I think I'll make her 14 years old, just incase any of you are wondering how old she is.
The Cullens
The ride to Forks was not too bad. If it hadn't been for my ankle, it might have even been fun. When we got to "the Cullens" I noticed something was up. Observation one: they were all about as pale looking as Nathan. Observation two: there were nine of them, although one of them seemed a little different. Probably sensing my fear (can dog-men do that?), "Seth" stopped and looked at me. Then one of the pale ones stepped forward.
"You don't have to be afraid," he said, "Seth, how much does she know?" I looked at him like he was crazy, what was he going to do, read his mind? "So she knows that you are the wolf, but nothing else." Then he looked at me. "Esme, could you and Carlisle take Kate in," he said, and then added, "her ankle is broken."
Then, who I assumed to be Esme and Carlisle, as they were the only ones to move, brought me into the house. After taking me off of the wolf, the first pale one turned to Seth and told him to "go back to Jacob," and that I was safe here. After they laid me on the couch and began wrapping my ankle, the youngest one came over and sat next to me. She looked about 17 years old, and had the most beautiful hair I had ever seen. "It's okay," she said. Somehow, the way she said it, I believed her.
Ten minutes later, Jake came through the door with more of the pale ones from outside, and asked if I was okay. When I told him that I was he started pacing. "Well, you're here now," he said, "That's what matters." Then the rest of the pale ones came in. "Kate," Jake started, "What you saw with Seth, well, it's not just Seth."
"They turn into dogs to?"
"No way!" the largest one said, "That is there thing, we're vampi- Ouch!"
"I thought we were going to break it to her easily, Jasper," said the smallest of the group that just came in, "I'm Alice, this is Emmett," she said, indicating the man to her left, "and Jasper," indicating the other one. "Rose is in the kitchen."
"I'm Renesmee, but you can call me Nessi. This is my mom and dad," the little girl told me, gesturing to the two people behind her. Next the man who wrapped up my ankle came over and put his hand on Nessie's father's shoulder, and told everybody that I needed to get some rest. I didn't argue.
Okay, looks like I've fixed everything that I can see. If you find anything else that needs fixing, let me know. Slightly short chapter, sorry. Going to introduce the pups in the next chapter! I hope you are enjoying this as much as I am. R&R!