Hey people that I'm hoping for a little present on my birthday! Yep! Working on my birthday! Seems like a sucky idea hu? NOPE. I like it. I woke up in the middle of tje night and it's my birthday! YEAH! Now I only want one thing from you guys... a comment! A fuckin' review! I really am hoping for one. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! Review on my story! For my Birthday! PLEASE!?

Sorry if it's a bit too short. It's my birthday and I'm working on it! Sheesh!

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Daxter blushed hard as each passing moments moved on. Kissing her again, it was wonderful. Daxter knew Jak was enjoying it here and there, whenever he bit on her lip, ever so gentle. He grabbed her hips to hold her. Jak blushed as if it was new. Daxter chuckled in response. "It's okay, Jak." Daxter smiled. "It's okay..." Daxter began kissing her cheek so he won't let her calm down. He slide down to her collarbone and began sucking on it. Jak moaned from pleasure. For a moment, he honestly thought she was trying to say 'Dax'. But he took it out of his head and continued. She ccontinued to moan, making Daxter believe that she was trying to talk. Daxter soon got the urge to pull it out of her. Daxter attack her neck harder every time. Waiting for a word.

"Duh..." He was sure Iif it was real or not. Was his mind trying to pull some prank on him? Or was the one thing he's been dieing to hear, actually there? He continued harder as he went. "Dah..." Daxter heard it, heard her. Daxter flipped her over because Jak was on the top. He pinned her down to the floor. He started kissing her other side. He hadto hear it. Make her say the words his been dieing to hear, heard. "Da-x..." She finally said his name.

"Jak, please tell me that your talking." Daxter took a break. She shooked her head 'no'. Daxter back away. "But, wait, what?" Daxter asked he soon felt like something was spinning him in a circle. He looked at his hand. They looked like it was in slow motion. He looked up at Jak. One problem, there were three. "Jak, go get Samos." Daxter blurred out. Jak looked at him funny. "Jak..." He reached his hand toward her. But it instantly felt like his body was a tonof bricks. He dropped to the floor. "Jak, go get Samos, now... Please! " He yelled with his last energy. He looked back at Jak to see her running toward the hut. Right before he past out...

Daxter woke up with pain in his back. He opened his eyes to his surroundings. There was Ottsel Keira and Samos. But no Jak. "Where's-... Jak?" Daxter asked with his voice all scratched up. Samos and Keira both jump where he talked. Keira walked up to Daxter and kneeled as if it helped.

"Daxter," Keira started and put a hand on his sshoulder.

"You've been in a comma for a month..."

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