I'm adding quotes to my stories, sometimes there is something that has to do with the story, or relates to a character in the show:
"I see, sparks fly, whenever you smile"
-Sparks Fly, Taylor Swift.
Loren
Loren stares up into Eddie's huge large chocolate brown eyes. He slightly noticed her gazing up at him, and he formed a small grin to show reassurance, he wasn't going to bite. She could feel something familiar about that smile, she just couldn't put her finger on it. She was taking in all that was going on, when all of the sudden a flashback came on.
Flashback
Loren and Eddie were sitting in his penthouse, Loren was on the piano playing a song. She was really into it, and didn't even notice when Eddie slowly inched his way forward as she asked for an opinion. He kissed her which lead to a make-out. Eventually, they were sitting on the couch making out intensively. She stood up all the sudden, the only way to stop it. She was out of breath, and Eddie gazed upwards, concerned.
"You okay?" Eddie asked, as if he was doing something wrong.
"Yeah, I'm fine. Just need to catch my breath." Loren said as she let out a small giggle. Eddie smiled as he stood up.
"We going too fast?" Eddie questioned, wanting to be cautious with his and Loren's relationship. He was verifying also to make sure he wasn't rushing Loren into anything.
"No, it's a good speed. It's a really good speed." Loren replied, smiling at Eddie to reassure him it was also.
"Are you sure? Cause we can stop." Eddie sarcastically remarked, knowing they weren't.
Loren shook her head dramatically and pushed Eddie onto the couch. He put his arms back onto the pillow and she hovered over him, making out with him in the proccess.
End Flashback
"Loren, Loren, are you okay?" Eddie shuddered, worried she was going to fall into another coma.
"Oh, what? Yeah, just had a flashback, I think. If it wasn't another dream.." Loren reassured Eddie, making his shoulders fall again, relaxing his entire body.
"What, what did you remember?" Eddie said as if he were a two-year old getting a new toy for Christmas, excited she was remembering more.
"Well, we were at your penthouse, I mean I assumed it was yours. We were umm making out and I think there was pastrami sandwiches involved?" Loren replied, blushing when she said making out.
"Yeah, there was! Oh my gosh, Lo. I'm so happy your remembering stuff!" Eddie said as he pulled Loren into a hug. She winced back in pain.
"Oh, I'm so sorry! Are you okay?" Eddie asked, concerned of her medical condition at the moment. She had been through a pretty rough wreck, and Eddie seriously just wanted to kill Chloe at this point, but he just couldn't. He couldn't go to jail; leave Loren. Like no. He knew she would eventually go to jail for commiting such a horrible crime, why Loren as well? Chloe and Eddie wouldn't be together even if Eddie hadn't meant Loren, he would just be a lot more sad, still heart-broken. Hearing Loren was hurt truly did break Eddie's heart though.
Loren let out a small giggle,"Yeah, I'm fine. Nothing to worry about, I-it just hurts a lot. That's all. But I'll be okay, I don't really matter all that much so.." Loren shuddered, knowing it hurt herself to admit it, but she was just a small teenager in the entire empire. She meant nothing, at least she thought, to Eddie Duran.
"Look, Loren. I know you have this horrible silly idea, even if you have memory or not, that your not worth anything. But you are. Your worth the world to me, and I don't even know what I would've done if Chloe had.. if you had..d-d" Eddie winced thinking of this, he corrected himself, "Not made it. I would completely fall apart".
Loren didn't honestly believe him, "I know your just saying that because I'm your charity case and you don't want me to cry, but I'm strong. I can handle the truth, did you know my dad left me when I was little? I'm strong, I can take a bit of rejection, Eddie." Loren shrugged, it was true. Eddie got a bit angry when she said charity case, she was not worth nothing. It hurt him to think that she didn't see what he saw when he looked at her. A beautiful girl, with amazing musical talent and was perfect in every angle. Even small imperfections just made her even more amazing. He needed to prove her wrong, he would do anything for this girl to make her happy.
"Loren, your beautiful, amazingly musically inclined, and NOT a charity case. Do you hear me? I love you so much, Loren Tate. More than you'll ever know, more than anyone will ever know. Please, stop selling yourself for less than your worth. Because your worth millions." Eddie assured her, while gently picking up her hand and placing a kiss on the back of it.
"Eddie, I-" Loren froze in the middle, another flashback. Great, just great, she thought.
Flashback
Loren was sitting on her bed crying. Eddie was dead, she thought. She would never be able to tell him that she loved him, it was horribly over. She shlumped into her chair and looked up at the sky.
"Why, Eddie? Why did you have to be so stupid to speed and die?!" She asked him from above. She knew it wasn't his fault, he didn't leave her on purpose. It just hurt way to much and she needed somewhere to put her pain before she just totally exploded.
"I-i love you.." Loren shuddered as she cried herself to sleep, dying inside. Slowly, but surely.
End Flashback
"Loren?" Eddie questioned, knowing she was in flashback state.
"Eddie?" Loren replied to him, reassuring she was now "awake".
"Did you remember something?" Eddie asked, hopefully something recent, a sign of love. In the best case, the proposal, minimum, beach bungalow.
"I remember, you being d-dead. And talking to you from my bed into the clouds, saying how much I loved you.." Loren said while letting a tear drop.
End Chapter 15
AN: Sorry I know it probably sucks, but what can I say? I'm kind of lame at writing.. lol. Give me some serious ideas for this story, do you want me too...?
A) Have Loren remember the beach bungalow, then meeting Eddie on hills, then purposal?
B) Loren remembers beach bungalow, hill meet (after his missing) and not purposal?
C) Loren doesn't remember anything else and Eddie has to re-create the memories.
D) She doesn't remember anything else and they make new memories (=
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Oh and btw, sorry if sometimes I put something in that I never mentioned, I just think I did or get mixed with another fanfic, LOL, too much in my head! :)