"Kyuubi"
"Thoughts"
"Speech"
Some good criticism by Redlox2 but would like other opinion as well.
If you haven't guessed already, I like being mysterious about what I will right but, I will give hints. This will be a quick chapter as I am in the process of obtaining ideas for my starting story. My pairing for Naruto will be Yugito, Anko and Kyuubi. However, Kyuubi will be more of a tease towards Naruto while acting like a mum to him. He needs someone who is responsible.
It was a sad sight to see, a young boy beaten and on the verge of death, and a group of 20 year olds towering over him with grins plastered on each of there faces.
"Well boys, I think our work is done" the leader of the group said "Yeah, we should get out of here now before ANBU come" another, slighter shorter said, they all nodded and started to walk off but didn't make five meters. Kunai shuriken and senbon were embedded in their backs.
-20 minutes later-
"Hey mum where are we going" a young boy asked. He had black hair that swept backwards and was spiked that way as well; a black shirt with dark blue shorts, both with a red and white fan engraved into them.
"We are going to the Hokage to see if you can go to the Academy Sasuke; where else would we be going silly" the woman holding his hand said, she wore a dark blue kimono with red flames at the bottom. Her hair was also black but went down to the middle of her back with two bangs over her face. Her figure had curves in the right places and at least c-cup breasts and blue sandals. Mikoto, Sasuke's mother.
"Are we really, YES (he shouted out) I can't wait. I'm gonna become strong like brother and father, just wait mum you'll see" Sasuke then turned his head to the right into an alleyway; he saw something lying on the ground.
"Hey mum, there is something down there" Sasuke said getting his mothers attention.
"Really, well, you stay here and I will go look ok" Sasuke nodded at his mothers words.
Mikoto walked into the alleyway "AH" she screamed. Instantly an ANBU operative appeared "What happened" the cat masked ANBU woman asked and Mikoto pointed; tears running down her face. It was her best friend Kushina Uzumaki's son Naruto.
-3 hours later. Hospital room-
In the room was the old Hokage Sarutobi, Mikoto, Sasuke, the cat masked ANBU, Genma (a Jounin) and Kakashi (Sharingan) Hatake.
They were all sitting around the bed that kept Naruto under a blanket and fast asleep.
They had gotten him to the hospital within a few minutes of the ANBU finding him almost dead but with a small pulse. His wounds had already healed and the blood clot that was found was now gone because what everyone but Sasuke knew, the Kyuubi was doing its job at keeping the boy alive.
Sarutobi had asked Genma and Kakashi to take Naruto as apprentice's and suffice to say, they both agreed immediately.
-3 days later- Mindscape
"Where the hell am I; one minute I was awake and now I'm not" Naruto pondered in his thoughts.
He then opened his eyes to the sight of a large, dark room filled with pipes. Large cage doors at the end of the hallway with a meter long and a half meter wide piece of paper in the middle of it; it read 'Seal'. I wonder why.
The young blonde walked up to the cage doors, cautious of the unknown, until, a sobbing noise, a woman to be precise. Naruto could hear it clearly as he walked through the cage doors.
"Why are those stupid villagers so mean to Naruto-kun, he has done nothing to them, yet they still beat him to near death" the woman said to herself, not noticing the blonde fur ball walking up to her.
"Hey miss, are you ok, why are you crying?" the blonde asked ever curious.
"N-Naruto-kun, w-what are you doing here, why would want to see me after what happened to you" The redheaded woman asked as she stood up.
"Well, I just woke here, then I saw the cage, then I heard you crying and I wanted to know why you were crying" Naruto explained
-30 minutes later-
"So that's why I've always been hated, oh well that's all I the past now and we are here in the present, right?"
"Yeah, I guess we are"
And that's how the strong relationship between Naruto and the Kyuubi started.
