nora smiled.

Nora : "You need to step up your game if you want to stay with my daughter.."

Eddie : "I know. I know. I've caused her so much pain, I didn't mean to. I just hope after this we can find out who did it, and then just be done with it, and get married. Be happy."

Nora : "Take care of Loren."

Eddie : "Yes, -"

All the sudden a detective walked in.

Detective : " , we have news. We found out who hit 's car. Her phone was found, and the marks on the car match her car's design."

Eddie, Max, and Nora stood up.

Eddie : "Who was it?"

The Detective looked down.

Detective : "Mr. Duran. I regret to inform you that the person who hit Ms. Tate's car is.. Ms. Chloe Carter, your ex-fiance."

Eddie's anger level just rose about a 1,000,000.

Detective : "I'm sorry. Do you wish to press charges?"

Eddie : "Yes! A million charges for her hurting my current fiance. That's my FINAL statement."

The Detective scribbled something in his notebook, and left.

Eddie started crying.

Eddie : "She takes my mom AND she tries to take Loren. Pa, I don't think I can take this anymore."

Loren

Loren was still in her walk of dreams. She could hear Eddie crying, and echo in the background.

Loren : "Wake up!" she said to her brain. "WAKE UPPP!"

She pulled her hardest she ever had, she had to get to Eddie.

Eddie

Eddie was holding Loren's hand.

Eddie : "Lo, please wake up..I-I need you." (in between sobs)

Loren's hand began to twitch.

End Chapter 12

AN : Hope you guys like it! That's all for today, again one chapter a day from either. I was just more interested in this one right, now. Feedback for Chapter 11 of The Price of Fame tomorrow? :) This is 1,104 words btw, for you guys! (;