Dont hate me for this but I am about to do some self promotion. :)
I recently wrote a new story. It is a one shot about as long as this story is and it's about Sam. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE go read it and tell me what you think.
here is part of it:
Sam POV
I was patrolling with Paul and Jared, we hadn't got any action all day, we were just running the perimeter. After the Volturi's visit a few years ago we haven't needed to patrol with large numbers.
Suddenly the wind blew past us and I caught something, vampire. This scent was oddly familiar though, maybe it had been here before.
We caught up to her almost immediately; her running wasn't as fluid as the others of her kind. Paul was at her heals, he took a snap but she moved out of the way. Abruptly she tripped, flying through the air and landing, painfully, on a nearby tree, snapping it. All three of us were next to her immediately, ready to kill her but then she looked at me.
Her black eyes had only the slightest tint of red, like balsamic vinegar or rich wine. She looked so scared, so frail and so… familiar. Then it hit me.
Don't attack I said in my strongest alfa voice, the boys voices were appalled, by then almost all of the others were in wolf form.
I quickly ran behind a tree and phased, I put my shorts on and walked out. The girls eyes widened, recognition flashing through them. I walked up to her, not to close but close enough to show her I remembered her. I was about 3 feet away when Jared growled. I looked at him, silently telling him it was okay. I turned back to her and held out my hand.
"Olivia?" I asked, she nodded, not saying anything. But I knew it was her, my Olivia, my favorite sister.
PLEASE GO READ IT! I SWEAR IT GETS BETTER.
Update on Finally okay:
At the moment I dont have anything new to add but I will try to write an epiloge soon. School's been crazy - five projects due in spanish class alone! But after May everything will be fine.