Ok I have been getting review's saying that the story is crap and all that. So I don't think I should continue with it. But thanks to all of the other people that have put in nice reviews thank you.
Although I will continue the story if you guys want me to I will be taking votes if more people say for me to stop I will stop. If more say I should continue then I will.
Sorry to all the people that are enjoying the story and for your sake I hope to continue it.