Hi, dears.
So, because Striking is over, I suppose I should tell you about what's going to happen next.
To the Guest commenter: I completely agree with you here. I am not entirely satisfied with this story, mostly because I was writing to finish. I really feel like I could have done better, which is what brings me to my next point:
Along with writing the sequel (I'll get to that in a sec), I will be doing a rewrite of this story. This basically means, new scenes and more character development. The chapters will just be extended, not necessarily changed. Maybe I'll even add "bonus scenes", or scenes I saw in my head a long time ago but didn't really work with the storyline. Fluff and shit.
Next, the sequel. Shocking will be set during Thor, with Eve as a S.H.I.E.L.D. agent sent in undercover with Coulson. While Phil does all the legal stuff, Eve will be doing the snooping. I already have part of the story sketched out, and I'll try to finish it quickly and start posting chapters around the same time as I rewrite this one. Check my profile or the Thor section around mid-May to early-June for the beginning.
So, guys, any input helps. Ideas, recommendations, errors you've noticed, plot holes, anything is appreciated. I'd like to make this story, in the words of the Guest (really, thanks for your review, I'm glad I'm not the only one who saw the massive problem with my story), "great".
xox, Silence
(BTW, the dreams are seriously important. Eventually. The later ones are kinda crappy, so I'm going to fix those up in the rewrite.)