Hey, here's the first chapter to my Knight story. Now, I won't tell you which oc got which elemnt, but I did add an ability for each to gain with the elements.
Magic: Higher Knowledge.
Honesty: Super Strength.
Kindness: Able to communicate with anything.
Laughter: Super Jumping.
Generosity: Super vision.
and Loyalty: Super Speed.
Now, let's get started.
Chapter 1: Enter the Knight pt. 1.
It was a bright and clear morning in the town of Cantorlot. A large and bustling city full of shops, residents, and a lot of fun things to do. In a small neighborhood, far from the busy streets and loud cars, sat a small, two story home in the center of a Cul-de-sac. A beam of light shined in the middle through one of the top rooms, and fell on the sleeping figure inside the bed. The figure quickly pulled the cover over their head and tried to get more sleep, but it was useless, as the door opened and in walked a middle age women that had long, curly white hair and a dark blue body. She wear a pink pantsuit with red high heels and a purple purse.
"Raves, time to get up." she said as she began to put her earrings into her hears as she was not done getting ready for her job.
"Five more minutes mom." groaned the figure in the bed as it tried to get more rest
"Come on, I don't want you to be late for your first day of your new school." she said as she finished putting her other earring in her ear, so she walked right over to the bed and then pulled off the covers from the figure, Revealing that it was a young man, around the age of seventeen, with a dark blue completion like his mother, but his hair was half white and black, white was right and black was left. He instantly sat up, showing a tiered look on his face.
"Fine, fine. I'm up. Happy?" Raves asked as he stretched out his arms and let out a long yawn as he woke him self up.
"Very, now get ready and go get some breakfast at school." she said with a smile as she turned around and eaded straight towards the door, leaving Raves on his own. He slowly stood up and then he head over to and opened the window, revealing he was wearing a pair of jeans as his pjs. He just stood there and felt a cool breeze blow through his long hair and then let out an annoyed look on his face.
"Great, summer break is over. And now I dye of boredom." he said in a whiney tone as he shut his window and then headed out of his room. After a quick, and cold shower. Raves put on his outfit. A skull t-shirt with a black leather jacket over it, black fingerless gloves, blue jeans, and boots with a black backpack with a white sword on the front. He walked down stairs after getting ready and saw his mother was just about to leave.
"Alright, have a great day at school. I'll be working late tonight, so lock up after you get home." she said as she put her jacket on.
"I will, love you and have fun at work." Raves said as he waved to his mother as she opened the door and stepped out.
"I love you too, sweetie." she said as she shut the door, leaving a bored Raves to let out a sigh as he walked towards the back door, opened it, and then headed out walked towards the garage. After entering it, he walked over to a work bench and then picked up a black helmet. He then turned and walked to a tarp in the middle of the garage, and then he pulled it off, revealing a black, Harley Davison fatboy. With a smile, Raves turned opened the garage door and then straddled the motorcycle. He started her and waited a second as he felt enjoyed the feel of the vehicle, he then pulled out of the garage, closed the large door, and then pulled down the visor as he took off heading towards the city.
After twenty minute ride, Raves could see his new school and saw a bunch of student walking around the area. He calmly continued to the student parking lot and parked his bike near the front. As he got off, he was surprised by a suddenly appearing pink skinned girl with blue eyes and a party theme top, skirt, and backpack with balloons on each of them. But what caught his eyes first was the long, wild pink hair.
"Oh, hi. Are you new, you look new? That's a cool bike, are you a biker and bad boy?" she continued with so many questions that Raves was lost in second and he nervously smiled as he waited for her to stop for a breath, but was shocked when three minutes had past and she was still going, that is until another voice called to her.
"Pinkie Pie. Quite pestering him." the voice had a thick southern drawl. He turned and saw a girl walking towards them. She had bright green eyes, long blonde hair tied back in a pony tail, and she was wearing a white shirt with green around the neck, a brown cowboy hat, a apple belt, a denim skirt, and a pair of cowboy boots with apples on the front of them. He watched as she came to and tried to pull the one named Pinkie Pie away from him, which annoyed her a lot.
"I'm not pestering any one. I'm just making new friends." she said as she tried to keep from being pulled away from Raves, which made him chuckle a little from this.
"It's fine, was just waiting to answer her." he said with a smile as the two girls instantly stopped their antics and looked at him. After he got them to calm down, he continued, "I'm Raves and no. I'm not really a biker. I just like to ride it." He said that as he patted his bike.
"Alright. I'm Pinkie Pie and this here is Applejack." she said as she point to the blonde farmer girl.
"Nice to make your acquaintance, Raves." Applejack said as she offered her hand and he shock it. After that, he watched the girls walk away and he smile as he got his helmet as he headed into the school. After fifteen minute, and help from several other students. Raves finally found his locker, he then opened it and place his helmet and jacket into it, he then draped his backpack his shoulder as he head off to his home room.
As he walked through the halls, he noticed a lot of other students hanging out and talking to their friends. This made him feel for all the friends he left behind at his old school. Raves was so caught up in his own thoughts, that he didn't notice another figure not paying attention where they were going. The two then bumped into each other and the small figure fell to the ground, spilling her papers all over to ground. Raves looked down nervously as he was truly sorry he did that. He quickly knelt down and helped the figure clean up the mess he made. As he did that, he notice the figure was a girl, with long pink hair that covered half her face with a fower on the left side.. She also had soft blue eyes, a nerves look to her, and wear a white top, green skirt with a pink butterfly on it, and green boots. After finishing picking it, he calmly handed her paper back.
"Here you go, sorry about that." Raves said as he offered the papers to the young lady, but she just nervously looked at him, shock a little, and mumbled something he did quite catch. But before he could say or do anything, he suddenly felt a sharp pain in the back of his head and then he noticed a soccer ball fall in front of him. He looked at for a moment as he held his head, and then he heard a voice yell at from behind him.
"Leave her alone. You jerk." Raves turned to see the one yelling at him. He saw a girl with wild rainbow colored hair running to the small of her back, she had violet eyes that stared at him hard, and she wear a blue over shirt over a white t-shirt with a rainbow colored lightning bolt on it, a pink and white striped skirt with black hot pants under it, and a pair of blue boot-like sneakers. She glared at him as he stared back.
"What are you... oh wait.." Raves said as he realized what she met and then tried to defend himself as he continued, "There's a misunderstanding. I wasn't picking on her, I was just helping her pick up her papers." he said with a nervous smile on his face as he didn't want to get in a fight on his first day at school, especially with a girl. The rainbow hair girl didn't bye it as she came right up to him and stared him right in his face, but before anything else could happen, a voice was heard from down the hall.
"Excuse me, what is going on here?" all three turned and saw a tall, light purple woman standing at the end of the all. She had blue eyes, wavy purple hair with white highlights, and wear a short sleeved violet dress shirt along with a purple skirt and high heels.
"V-Vice Principal Luna." Fluttershy said as she got nerves from seeing the vice principal standing there, and then the three noticed that the halls were empty and they were all alone with the vice principal. She stood there for a moment until Raves spoke up.
"Umm, well. We just had a misunderstanding. I bumped into Fluttershy here, so I helped pick them up and then this, ummm. What was your name?" Raves asked as he was not sure of the rainbow hair girl next to him.
"Rainbow Dash." she said still glaring at him.
"Alright, Rainbow Dash thought I was making fun of her and picking on her by taking her paper. So, she tried to protect her." Raves said as he looked at her with the hope it was enough for her. She stared at him for a second, and then she turned to Fluttershy as she spoke a the calmest voice she had.
"Is that right, FLuttershy?" she asked as she smiled at the girl still on her knees and who was not looking up, and she got a nod from her. Which made both Dash and Lune smile. She then looked at the three and added, "Alright, you three are free to go. But you must not be late like this to classes again. Understand?"
"Yes mama." the three say as she turned and walked away. Raves then handed Dash Fluttershy's papers and then he headed towards his home room. The second he entered it, all the eyes laid on him as he was late and every one whispered as to why he was late. Raves smiled as he stepped inside and then saw the teacher jester him to take a seat. Raves nodded and proceeded to take a seat near the middle of the room. Once he sat down, he waited for the teacher to explain the rules of the school and he place his hand under his chin as he hated to wait. As he waited, he saw the girl beside him had dropped a notebook when she reached for a pin. So, Raves reached down to pick it up and offered it to her.
"Hey, you dropped this." he said as she turned to look at him and his heart instantly skipped a beat. She was had lovely, wavy purple hair, light purple eyes, and wear a white blouse, purple skirt with three diamonds on the left side, and a pair a boots with a diamond on them.
"Oh, why thank you darling." the girl said as she reached out and took the notebook back and then turned to face the front. As she did this, Raves notice the name on the book said Rarity. He smiled as he finally found something interesting to think about.
After home room and the first two period, Raves had lost all interest as he did not see the girl called Rarity at all and now it was his lunch period. He bought his lunch at in the cafeteria and then he took their open campus as he headed off into the field of next to the school. After finishing his hamburger, fries, and store smoothie, he laid up against the statue and stared at the sky as he thought of what had happen so far, and he was very bored.
Meanwhile in the castle of Cantorlot, Celestia was standing in front of the mirror that served as a door way to another world. She calmly looked at the mirror and just watched her reflection as she waited for Twilight to return. As she stared into the mirror, her reflection began to dance and move around on it own.
"Not now Discord." se said as she closed her eyes and her reflection looked annoyed at her. Then it stepped closer and out came the devious creature made up of pats of other creature.
"Oh, come on Celestia. Turn that frown upside down." he said as he came up behind her and pulled her lips to make a forced smile, but she in not mood for this.
"Leave before I have Twilight and the others turn you back to stone." she said coldly, which shocked Discord.
"Why Celestia, I never thought I'd hear something that cold from you." he said as he slithered around and whispered in ear, "I like it."
"Leave!" she yelled as she used her magic to remove him from around her.
"Fine, I'm gone. See ya." he said with a wink as he vanished from the room, ad then Twilight ran into the room with the other elements and Spike.
"Princess Celestia, we have the Elements of Harmony and I'm ready to go back to save both worlds." she said with a smile as she wanted to see her human friends again and was wondering how Sunset Shimmer was doing, but her smile vanished when she saw Celestia shake her head no.
"I'm sorry Twilight, but you can't go back there." Celestia said as she stood over the six ponies and dragon with a serious look on her face.
"B-b-but why?" Twilight asked as she was not ready for Celestia words.
"One: The moon isn't right and the portal will not open fully." she explained why she was keeping her student from returning to that world.
"And the second reason?" Twilight asked.
"You and the elements made to imbalance in the first place. So, more will make it worst." she said as she looked calmly at the ponies.
"Then why did you have me bring them here?" Twilight asked as she was confused for what Celestia was planning.
"I need them to save both worlds." she said as she used her magic to take the six gems from Twilight, and then she focused on them with all her might and then suddenly, there was a bright light. Once it cleaared, Twilight and the others noticed that next to their elements, was a white sphere, and then using her remaining strength , Celestia throw them into the mirror, and then they went through it, which shock all seven of them.
"B-b-but?" was all that Twilight could think of saying as she and the other stared at the mirror.
"There enough magic left to send them, but it's one way. That's why you couldn't go." she explained to Twilight.
"Oh, well. I'm pretty sure the girl can handle this with Sunset Shimmer." Twilight said as she looked at the mirror.
"No, the ones that must wield the Elements this time must not have a pony counter part." Celestia said as she looked at the mirror and notice Twilight look at her.
"You mean like me?" she asked, and Celestia nodded.
Meanwhile back to the human world, Raves had nodded off and was relaxing against the statue. But he was woken up suddenly as the statue began to shake. Raves quickly stood up ad turned to see it began to glow.
"What the-" he was cut off as a sphere beamed out of it, making him duck, and then another, another, and then another until there were six in a circle above Raves' head. He watched as they got higher and higher into the air, and then suddenly they began to spin around at an eminence speed and then five of them launched into five different directions. Raves watched as they flow off, but failed to notice the sixth one was still around. Raves looked up just in time for the sphere to shoot straight towards him and he screamed as he was bathed in white light.
TBC.
Well, that was it for the first chapter and I hope you like it. Please read and review, and tell me how it is. Also, I would like to hear your thoughts on what could be in the box from the Tree of Harmony?
