I got my first "new" review and she thought it was good minus a few small mistakes. Thank You "TheAnnoyingVoice" for being so kind :] I also want to say thanks to those who faved, and followed! So here is chapter 2 and I hope you guys enjoy it.
B is for Beginning
Tired of seeing her best friend in the house, Xion decided to drag Roxas to the mall with her. He didn't expect to see anything or anyone interesting, but he decided to go anyway. Roxas threw on anything and quickly left the house with his best friend. He didn't like to admit it, but staying in doors all the time got boring.
When walking to the mall they didn't talk much. Roxas was a bit worried about his life. Was it only going to consist of this? Staying at home until his friends dragged him out the house? It wouldn't be that way though, not if he could he help it. Roxas knew exactly what he wanted,and that was someone to call his own.
"We're here", Roxas looked up at his friend. He felt bad for getting lost in his thoughts. Xion was taking him to the mall so he could have fun, not so he could sulk even more. "Sorry, for zoning out on you.", Xion grinned at Roxas to let him know it was alright. The teens walked in the mall and with out exchanging words the two of them went to FYE (1).
The store was huge, and it had a lot of cool things in it, but cool wasn't what Roxas was searching for. He made his around the store until he found the section where they kept all the music. It was his favorite part of the store, because it allowed him to get lost in something else. It took him away from his thoughts, and in away he felt free. Roxas went to his favorite listening station(2) that played various pop-rock songs. Eager to hear what was playing Roxas put the headphones. The song that was playing was Try by Pink.
Losing his self to the lyrics of the song, the world around Roxas disappeared. He hadn't noticed the fact that he closed his eyes and started humming out song eventually ended and Roxas eyes opened to a sight he didn't expect. In front of him was a tall, slim guy with fiery red hair. The guy was was smiling at him, which made him quite nervous.
"Ummm, were you waiting to listen next?" Roxas asked. He was embarrassed, and he didn't know why exactly. He quickly handed the guy the headphones and tried to walk off , but the guy had grabbed the the sleeve of his shirt.
"Sorry if I freaked you out. It's just you're very..." The guy didn't finish his sentence, instead he looked at Roxas in admiration. The boy who stood before seemed so perfect with his blond spiky hair, and a pair of blue eyes he would never forget. " You're very beautiful," Upon hearing the guy finish his sentence Roxas began to blush. Roxas heart started to race, and he was at a lost for words completely. Figuring actions speak louder than words, Roxas reached in his pocket and grabbed a pen, which he brought with him out of instinct, and wrote his name and number on the guy's hand.
The courage he had left quickly. Roxas ran out the store once he realized Xion wasn't in there anymore and he began to search other stores to find her. his mind began to think abut the events that just took place. He didn't even know the guys name, yet Roxas gave him his number. It felt right, and maybe it was. What if this guy was the beginning of something good.
1. FYE - A entertainment store that I love! It has anime, video games, movies, posters cut outs and anything you could think of honestly! Its an awesome store if you never been to one.
2. Listening Station - I have no Idea what's the proper name of one, but you know the thing where they have music playing in stores for you to listen to through head phones.
That's all! So what do you guys think? Was it good or bad? My vote is actually bad! D: I struggled alot with this chapter and it seems very crappy to me! Either way Review please!