Chapter 5 Under Revision

I really wasn't happy with how it turned out and was just desperate to post something to get out of my writer's funk. Due to a couple of well appreciated critiques, that I fully agreed with, I've made the decision to remove the chapter to revise it to better fit the characters and where I want to go with the story.

I've already got a good section of chapter six done and so far it's not as difficult for me writing that chapter as it was for the current one. So hopefully it will be out with expedience.

I apologize for the holdup but I plan to have it back out with the changes by Friday 07/12/13, if not sooner.