Hey every buggy.

So, in response to the review posted by Madeye Missy,
I have decided to change a few things as well as respond to it.

Yes, i will admit that my character seems a lot like Savar from 'Taming the Huntress." written by Sombrett, but i did not do that on purpose. Originally, she had metallic lavender eyes but in the midst of writting this chapter, i guess i had savra in mind. The red hair however, was purposeful because red hair is extremely gorgeouse and i love it.

My characters name is not Khan, that is her stage name for the rest of her brotherhood and i honestley do not know where it came from, it just kindof poped into my head. However, Savar is not an anagram for Savra, it is a name that i have liked since i was a child, i think it sounds nice and actually named one of my Cats Savar.

My character has a huntress outfit because it is more conveinient for her to wear when she must hunt on her own. When she is on missions where she is certain none of her brothers will be near, she removes her robes to stay hidden in the shadows. It is not made anything Like Savra's outfit as it is more updated.

Also this story was not made to make sense will the story line. WHAT SO EVER. so i will warn those who like things to add to the game, you will probably hate this.

My character's past is extremely different from Savra and she actaully loved her mother. Both of her parents taught her most of the skills she held onto. In the following chapters you will she more of the differece between my Story's and Sombrett's.

Although i do appreciate that you pointed this out so that i could make sure to add little alterations throughout the stroy. Thank you for the spelling editing but again i must tell you that it is not my strong suit and that you will see it throughout my stories. Hell, there are probably some in here, but oh well.

Thank you and sorry for this rewrite :/

Altaїr felt arms shove him to the side after a faint shing rang through the air. He temporarily lost his balance, causing him to almost fall over the edge of the roof, however he regained his balance just in time to deter him from that fall. Anger flowed trough his veins as Khan had ruined his perfectly planned air assassination. And for what? To get a little revenge?

Altaїr Turned to Khan angrily, only to see the assassin with an arrow in his shoulder and a dead guard on the opposite roof. Had Khan saved him?

"Son of a bitch." Khan growled in a slightly higher voice than usual as he ripped to arrow out of his arm, causing blood to gush out and soak his robes. Just before Khan chucked the arrow away, he stopped and examined it. Altaїr could also see the translucent substance shinning from the arrow, giving it a polished look. The arrow had obviously been poisoned, with what kind he was sure. " It feels like its only duty is to weaken the body, or else I would be convulsing." Khan said in a monotone voice.

Altaїr watched as Khan threw the arrow away angrily, shaking his head slightly as his body began to sway. As much as Altaїr hated Khan, the young assassin had saved his life and he wasn't going to let him die. "Head back to the bereau, I will end him as quickly as possible before returning." The words slipped from his lips easily as he watched Khan stand up straight, as if to say 'Meh, its nothing.'

Khan opened his mouth to speak, but no words came out. instead, He rushed forward, throwing himself and Altaїr over the edge of the building and to the ground below. As they fell, Altaїr looked up to see about five arrows strike in the spot they were just standing in. Altaїr held back a groan of pain as he landed on his back, Khan landing no too far ahead, right on his injured shoulder.

He stood quickly and removed his duel swords from their sheaths on his hips. Khan was quick to follow his lead, pulling his short blade from its sheath and held it defensively in front of his chest. The entire group of guards surrounded them, ensuring that they would try to run off. At least twenty guards were there, along with five archers above them, Nazar standing not to far away from the large group.

Nazar was holding a woman, who looked to be in her late twenties to early thirties, by her wrists as his free hand roamed her body. "No! Please! Please stop! I have a husband and children! Have mercy my lord!" The woman cried as she tugged on the mans grip. He rewarded her with a backhand before continuing with his violations. Suddenly, a knife pierced the mans forearm and he instantly released the woman, who took off running as soon as his grip was gone.

"Fuck!" the man growled as he glared at both of the assassins. Altaїr looked to his side, noticing the change in his stance, indicating that he was the one who threw the knife. This was no longer the sassy, cocky Khan that Altaїr had become used to. No, this was an extremely pissed and somewhat weak Khan, One that couldn't hold his own in a fight even if he tried...

"Guards, attack! but try to keep them alive!" Nazar yelled to his men. That's when everything was sent into motion. One of the guards lunged at Khan, but before Altaїr could react in any way to help the weak assassin, Khan had dodged the oncoming blow and countered it with a knife in the back, ending the guards life easily. Khan then spun on his heal, slitting the throat of a guard before throwing a knife at an archer, effectively halting the rest of them from firing.

Altaїr was so caught up in Khan sudden boost of strength and speed that he almost didn't dodge a swipe of a sword from a guard. Almost. He dodged it and drove one of his swords into the guards gut before using his second one to slice open the stomach of another. Altaїr wrenched out his sword and deflected a blow and countered it.

This seemed to go on forever, but every time they'd chopped down a couple, more would show up, its like they had an endless cycle of guards just waiting to get heir turn at swinging at an assassin, it was utter bullcrap. Altaїr froze in his attacks as Khan's strength seemed to finally give out and he collapsed to his knees. Before Altaїr could react in any way to aid his fellow assassin, Guards shoved his against the wall, successfully knocking away his swords and holding him there.

Only then did Altaїr see the long gash on Khans mid thigh. He hadn't just collapsed out of exhaustion, it was also because he was loosing blood and that because of the poison, pain would be heightened. Altaїr thrashed and struggled to get free, but only succeeded in tiring himself out, so instead, he decided to wait for the perfect moment before breaking free and killing that bastard.

" And you must be the Legendary Altaїr. Come to kill me like you did to my fellow Templars? HA! Not today!" Nazar said with an extremely cocky attitude and pissy tone as he gripped his arm to stop the blood flow from Khan's earlier attack. "And who are you? Another pawn in this game? Well, I shall be glad to cross you off the list of assassins I must kill!"

Khan was being held by his arms from two guards, however, he didn't really seem like he was trying to fight back, as if he had given up on trying to escape his approaching death.

"Now, sources tell me that you assassins have a couple of rules that you are supposed to follow. And I believe that one of them is that you cannot show your face to the enemy, am I right?" Yes... He was right. Wait, sources? " Well, I guess something worse than killing you would have to be exposing you, now wouldn't it? but do not worry, I shall still kill you."

Nazar began to approach Khan, Who had seemed to regain his life as he struggled to get away. Altaїr also continued to push against those restraining him, for he knew that this was not going to end well. After all, Khan had saved him a few time, so why was he unable to help the young assassin when he was needed the most?

Nazar gripped Khan's hood before roughly throwing it behind his head. Everything seemed to quiet down and slow. For a young man who was becoming an assassin was not what lied beneath that hood, but a woman. She Had long, dead stright, blood red hair that was tied into a ponytail, her side bangs hanging over her one eye, almost covering the scar beneath it. Her eyes were A very metallic Lavender with bright metallic green flecks in them, well, he should say eye, for the other eye seemed to be lighter, as if it couldn't be seen through. Another scar ran along the right corner of her lips, much like his own.

"A woman! what is this! what do you assassins do? Take your little whores and teach them to fight? such a waist." Nazar said with a hint of amusement in his voice. The woman's eye narrowed aggressively as a hard glare was sent to the man in front of her. Nazar gripped her chin with his hand as he seemed to be inspecting her. "You are definitely a beautiful one, shame that your beauty had to go to waist like this, and not serving us men as it should be." The man said, his eyes trailing her body, as if trying to imagine what was beneath her baggy robes. suddenly, Altaїr also began to wonder...

The woman pulled her jaw from his grip and tried to head butt him, but Nazar pulled back just In time. " Yes. Im a mother fucking god damn woman you piece of retarded shit!" The woman cursed loudly, earning a few gasps from the men around her. Since when could a woman speak so confidently in the face of a man? Nazar grinned a sly smile as he met he glare with a look of lust.

"Such spirit! I wonder how long it will take to break you, and then how long it will take for you to beg me to fuck your brains out." Nazar said longingly. Altaїr watched as every muscle in the woman's body tensed up, as if she was remembering something. Then, rage filled her eyes as she lifted up her lip into a snarl.

"Not without these cock sucker." She growled. Altaїr watched as the men holding her suddenly flew off her arms as she rammed her knee in Nazar's family jewels, a loud and extremely agonizing crunch was heard as she made contact. The man wailed like a new born child as his hands instantly went to cherish his member. The guards came and grabbed her again, however, one guard seemed to have enough out of her.

"Little bitch!" He growled before shoving a knife into her gut, causing the woman to bend forward slightly. That was the last straw. As all of the other guards were distracted by the scene that just unfolded, Altaїr shoved them all off of his in one fluent movement and then used one of the enemies blades to slit four of their throats. After retrieving his fallen swords, Altaїr killed the remaining guards.

The woman, who seemed to be ignoring to stab wound in her gut, Flipped the men holding her and shoved two throwing knives into their throats before stabbing the one who stabbed her, in the face. She then pulled her bow from her back and shot down each of the archers before Altaїr could blink. He had actually forgot about those pesky men.

Nazar was currently trying to escape with out them noticing, but unfortunately for him, they were assassins. well, at least he was, he didn't know if this woman was really assassin. The woman pulled out two arrows and fired them off while barely aiming, and they each hit one of his palms, successfully pinning him to a wall by his hands. A pretty painful way to be caught.

She place the bow back on her back and began to slowly walk to the trapped man, occasionally swaying from exhaustion. In all honesty, Altaїr had expected he to be on the ground crying for help right now. However, she continued to walk until she was standing right in front of Nazar. Altaїr wondered if she had forgotten that she had given him the all clear to kill Nazar, so technically that man was his target. She then spoke.

"Nazar, You have raped, beating and even killed hundreds of women for you lusting. Many people have suffered every day knowing that you took a woman who they knew, whether it be daughter, mother, sister, wife, girlfriend, granddaughter, friend, best friend or even just an acquaintance, and are beating them senseless for no good reason beside you being a selfish mother fucking. Now, you may not be my kill, but that does not mean that you do not get to suffer at my hand." With that, the woman shoved a throwing knife into the man's family jewels with such force that Altaїr could even feel it slightly as he absentmindedly covered up his own manhood.

Nazar screamed in pain as tears poured from his eyes. The woman pulled out her knife, wiped the blood on his shirt, and then placed it back in its sheath before stepping away from Nazar, silently giving Altaїr the okay to end his life. As, much as Altaїr hated the man, he ended his life quickly and as painlessly as he could, for he felt extremely sorry for the man.

Altaїr turned back to the woman only to see her hood back up and he body swaying slightly, she was about to pass out. He quickly launched forward and caught her body before she hit the ground and gathered her now unconscious body in his arms. However, before he left, Altaїr collected Nazar's blood on a feather, then took off. He took the roves, as they were much less guarded. Altaїr made sure to be gentle, for if she had a wake up attack, he didn't want to be the receiver.

It wasn't that he was afraid of the woman, it was just that he valued his man hood, and having it destroyed because of a small slip up would really suck!

"Zalek! Get your medical supplies! kh-Someone is hurt!" Altaїr yelled as he jumped into the bereau.

"Someone? Altaїr who did you- Khan? why did you say someone if it was jus-" Zalek was interrupted

"He is woman in disguise. Now, if you do not hurry, she will bleed out from a stab wound in her lower stomach."

With that, Zalek got to work stitching her up. There was that one kind of awkward moment when Zalek had to remove the woman's robes, but was relieved to see that she wore a weirdly designed outfit underneath. One that made her extremely alluring. Altaїr ended up sitting on the roof of the bereau, unable to stay calm while Zalek lifted up the woman's shirty a bit to get at her wound.

Who was this woman? Why was she an assassin? Did Master Derlum know about this?

so many questions were going through Altaїr's head as he stared at the approaching sunset. And he was determined to get all of the answers when the woman awoke.

So... You like?

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Love ya everybuggy XD