Hi!
I love you guys! 93 REVIEWS AND 12,128 VIEWS! OMGs! OMGs! You guys are the best, I swear.
So, this story is drawing to a close. Just 5 more chapters. I can't believe it went by so fast.
Special thanks to Lily for writing the longest reviews ever. Lily, your last review was 567 words long. O.o
*Rant next paragraph*
AHH! Am I the only one that thinks it is so annoying that Rick always always ALWAYS ends a book with a cliff-hanger? I mean, TLT, Percy says he's coming back. TSOM, Thalia's alive again. TTC, Nico goes evil and Grover gets a vision or whatever from Pan. TBOTL, The obvious tension between Percabeth and the upcoming war. TLO, the next great prophecy. TLH, Percy's at Camp Jupiter. TSON, you don't know if they will fight or not.
And then, I just finished TSS (btw, I love love love Shelby and Sadie. Shelby is so cute and Sadie is so sarcastic. So awesome). Setne's still on the loose, and their mother told them about other gods and other magic. Then Sadie says that they saw magic on Long Island and that they will have to check that out. Is Rick hinting about a crossover?
*Rant over*
So, review replies!
ChaserMoonstone: Thanks! I like Chrisse too, but this story is only Percabeth. Maybe I can work Chrisse into some oneshots, but it will be mainly about Percabeth. Sorry!
Witherfang: 1st review: Ok, thanks. I'll work on that. It was mainly just about Percy's last day before he got abducted.
2nd review: Nope, I'm 12, but we're almost the same age. Did I write thirteen then? Sorry if I did.
3rd review: I swear, that has got to be the funniest review I have ever gotten. I'll take it as a compliment. The only thought that was going through my head was: 'Yes, I am.' I'm not kidding. It made me laugh so hard.
FireyShadows: Hi!
Thanks!
Yep, you got it right! You were just second, though. Sorry! You spell it Labyrinth. Those words and names are hard to spell.
Nope, I didn't I live in Holland, so I have to order it from amazon, and it cost a lot to ship and all that. I want to order it though as soon as possible. I think I'll do it after I finish writing this…
Thanks! The update!
Lily: Lily, I swear, you have got to write the longest reviews in history. I love them!
Sorry, I get an email on my phone whenever someone reviews, and then it stopped after 'I AM nice…' and then it said 'this review has been shortened due to length. Please visit the site for full review.' I thought you wrote that, so yeah. Sorry!
Hahahahaah
I do that all the time.
Thanks! You're right! But you weren't the first, sorry! It was the kiss on the cheek.
Me too! Yes, A.S.S. is so funny. Go look it up right after you read this.
I know, but just stay true to yourself. I'm not saying that you can't change yourself, but please, don't change yourself too much. I'm not saying you did, though. I think it's more fun if you read about a character that is almost exactly like you, than a character that is more like a plastic version of you. Yeah, I'm like that too. Exactly like that even :).* Uhmm… jealousy, bossiness, stuff like that. Think of what is a flaw that you have and chose one main one. I can be very mad and agressive, for instance. But then you would really have to piss me off diliberately and a lot. And no, I have no idea how to spell that word.
Me too! I think Munroe would be better, and Jake is probably more expensive to hire as actor. But Jake is also younger, I think.
I agree completely with you. I think Harry is the hottest of them all. And now I just imagined him standing infront of a magic mirror saying, 'Mirror, mirror o the wall, who is the hottest fo them all?' and then the mirror would say, 'You, Harry.' And then he would ride off on a white horse to save me, a damsel in distress, and kiss me. Yes, I am most definitely and completely weird and insane.
Yay! I found this picture on we3it, and it said, 'If I had a British accent, I'd never shut up.'
I know! Brenda for Drew. And Selena Gomez or Nina Dobrev for Piper.
Yeah, I know. I don't think Alexandra Daddario is the right actress for Annabeth.
Okay, good to know. Then for my next story, I will get a beta. I do need one.
Good.
Haha thanks!
0.o you went through a lot of trouble just to review. Wow! Thank you!
Yes, and I belive that has got to be the longest sentence in history.
Thansk! I am proud to hear that!
Yay! I like cupcakes.
From Alexandra, aka LazySundayGirl, da afro head nerd with a PJO addiction. (also daughter of Athena
Ciao is spelled like this, I think.
Longest review reply in history
CaitieCait101: yep! You got it right!
Niall 3: Alright! I am going to do all of the books anyway, PJo and HoO, so also TTC. I won't make Nico read in that book, though.
Review replies DONE!
So, the oneshot! Annabeth's POV, first person. Imagine she had a diary. This is one of those diary entries. Set when Percy arrives at CHB in TLT. This one's for DeathlyHallowsschoolgirl. She didn't review, but she sent me a PM before anyone reviewed. It was the kiss on the cheek as many of you answered. Well done, everyone! But DethlyHallowsschoolgirl was faster.
Disclaimer: Frank turned into a bird to disract the lasers, while I knocked down the wall in my huge goalie outfit. I got the rights, but I learned that seals can slap really, really hard. I get hockey-balls at my face sometimes, and that doesn't even hurt. Seal slaps do. Rick owns all the characters and everything recognisable from PJO and HoO.
Annabeth XIV
Dear Diary,
I had a weird encounter a few nights ago. It went like this.
I couldn't sleep that night. I got nightmares about Luke turning into a statue of Kronos. After waking up in cold sweat, I decided to go to Chiron. I always told him my dreams, however weird they were. He was like a father to me.
I walked up the steps of the Big House in nothing but my pajamas. It was a bit chilly. The wind was howling outside the borders, but inside, we didn't feel a thing. I found Chiron in his wheelchair, listening to Dean Martin playing softly and reading a book. He looked tired, but as soon as he saw me, his eyes sparkled.
"Ah, Annabeth. What brings you here, my dear?"
"I had another dream, Chiron. A very desturbing dream."
He sat forward, looking concerned. "Tell me."
I was just about to begin about the blinding light that enveloped Luke in my dream, when I heard a bellow that sent a chill down my spine. I recognised that bellow. My eyes widened. It couldn't be him… Right?
Chiron looked alarmed too. Without saying a word, we went outside, I scanned the hill, looking for figures. I saw a boy and the monster, with a satyr and a grown woman. When the lightning came, I could see the boy clearly. He had gorgeous sea-green eyes that were so briljant that I could see them from here** and messy black hair. He wasn't very tall or athletic, but I could tell that he was powerful. He had this aura that I still can't explain. He was kind of cute. Sorta.
Okay, he was very cute, but that isn't the point.
He was fighting one of the most ancient and powerful monsters ever, without any training. I never saw him here, and I know everybody at camp.
The bull-man charged at the boy. I started to run to help him, but Chiron stopped me.
"Annabeth, this is his fight. He must survive on his own. We can not help him."
I wanted to protest, but I knew it wouldn't help. Chiron was right. But still, there was only a miniscule chance that he would survive this.
I saw the boy sidestep the Minotaur. That made me feel relieved. For some reason, I knew that he would make it through. I knew that he had the skills of a natural warrior and leader. That was one of the weirdest feelings that I have ever had. But also one of the most true feelings.***
I saw the mother put down the satyr that I was sure was Grover. I swear, that goat boy always gets himself into trouble. The woman was trying to lead the monster away from the boy. It worked, but unfortunatly**** the bull-man charged at her and grabbed her when she tried to sidestep it. She dissapeared in a flash of golden light. That confused me. She didn't die, but she was gone. Who would take her, and why?
Another flash of lighting. You could see the boy again now. He looked very angry and determined. It kind of scared me.
He took of his rain jacket and waved it like a matador would. It worked, even though bulls are actually color-blind.
The Minotaur charged. The boy backed up against Thalia's tree. For a minute, I could see Thalia in his face when lighting struck. It was so clear, but you would really have to know Thalia to see it. The monster charged, and the boy made a move. I still don't get how he did it without any training or weapons. A true warrior.
He managed to jump up and somehow twist into the air. The bull-man's horns got stuck in the pine tree, and he bucked and bellowed trying to shake off the boy.
Then the boy did something that surprised me even more. He put both of his hands around one of the horns.
My eyes widened. "You don't think…" I trailed off, seeing Chiron's expression. He looked disbelieving, like he didn't believe that that would actually work. I think nobody did. But the boy pulled back, and the Minotaur threw him through the air. Another bolt of lighting, and I could see the horn in the boy's hands. I couldn't believe it. He actually did it. Never, have I ever seen anyone do that before. Thalia and Luke were the best monster-fighters I knew, untill that moment. From that moment on, the boy, whatever his name was, was on that list way up there with them too. I just knew that that boy would be a lot like Thalia.
The boy banged his head on a rock. Lightning flashed—again. This was a big thunderstorm. He had a dazed look on his face. The monster went in for the kill. The boy seemed to get to his senses, and got on one knee. I saw his plan, but it was very dangerous. If it didn't work well, he would get killed.
Thank the gods it worked. He drived the horn into the bull-man's chest, killing it effectively.*****
The boy carried Grover down the hill. I rushed forward to help him. He looked into my eyes with a dazed look, leaving me unsure if he actually registered my standing there. I helped him with Grover. I looked him over for any injuries. Nothing, except for a few scrapes. It was truly a miracle. Most heroes wouldn't have survived that, much less without any training or injuries.
"He's the one. He must be." I said. I just knew it. Chiron understood me. I have been waiting for a quest since I was seven. I needed to know how it was out there.
"Silence, Annabeth. He's still conscious. Bring him inside."
I did as told, and started feeding him ambrosia from the cabinets. I couldn't shake the feeling that he was something special. That he was meant to do something big. Maybe even the prophecy. My mind drifted to the 6 lines that haunted my dreams. But I quickly pushed that thought aside. I mean, sure, he was a lot like Thalia, but he didn't really look like her. They had nothing in common, except for the back hair. This boy, Chiron called him Percy and said he was at his school last schoolyear, had sea-green eyes. Thalia had electrical blue eyes. Percy wasn't that tall. Thalia was a bit taller than average height. She was also way more athletic looking.
Chiron ordered me to bed after about thirty minutes. I went to bed, but I wrote in you first to just let it go. I couldn't sleep anyway.
With love,
Annabeth.
Dear Diary,
He woke up again. Percy, I mean. I was feeding his ambrosia, and smirked about how cute he looked, with drool down the side of his chin. Suddenly, he woke up. I wiped the smirk of my face, and asked him, "What will happen at the summer solstice?" I know, I know, he just woke up, but he talked in his sleep. I heard him saying something about the summer solstice. The satyrs are talking about the solstice too. I hate not knowing something. When he talked, it sounded very painful and like it took a lot of his energy.
"What?" he said.
I looked around, making sure that there were no satyrs or Argus or Chiron around. "What's going on? What was stolen? We've only got a few weeks!" I asked, searching for answers.
"I'm sorry." He mumbled. "I don't…"
I stuffed his mouth with pudding, effectively***** shutting him up because I heard a knock on the door. Chiron walked through in centaur form. He had to duck for the door.
"It is time for your sword practice, child. I will ask Argus to come and watch over him."
"All right, Chiron. Let me just get my stuff." I grabbed my book, and you. After sword practice I came to my cabin to write this down. It helps me get all of this off my mind.
Love,
Annabeth
Ta-da! Chapter 14!
*For lily, that is the amount of words that you wrote in your review. So. Many. Words. I love them!
** I know, I know, not possible, but let's just pretend it is.
*** Is it most true? Didn't know, so I just wrote something.
****I have no idea how to spell it.
*****Don't know how you spell it either… sorry!
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P.S. Nina Dobrev and Selena Gomez would be good for Piper. The girl that plays Rue in THG, Amndla Stenburg, would be good for Hazel. she looks a bit young, but it will take some time for them to make HoO a movie, if they will do that that is.