Hey guys! I'm back and better than ever! Sorry I haven't put any thing up for a while, I was in San Antonio for a week, Then my computer didn't want to work, Then I had to go all the way to Wyoming for the summer, so I haven't had a lot of time. But now I'm back and ready to present to you: Revenge, Chapter 3, Part 2!


Yol woke up and tried to sit up, but a sharp pain went through his head.

"Owwwww..." Yol muttered, standing up slowly. "What I wouldn't give for some ramen right now..." he complained. Yol looked around, not able to see anything because of the dark, so he searched the the blackness for a tiny, even miniscule bit of light. And, surprisingly, he found som,e, seeping in through a crack in the ceiling. He made an ice mirror to reflect it, and put it under the light.

The light filled the room and Yol was in a chamber with all sorts of statues. There was a hallway leading to a door. Yol attached the ice mirror to the ground and walked to the door, not knowing what was on the other side.

"Here goes nothing..." Yol said to himself, and walked through the door.


Kikushi had been awake for hours.

He had sat in the total darkness waiting for the time when his eyes would adjust. When they finally did, he could see the room he was in was some sort of ancient ritual chamber. There was a pedestal next to a table covered in some dried blood. Kikushi did not want to be in that room any longer, so he looked around until he found a small button on the wall. He pressed it, and the wall slid down, revealing a hallway.

He went down the hallway and found a door. He twisted the handle on the door, and hoped that what was on the other side was not going to kill him.

"Now would be a good time to show up, Hasaya." He thought to himself. "A Really good time." He went through the doorway.


Hasaya, unlike the others, was not awake, nor would he be for quite some time. He had hit his head on something on during the fall. But for now, he was dreaming, and his mind was fully alert.

"Hello?" his voice echoed in the enormous mansion. Then he heard a scream. he looked around, and heard it again. It was coming from upstairs. He rushed up there and found a door. He felt the doorknob, and it was hot. He kicked the door down, and saw a different world. There was a small boy running through a burning house. "Mom! Dad!" The child screamed. The small boy ran from room to room in this huge Mansion, searching for something or someone. Hasaya was no longer just watching this. He had lived this. This was his memory.

He ran through the house, searching all the rooms. He hadn't found his parents. The smoke was almost too much for him to bear, but he kept searching. He found his parents' room finally, and opened the door. His mother and father were dead, no more than flaming corpses. He remembered being in so much pain. From behind him, he heard a voice, one that didn't belong in this memory.

"You are Fire, Hasaya. Take back what is yours. Have your revenge." The voice said, and Hasaya turned around. He got a glimpse of the keeper of this voice before blacking out. He did not wake in darkness. The room was lit up by fire light.

Fire coming from inside him.


Part 2 COMPLETE! I would appreciate it if this story got reviews, Especially from certain people that I have been asking to for a while, *HINT HINT* Anyways, Here is Sky With his news:

*Sky: I WILL DESTROY ALL OF YOU MUAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHH!

*Me: Get back in my head!

*sky: NEVARRRR!