I just can't say no

by brightening

Takes place after the LO when Annabeth and Percy had their first kiss; however after the kiss their relationship crashed before it had a chance to develop. Annabeth and Percy went separate ways after things started calming down and Annabeth falls in love with Nico. Percy realized what he lost at that moment and he spiraled downwards both emotionally and mentally.

3. AN Voting time

Jlover97 : Thank you :) I try my very best.

santahohoho:

"Why not OC instead of using Nico? Some people are fond of him. Besides, it's not his character to betray Percy or have a relationship with Annabeth.

Maybe you can try and lengthen every chapter a bit more so it's like 1,000 words minimum each? I know it's hard, because english is my third language too cuz I live somewhere across the Taiwan strait, and you know how asian language differ from english. ahaha, but please do try.

Other than those issues, I think everything is alright in this chapter. Keep updating. :)"

Thank you for the thorough review! :D Thank you for the suggestions too. I live in Taiwan myself so Chinese is my first language, then Japanese(tiny little bit), then English XD. So I do know how different it is that is exactly why I am struggling with wording this and other grammar things :P. Forever Thankful ~ brightening

Authors note(please read and vote on what changes you want):

So taking consideration of the reviews I'll make sure the chapters are at least 1500 words each if the vote passes. Just give me a little bit more time to work on them. So take a look underneath and voice your opinion! I write to try to entertain and please the readers :) I will update within the one day period as soon as I get ten votes. If I don't get enough votes then I just gather up whatever votes I have and continue on with the story.

Do you want to change Nico's role in the story to a better one and replacing the current one with a made-up character? (yes/no)

Should I focus on Lemons including Percy or should I mix in another couple in the story to add a little more 'spice' in the lemon scenes?(focus on Percy(and Artemis :P) lemons/Include Annabeth's lemons too)

Do you want longer chapters and slower updates(2-6 days) or Fast short chapters and 1-3 day updates?(Short and fast/long and slower)