"Torrent is that how you treat friends."

In front of torrent, with a frown on her face and hands on hips, stood a pretty girl. Behind her, standing nervously were two boys and one girl.

"Give him some space, Scar." Said ice. He smile politely to Torrent and ruffle his blond hair causally. The other boy (blaze) who had brown hair, wandered to the amour and opened the secret door.

"Yeah, scar can't you see he is nervous." The other girl, shadow, laughed at torrent as he got out of bed and hurried to his t-shirt.

"So you guys know about the passage." Torrent said. He put his sword down on the table and hastily put on his shirt.

"Not till this night and be careful with that sword." Ice said. He went to the table and picked it up.

"Wow nice sword." He grinned at torrent. "Sharp, balanced and light, but not to light." He threw the sword from one hand to the other and the looked questioningly to Torrent.

"Who made this?" He said.

"Back to the subject guys." Shadow said. "Torrent has found a passage."

"You guys don't sound or look surprised." Torrent said.

"Why should we, the black palace have lots of secret door and passages. There is ay to be about a million. The problem is finding them." Blaze said carelessly

"Yeah who told you." Scar said."

"Chaos." Torrent replied.

"Really." Said ice mockingly.

"Any way, why are you here?" Torrent asked them.

Blaze, Ice, Scar and shadow looked at each other and then Scar spoke up.

One day, one your first day, I came to say hello to you in your room, but you weren't there." She said. "I was going when you turned up via secret doorway."

Torrent guessed what was going on.

"You came very day to check on me, didn't you?"

"Yes, until we became friend and then I told blaze, ice and shadow and then they wanted to see it."

"We would have come anyway." Said shadow.

"Why."

"You already know about us." Blaze said. "Ice was a rebel on the planet Zele, Shadow the personal bodyguard of princess charlotte until the person that the princess like, liked shadow more and she was kicked out. Scar was the secret daughter of Artemis, every one here has a sad story. He paused. "It is an old tradition to tell it."

Torrent sighed said. "I don't have a say in this."

"No, useless you want me to kick you butt." Scar said.

"Try me." Torrent grinned.

As far as lightning Scar snatched up one of the swords on the Wall and turned on torrent. Then she charged.

Torrent had already taken his sword from Ice and he ran to meet her. They met in the middle of the room, their face were unreadable.

The fight was short and it finished when torrent had his sword on Scar neck.

"Do you yield?" Torrent said.

"No." Scar replied. She twisted her body sharply until she was standing up and then with a firm kick she sent torrent falling to the ground.

"Okay, you guy being fellow commanders, I might as well tell you." He paused and added. "If we are going to be friends too." Torrent said.

He sat down on his bed and tried to ignore the wave of expectation which flow from his friends.

"I am a son of Poseidon; my real name is Percy Jackson…."

NOT PART OF THE STORY

If this story does well, I might write a story about the lives of Ice, Scar, Blaze and Shadow.

Because there are a lot of people in the story, I am having a little problem thinking about names that are fantasy related. If you got any ideas, please can you review them to me? Thank you for your time