Thank you all so much for your patience! I have had this Chapter written for a very long time but I've been very scared to actually post it. The next chapter is nearly finished so I don't think it will be too long coming along and it also holds a major key to the plot so I want it out as soon as I can!
Important - At the end of the chapter will be more Q and A along with some links to my own interpretations to how Harry would look and such things!
I pushed the door to the training room open, strolling inside, still laughing with Greyback following soon after me.
"You're looking to get yourself killed pup." He looked down at me with a grin on his face. I smirked back up at him.
"Pup?" He chuckled, his voice deep and rough, which fitted his wild look perfectly.
"I have no idea, my wolf seems to see you as something to protect and I tend to listen to my 'instincts'." He crossed his arms as if assessing me.
"So… You're wolf wants to protect me?... Usually doesn't that mean that? Oh shit, please tell me you don't think I'm your mate or something! Don't get me wrong, you're good looking and that rough wild look you have going really works for you but… just no…" He looked at me for a second before he barked out with laughter, myself following moments after.
"You sure are an odd one pup." He stepped closer to me, leaning his head down to my neck, and then inhaled deeply. "You smell of death, yet somehow similar to… creatures."
"Death and creatures… Brilliant, just what I need." I paused for a moment, thinking about his words. "Hang on. Why 'creatures' and not 'a creature'?" I looked up at him as he stepped back with a perplexed expression.
"I'm not sure how, but you smell like not just a human or a creature but what I could only explain as a mix. Not a hybrid but just simply a mix. You're still human but yet you smell like werewolf, vampire, changeling and some I don't even recognise. I've never smelt anything like it before." I let out a loud groan and started pacing in front of the still confused werewolf.
"For Merlin's sake! Why is it always me who has to be a freak? Aren't I weird enough with my stupid affinity to wandless magic, my love for blood, my ridiculously scarred body, my fucked up mind, and not to mention my apparent death wish!"
I could feel my aura starting to burst through my restraints. My eyes started glowing and a slight black mist started to swarm at my feet as I paced even quicker. Two strong arms quickly wound around my own and brought me to a standstill. I could feel deep breaths against my throat.
"Calm down. Relax your body and clear your mind." I closed my eyes and slowly began to relax back into the arms supporting me. "Good. Now defend yourself as best as you can without any spells!"
I was harshly pushed forward, nearly tripping over but catching myself in time to dodge a powerful punch that would of caught me in the ribs, probably breaking a few with the impact. I kept dodging as more hits were thrown at me.
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Greyback landed quite a lot of hits and I could feel the bruises already forming and hoped that was all the damage amounted to. I could feel myself starting to tire but I carried on as if nothing was wrong. If I want to get stronger I can't give up when I get a little tired.
I yet again ducked underneath Greyback's arm but didn't expect the fist that followed straight after it. It hit me straight in the chest; I felt immense pain as I was flung across the room, landing in a heap by the door.
"Shit Pup! I know I said not to use your magic but if you're about to get hit like that you can use it to reduce the impact!" I looked up at the werewolf who was now kneeling at my side. I grinned and stood up not even wincing at the pain.
"This is nothing, come on lets continue." I let my grin drop and moved into what I had recently found as the best stance to ensure I couldn't be moved very easily. Greyback walked so he was standing in front of me.
"I don't think so, I heard those bones cracking and if you move too much you could end up puncturing a lung." Without warning he picked me up and carried me across the large room to some chairs and laid me down across them. I attempted to sit up but was pushed back down roughly.
"Look I'm fine! I've had much worse and done nothing about it! I want to continue and if you don't let me within the next few seconds I'm going to use you as my next training dummy for new spells!" I let my aura slip out slightly and wind its way around his form threateningly.
Before I could continue with my threat the doors were abruptly thrown open and Voldemort strode in with a rather irritated look on his face, but from his aura I could read a hint of worry.
"What happened? I was doing paperwork when I felt your pain through the connection." I sat up, without a complaint from Greyback this time, and turned towards the Dark Lord.
"I just got hit and didn't expect it, I'm fine." I sent a glare at Greyback but he obviously wasn't letting go of his 'instincts'.
"That is a lie Pup and you know it. Your ribs are broken and need to be fixed, soon." I sneered at him before turning back to Voldemort, a brow raised on his forehead.
"Your definition of 'fine' must be very different to rest of us. Fenrir you may leave, I will take care of this idiot." With a slight bow the werewolf was soon on his way, only pausing at the door to look back for a second before continuing.
With a wave of Voldemort's hand the door was locked and a silencing ward was put up. His body then started morphing into that of Tom Riddle once again.
"So tell me again what happened." He didn't seem all too pleased but I figured that was because I had taken him away from his all too important work.
"Greyback told me to defend myself without using my magic, so I did." I shrugged and moved to stand up but a hand on my shoulder pushed me back down.
"And let me guess, you didn't think to use it to lessen the blows he actually landed on you?"
"He said no magic." Riddle let out a sigh and placed a hand to his forehead.
"You're the biggest imbecile, with a constant death wish, that I've ever met. Take off your cloak and lie down." I followed his instructions while muttering to myself that I was fine and would heal soon anyway.
I watched as he cast a few spells and winced slightly when he pressed his fingers to one of the damaged ribs. He kept pressing the area at different angles before moving to another rib. Each jab caused a flash of pain and as he kept doing it repeatedly, and I could see no sense in it, my anger was starting to rise until it finally broke after a relatively harsh poke.
"Why can't you just bloody well heal me already? Why haven't you just cast a spell to see the damage and then another to fix them? Are you really that much of a sadist that you have to keep poking and prodding to cause more pain?" I gave his arm a shove making him stand above me.
"I can't heal the bones until I know how they have broken, you ungrateful brat. The diagnostic spells can only tell me where the problems are and if bones are broke or muscles are torn, however they cannot tell me how they are broken, so I cannot just simply use a spell to snap the bone back in place because if one of the ribs is too close to the lungs when I cast the spell it could rupture the lung and possibly cause it to collapse. Oh, and yes, I am that much of a sadist but for once I'm hurting you to help. Now lie back down or I'm just going to knock you out and leave your bones to heal in the wrong positions so we have to break them again to fix them, okay?"
Satisfied with the answer, and feeling a little bit embarrassed for my outburst, I lay back down and watched as the Dark Lord set back to work. After a bit more prodding and investigation he moved slightly back and looked up at me.
"There should be no problem, the ribs all seem to be in the right places to be of no harm to the lungs, but to be sure I will call in Severus, as he is as capable as any healer." I waved my hand in the air dismissing the idea.
"I just want to be up and about as fast as I can so can't you just heal me now?" He sent a slight glare at me, most likely for my demanding tone. He sighed then took out his wand while saying.
"Fine. However as you know I am no healer and if this does go wrong, I am not at fault. You're the only one to blame for being such an imbecile on your first lesson anyway." I sent him a small grin and nodded.
He made a swift movement with his wand and I felt the first rib snap back into place. It was as painful as them breaking the first time but I motioned for Riddle to carry on with a nod as he looked up. He then moved to the next and the exact same thing happened. The he moved to the final one but he paused.
"This is the one I'm not sure about." He looked back up at me.
"Look I'll do it myself if you want. A simple bone fixing spell should do it." I moved to take my wand out of my boot where I had placed it this morning but Riddle had caught my wrist before I could reach it and with the other hand took my wand.
"That is an even more idiotic idea than any of your other ones made today. Just wait here while I go call for Severus." He got up to leave, taking my wand with him. I watched him leave the room then I diverted my attention to my damaged rib. I could see the skin starting to bruise and could only imagine how bad it was going to look tomorrow. I poked around the rib and winced as I found the break. I could feel how one side of the bone dipped down underneath the other. Surprisingly I was actually quite proud; it was a pretty good break.
It really couldn't be that hard to fix. It doesn't feel like it's near my lung... then again, how would it feel if it would be? Would I even feel it? I looked back at the door and pushed out my senses to see if Severus had arrived yet. Oh fuck this. I can't tell if he's here yet and this is just stupid time wasting.
I moved my hand above my chest and focused on the area where the break was. "Osrecto."
I felt the usual pain of the bone snapping back into place and released a breath I didn't know I was holding. I slowly sat up smirking, that was until the pain didn't seem to fade like it did with the others. Slowly my breathing became more laboured and I realised that Riddle's worry was not all that stupid anymore. I felt like slapping myself but instead I called to Riddle in my mind.
'Tom?' It was getting even more difficult to breath and I started to slightly panic as I knew if something wasn't done soon I could be in big trouble. 'Shit. Tom! I fixed it myself and you were right. Come quickly, I can't breathe!'
'YOU WHAT? For Merlin's sake! After this I am locking you in a room! You hold part of my soul! Can't you at least take better care of yourself?' I winced slightly with the fury that was passing over the link and was causing my scar to burn furiously.
I didn't even notice when he rushed into the room with Snape following swiftly behind him. I felt like it was nearly impossible to breathe now and I could feel myself getting tired, it didn't help that my head felt very light and dizzy. I could hear voices above me but I couldn't focus much on what was really happening.
"We'll take him to the potions lab-"
"This potion should repair the puncture and I have another to-"
"What's happening-?"
"I don't know- reacting- strange-"
"Well- fix it-!"
"Were losing him."
"What do you mean-?"
"He's dying."
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Please for the love of God don't kill me! As I said at the top there are more chapters to come so please don't lose faith!
Fanart (I guess):
http : / / fav . me / d487wk2 This is a scar meme so you have an idea what his body would look like. In this drawing Harry looks a lot older, taller and bulkier, this is because this is what he was first going to look like! But I loved the idea of him being smaller and underestimated a lot better.
http : / / fav . me / d3ikroy Here Harry also looks older but I expect that by the end of the story this is what he is undoubtedly going to look like.
http : / / fav . me / d487vmi Just his flirty personality coming though :3
http : / / fav . me / d487w10 Read the description for info and please! I know Lucius doesn't look any good but I wasn't really focusing on him .
http : / / fav . me / d3ikt4j Harry and Tom... Lets just say Harry's fleeing for his life...
http : / / fav . me / d3ikpk3 Just a small animation of a chibi Harry running!
God I hope they all worked... if not there is a link on my profile to my Deviantart where you can find them all!
Q and A:
WynterRavenheart said: You do have a nice plot and a nice way of writing it, but I was a bit disappointed you went for the 'the Dursleys torture Harry and no one notices' plot.
Answer: I understand where you are coming from but I've kind of put my own spin on it. I think this is more of a 'The Dursley's torture Harry and no one notices because Harry doesn't want them to and if they know *cough*Dumbledore*cough* then they don't care or encourage it' And I know this has been done many times before but its honestly the only way I could see this story starting. When I started writing this I knew Harry had to finally snap and kill the Dursley's and the way I wrote it was the best option I had in mind and to be honest I don't want to change it as I'm incredibly happy with how it came out.
darkserpentcat said/asked: When I was looking at your answer's to some reviews you got about Fenrir/Harry before Voldemort/Harry have you also ever considered a threesome between them.
I don't mean Fenrir and Voldemort 'touch' each other since I can't see either of them bottoming for each other but I mean like share Harry
Now I know neither one of them are into the whole sharing thing, especially Voldemort with Harry being a Horcrux, but think of how funny it could be to see them arguing over Harry and if you do a creature Harry or soul mate concept that could also be interesting.
Will Harry be flirting with the other male Death Eater's such as Rabastan and Rodolphus, Rodolphus never had a happy marriage so it is entirely possible to do that,
Answer: Wow... This review certainly brightened up my day when I got it! –Had a totally good laugh- Erm... No, Harry will not be shared at all. Voldey is very possessive of anything that is his and with the added aspect of Harry being a Horcrux I think it would be even worse. That doesn't mean things can't happen though! Since it's in Harry's personality he will most definitely be flirting with other death eaters.
also could you actually describe the appearance of those two Death Eaters and any important ones that were never properly described or shown in the books and movies?(I have pics on my profile if it helps)
Answer: I shall be describing the main ones as Harry has lessons with them because I think this is the time when Harry would really have a good look at them.
Addictive Label said: the relation ship shouldnt be to awkeward as they live to 150-200.. so its not
uncommon for one of the party to be older... on another note.. i do not mind Yaoi/slash but i appriciate male/female A lot more.. like in this i would have loved Harry/Bella.. but it is good so far and cant complain to much so far.
Answer: I'm afraid this will be slash. I have toyed with the idea of some Harry/Bella but I'm having trouble fitting it in. Just for you though I will attempt something close to it!
Tempest S asked: Technically, isn't a prince higher in rank than a lord anyway?
Answer: I'm not too sure but I would assume so. However, when I think of a Lord I think of a respectable man who knows what he's doing and has a large amount of influence over everyone. When I think of a prince I think of a boy or young man who doesn't know everything of the world yet and doesn't have the amount of respect as a Lord as he's still a young man who still has to prove himself. I think Voldemort would use Prince for Harry because it's exactly how he sees him, to Voldey Harry is still a young boy/man who is still to prove himself and let's be honest Voldey wouldn't of automatically accepted Harry as an equal (so another Lord) as he still wants all the control. I hope that makes sense.
Soratanaka asked: A bit Mary Sue, eh?
Answer: Indeed, it does seem like it hmm? However, this doesn't mean that Harry's not going to have problems or that there arn't others who are as powerful as him.
evilqueen06 asked: In the DE meeting with everybody is he still going to be that glamored
little blond boy?
Answer: No, he was just messing about. He will most likely be himself in the next one. I think that we will be seeing more glamours being abused by Harry though in the near future.
Cait Pen asked: WHEN ARE THEY GOING TO **. I want some SMUT up ins, or I'll go insane. ***. Please. Thank you.
Answer: This review really made my day! I'm not sure when that will be happening as I don't want it to come out of nowhere. But I'm honestly as eager as you to get something in this story!
Justpucky asked: Love the combination of Dark Violence Harry, and Simple Mischeivous Harry. Even with the Dark Leanings, Harry still bonded with Sirius, Is he going to vent some of his anger and angst on Bella? Can't wait for your update.
Answer: You question will be answered soon! Probably in the next chapter if everything goes as planned.
Miharuxchan asked: Muy buena historia, me gusto mucho. vas a continuar subiendo?
Answer: I had to use google to translate this so I hope I got your question right . Yes I am continuing with this but as I hopefully said at the top if this chapter I'm in my second year of college so finding time for writing is quite hard. But I will still write this until its finished and my hands bleed!
Vampires2rocks asked: Just one question...is Tom and Harry gonna get together here?
Answer: Yes Harry and Tom will get together. This story was labelled in the summary as HPLV so it most defiantly will happen.