Sorry for the hold up in updates, but now my computer is officially fixed!! Well, the plot unfolds some more. Enjoy!
"All Nightclan cats report soon and cannot stray twenty fox lengths from camp." Blackheart announced. The group had really taken over Nightclan, via Stormclan, but something was bothering Shadefoot. His eldest daughter's beautiful golden eyes had turned to a lurid yellow and her generally silky black fur for which she was named had gotten oily and jagged. He didn't dare confide in his mate, for her list for power was ever growing, almost as what the "Topaz" owl referred to a barn owl known as "General Mam Nyra," and his daughter was now particularly "haggish." Not to mention the bizarre torture rituals that were being used on the cats of Stormclan like "shattering" and "moon scalding that caused the cats to get far off gazes and forgetfulness.
"Da? I mean father, where's uncle Ashclaw?" Theifkit mewed, staring wide-eyed, officially voted the spokesman for the trio of kittens.
"Shall I fetch him?" Shadowfur asked numbly after rounding up a group of stubborn queens.
"Now love, him and the other Moonclanare probably trying right now to find a solution for these 'proplems' we are causing, but in vain, of course." Darkheart smirked as he licked his paw. "Shadowheart, perhaps you should silence your uncle for good."
"My name is Shadowfur."
"But my love, 'Heart' has gone in our family for two generations!" Darkheart cried, then he saw Shadowfur dig her claws into the ground in frustration with her grandfather. "...B-but would you rather be called Shadowstar?"
"Shadow...star..." Shadowfur toyed around with it. "I like it. Thank you grandpa."
"Anything for you Shadowstar." Darkheart and Blackheart meowed in unison.
"Yes. Anything for her." Shadefoot murmured to himself as he departed from the others.
Honeycloud was walking in an unfamiliar forest, then suddenly a very familiar scent came to her nose. Mouse.
It was a lean, skinny gray mouse, but it was fresh kill all the same. She went into a stalk and pounced on the pathetic morsel. It squealed in fright in her paws.. It seemed vaguely familiar...
"Ashclaw?" She asked. The mouse sighed in relief, then a huge black paw reached out and ripped its claw down the mouse's spine. Killing it slowly and painfully.
Honeycloud shrieked in fright when she saw the cruel cat who watched the mouse writhing in pain in the dirt with its piercing yellow eyes. "Shadowfur!"
Yep. I'll update soon. R&R!
