Hi people.
I didnt really like my first chapter of this as there was so many spelling mistakes and stuff.
anyway here is my first proper chapter of This so, enjoy.
Well that was unexpected. The old man had given the him a short hilted lightsaber, that was more like a knife than a sword. But seriously. Him? Why? Just because Rahm Kota had trained him a little doesn't mean that he could become a Jedi. Anyway, I tood the blade and ran to the hanger bay with the codes to the hanger bay doors. Around 20 meters from the hanger bay I had to stop because there was around 30 clones of the 501st guarding the hanger bay.
"Right." I thought to myself, "How should I play this?" I looked up at the ceiling. There was a lot of loose roofing up there.
"Halt!" One of the clones shouted. I sprang up and pushed at the ceiling with the force. The debris fell and killed 12 of the clones. I drew my DL-18 blaster pistol and fired at the belt of one of the remaining clones. The resulting blast killed another 5 of the troopers. The 3 remaining troopers were about to shoot at me when they were thrown sideways into a wall. I drew my lightsaber as 2 Jedi hesitantly made their way around the corner. The first one was a human of around 20 years old with a strange concoction of clone trooper armour and Jedi robes. From what I remember from watching the Jedi coming back from war was that this signified that he was a Jedi general. The other Jedi was a slightly older (I think) Zabrak in standard Jedi robes. The human walked up to me hesitantly. He turned around and looked at the Zabrak. When he turned around again, he had my blade to his throat.
"Who are you?" I growled. The Jedi looked slightly shocked but then hid his surprise behind an impassive mask.
"I am Jacobi. But the real question is, who are you?" The Jedi said as he ignited his own blue lightsaber.
"It doesnt matter who I am. And dont think I've forgoten about you Zabrak." I said as I felt the presence of the Zabrack behind me. Jacobe looked startled at this. I rolled my eyes.
"You neednt look surprised. I thought you were taught about the Echani in your padawan years." I growled slightly. The Zabrak groaned.
"You're an Echani?" I heard the distinctive growl of the Zabrak behind me. I smiled slightly. They were trying to gather information about me. Not really going to work. The only way you can truly know somebody is to fight them. Time to find out more about these two. I whirled around and struck at the Zabrak with a slice to the head. He dodged out of the way and backed off. During this time, I drew my vibro-knife and danced away from a stab that was directed at me from behind. Sneaky little bugger. Trying to kill me before I got to know him. I flipped over a low slash by the human and slapped the flat of my vibro-knife into the hand of the Zabrak, which caused him to drop his lightsaber. I then kicked him in the head and knocked him out. Again the human tried to stab me in the back. I slid under the blade and swept out his legs. I then brought my knife down and stabed it into the ground beside the Jedis head. If Jacobi looked shocked before, then now he looked mortified.
"Well know that I am aquainted with you and your friend over there, then it is time to introduce myself." I stated flatly as I helped the Jedi up. "My name is Trai Un-Kun and I am a Thief that was trained by Jedi General Rahm Kota. And I can tell that you are a devious little bugger that will try and win at any costs. Also you are an excellent swordsman when a fight is fair, and that you have seen your fair share of battles. And your friend over there is one of the more quiet Jedi. He doesnt like to fight much, so his grip on his lightsaber was weak. That is quite strange for a Zabrak as they usually love violence. I would think that he wanted to be in the agricultural corp." Now Jacobi looked astounded.
"How.." He started to ask as the Zabrak started to groan.
"I am an Echani. We learn of other people through martial arts and battles. Its taught from a young age." I stated with little interest. "But right now, I
suggest that we get the hell off this planet." The Jedi sprung into action, it was almost like he had only just remembered where his was. As he was picking up the Zabrak, I scouted out the hanger bay. There was around 6 Jedi Delta-7B Aethersprite-class light interceptor docked in the hanger as well as a G-6 Rigger freighter. Jacobi snuck up behind me and whispered, "I'll take the G-6 rigger. You get in a Delta-7B and meet up with us in space."
"Actually, I have the activation codes for the old XS stock light freighter that is stored in the old hanger bay." Jacobis eyebrows raised considerably at this.
"But that thing is a relic. You cant hope to even try to liberate that from the clones. Thats the ship that Revan used in the Jedi civil war!" Jacobi exclaimed in a whisper. I just looked blankly back at him. He just sighed and mentioned not to worry.
"The old hanger bay is two doors down. I will go and find the ship. You will get onto the rigger and you will make your way to Dxun. It a moon of Onderon. I know a few Madalorians there so if you meet them, tell them that Trai sent you. They shouldnt kill you straight away."
"Well that is comforting." Jacobi stated whilst sweat dropping. "I'll see you on Dxun then." Even before he had stopped talking, I was on racing down the corridor towards the old hanger bay. Who was this Revan and what did he do that had caused Jacobi to be amazed that I was using his ship. I found the hanger bay just where he said it would be. The one problem was, that the 501st had found it first. They were just patroling around the out side. They seemed to be looking for booby traps.
"Well this is going to be harder than I first thought" I said to myself just as there was the sound of the freighters loading ramp opening.
That is a wrap.
So until next time, Adios.